Music is what makes me glad i'm alive. I love listening to the beat and pattern of the music. It makes me feel 100 times better when i'm sad.
Hey make sure you make I a capital letter like in I'm.
i'm is not supposed to be capital only I is capital
you did a good jpb.
You need to capitalize Y, and spell jpb as job.
You did not capitalize I'm
The I in I'm is supposed to be capitalized.
Good job Halli
Music makes me glad I'm alive because when I am at home I usually listen to music through my iPod. On my iPod most of my music is country music. My favorite type of music is country music. For country music my favorite country artist is Luke Bryan and Florida Georgia Line. I watched the CMA Awards.
You did a good job but you should try to stay a little more on topic.
My favorite sound is the sound of four-wheelers racing. It makes me think of my papa. Me and him used to race all the time and go camping. I miss that alot.
Did not spell alot like a lot.
I didn't see any mistakes you did a good job.
You need to make alot into a lot. I'm also sorry that you don't get to do that with your papa anymore.
You need to fix a lot. Otherwise it is good.
The sound of me laughing is one thing that makes me glad i'm alive. The sound of my family telling me that they love me and miss me. The sound of country music makes me glad. Another is when everyone is laughing at something that's not even funny. Finally the last thing i'm glad about is hearing my siblings talking or screaming or doing something that makes me glad i'm alive!!!!
You need to capitalize the I in I'm.
The sounds that make me glad that I'm alive are........ the sound of laughter when i make people laugh it makes me feel proud and happy.The sound of when the last bell rings of the day that lets me know that I can go home! The sound and sight of seeing and hearing that u got a 100% on a test. The sound of music makes me feel like I'm floating in air on a cloud. Hearing the whistle for a race lets me know to start running as fast as I can and believe that I can win. Hearing and seeing teamwork makes me feel happy.
Capitalize I, put a period after laugh and capitalize it, And put a space after all punctuation marks.
I hear this a million times a day, I hear the sound of friends being kind to others.I always hear god say everyday to have a nice and safe day.I hear the sound of life 24/7 the wind howling,the rain and thunder,the birds chirping in the morning.The most thing I hear that made me still be alive is my family saying be good stay safe and hearing them is the best thing I hear that makes me still alive. :D
"I hear the sound of life 24/7, howling, the rain and the thunder. The birds chirping in the morning."
good job no errors :)
The sound of pop music because when I listen to it is just makes me feel free. I feel like nothing is being pressured on me when I listen to music. I feel like I'm in whole other world. Music is a very helpful thing because when you are frustrated or mad, you can just plug in your head phones and calm down. That's why music is important to me.
I didn't find any mistakes. Awesome job!!
All I found was that when you said I feel like I'm in a whole other world you needed to add an a. Other than that you did a really great job!
I found no mistakes. Great job
Didn't find any mistakes! Great Job! :)
I love when my sister starts laughing. I also love when my brothers and family chatting and having fun. I love the sound of college football. I love hearing the crowd during wrestling meets. And last of all just my friends and I talking or hanging out. There are some sounds that make me glad i'm alive.
You can't start with AND but everything else is good
The sound that make me glad to be alive is music. My favorite kinds are rock, blues, and reggae. They all give me different feelings.Rock makes me want to be energetic and do fun things. Blues is more like being happy and sad at the same time. Reggae makes me want to just chill and not care about what's going on around me.
Didn't find any thing to fix good job Jake!
A sound that makes me glad that I'm alive is laughter. Laughter is probably one of the greatest things in life. I love when I can make someone sad happy just by making a joke and start laughing. Everyone laughs different because nobody is the same. Laughing is like the most unique about you.
A sound that makes me happy is laughter. I love making somebody happy that is sad. Laughter is so great because it is so easy to make someone happy just by laughing. Music is also one of my favorite sounds. If I am having a bad day I just listen to music and it makes me clam and happy!
I didn't find any mistakes good job!
I did not find any mistakes.....Nice Job!
I didn't find any mistakes, awesome job!
Make sure you spell calm right but otherwise great job!!
Tory you should have left a comment instead of replying. That's an honest mistake and people have done that too. But I thought I would tell you.
I didn't find anything that you did wrong. Laughter is a great thing to write about because if somebody is sad you can make them laugh and they are all happy again.Great Job.!
In the last sentence "thing" should go in between unique and about. Otherwise no mistakes. Nice job!!
Great Job! couldn't find anything wrong! :)
Molly, I don't understand sentence number 3. In sentence 5 you forgot the word thing. " Laughing is the most unique thing about you."
Good job! I didn't find anything but one tinsey mistake. On the last sentence you say "Laughing is like the most unique about you" and you should have said unique thing about you. But cool beans, that was awesome sauce!!
I sound that makes me feel alive is laughter. I loved laughing as a kid. As you grow up things get a little bit serious. You also don't laugh as often. But laughter will always stay in this world and never leave.
You put "I sound that makes me feel alive is laughter" it should be like "The" or "A".
I love the sound of a hit in football, it's bone crunching like chewing on a chip. I love this sound because it means it's football season. The reasons I like football and the hits is because there is no other sport like it!!!! The bone crunching hits make you glad your there and watching! If you ever can on a Friday night come and watch a York Duke Football Game. BOOM! That's the sound of the cannon when we score, and if you listen closely sometimes the sound of a bone crunching hit!!!!!
Good job! No mistakes.
The sounds that make me happy i'm alive are.The sound of my friends talking to each other.My game as it starts.The crisp sound of food being cooked.Also my dogs barking.
I could not find any mistakes, good job
The sounds that make me happy that I'm alive are,.........
You need to put the sounds that make me happy I'm alive.
I would stay by music because there're some great songs I like. Plus it makes me happy when a good song turns on like American Kids. Music always make me happy when I like the song as long as its not Taylor Swift she is horrible. Other wise I would stay by music for a long time. And that is why I stay bye music.
You need to change make to makes when you said, "Music always makes me happy..." Also, bye needs to be by when you said, "And that is why I stay by music. Plus, you can't start a sentence with 'and'. Other than that, it's good. :)
Something that makes me glad that i'm alive is my playlist. When I get home from school one of the first things i do is plug in my headphones and just chill. My music makes me feel like I am a free spirit. The music blocks out everything else in the world and all you hear is the rhythm and beat. My playlist takes me to a whole new world.
Make sure to capitalize the letter I in the words "I'm" and "I". Otherwise though, I thought you did a pretty good job.
The sound that makes me glad that i'm alive is classical music.I like classical music because it makes me feel like i'm in a forest. And all the birds are chirping .And I feel the cool wet grass on my bear feet. and i just love the way it makes me feel.And that's why i love classical music.
You need to put I and I'm
Country music makes me feel alive, because you can sing to it and when you listen to it all your emotions just come out. Another thing that makes me feel alive is laughter because you are so happy and silly when you laugh. I also love being outside with nature and the fresh air.
I didn't find any mistakes. Good job.
The sound of my family together. But when we go camping because we sit around the campfire and eat so many smores and laugh that is my favorite sound. I allow like when my and I are hanging out and we just look at each other and start laughing. And I like the sound of my grandpas boat we go on when we go camping. I love the brees when we go really fast.
You need to fix "my and I" but you did a great job!
My two favorite sounds in the whole world. My dad's laugh is probably my favorite because I don't hear it that often. I feel a little bit happier when I see him or my friends laughing. There's not enough words to describe the feeling I get when I can just shut out the world with my favorite songs blaring in my ear. Long story short, I love music and laughter.
Good job ;) no mistakes!
Great job I love this I don't see any mistakes.
good job :)
Music makes me feel that I am alive because it calms me down.I don't have a favorite kind of music.It also makes me feel that It also makes me feel free.
You forgot a space between your period and start of your sentence. And your sentence (It also makes me feel that also makes me feel free). That sentence dose not make scene.
I love music i always have. Ever since i was a baby when ever i got frustrated i would listen to music. I dont know why it makes me happy. My favorite singers are Fallout Boy or Jim Johnson. I just love music!!
You have some lowercase I's
You need to make all the Is capitol letters.
You need to put the sound that make me happy i'm alive are.
You need to put I.
You forgot to capitalize your I's other than that good job
You need to capitalize I, and I always have loved music to!
The sound of laughter makes me glad I am alive. I love it because when someone is laughing it means they are happy and having fun. I also like the sound of music. It is so good because you can just put you earbuds in and hang out. Laughing and music are the two most important sounds to me.
Besides making the mistake of "you" instead of "your", no mistakes:)
The sound that makes me feel alive is music. Music makes me feel alive because it makes me feel better when I'm feeling sad or mad. Also laughter because the sound of peoples voices feeling happy. Also the sound of nature. That's what make me feel alive.
It should be people's otherwise no mistakes
Good job Meaghan. No mistakes.
I have two different favorite sounds. My first favorite sound would be the sound of country music. Whenever I am sad or bored, the first thing I will do is listen to country. My second favorite sound would be the sound of my uncles derby cars. One of my favorite things to do is watch both of my uncles race.
I didn't find any mistakes, good job!
Rap and hip hop is my sound. I listen to Lacrae a cristion raper who really inspires me. I love it so much. It makes me happy. It help with my faith in God. It is awesome.
Christian is spelled wrong.
christian* rapper* helps* other than that good job.
Add some puncuation such as !
Sounds that make me feel alive are laughter of my friends around me.Other things are the sound of my dog barking,and my family during holidays. Doesn't it make you feel better to hear a pet or family and friends getting along and having a good time?
Great job Trenton
Good job Trenton I didn't find any mistakes.
The sound of music makes me glad that I'm alive. Whenever I'm sad listening to country music makes me so much happier because it reminds me of very good times. Also the sound of squeaky shoes on the volleyball quart makes me so so happy. It reminds me of the team. The best of all is the sound movies playing, because who doesn't love Netflix?
I love the sound of my family and friends talking. I love how we can have a good conversation. Everyone in my family gets along and share smiles and laughs with each other. We haven't seen my family and friends from my old town for a long time so it makes me miss them even more! I hope to see them soon for my birthday weekend!
I found no mistakes.
I hear this sound a lot in my day. I listen to music everyday and I enjoy every single minute of it. It's like actually going to the concert with friends. I'm just sittin' in the my chair rocking out. If I can't listen to music in my day I'll will be sad about it.
The sounds of thunder and rain at night are sounds that make me feel that I am alive. I always have loved watching the storms roll in. The crash and bang of the thunder makes me feel great. I have loved the sounds of storms since I was about 5. It just makes me feel good inside.
Instead of 5 you should type five. Other then that no errors. ;)
The sounds that make me glad that I am alive is music. Also laughter. When people call my name. Those are just a few sounds.
well I really like the sound of pads popping at practice. I like the sound of kids talking to friends in the halls. There are a lot of sounds I like. Basketball bouncing on the floor. I like the sound of silence sometimes.
I like the sound of music and games. I like a lot of sounds. Such as kids laughing, keys typing and much more sounds.
You need capitalzation
Put a period after capitalization! You also spelled capitalization wrong.
You need capatilization.
Great job josh
The sound of music makes me glad I'm alive. I like to just sit and listen to it and it calms my nerves and makes me happy. You can just sit and listen to the different instruments, and the different people singing in harmony. I also like when you listen to music with your friends and it turns into a dancing and singing contest! There are so many reasons why music is amazing and it makes me glad I'm alive.
To me the sound that makes me glad I'm alive is my dog barking. He always wakes me up in the morning. To most people it is the most annoying sound that they will ever hear but it calms me down. More than any other sound that I hear. I don't know what I will do when he is not around to wake me up.
My friend Zach it looks as if you are in the clear.
I love the sound of raindrops hitting the roof or the ground also I just love rain drops in general I love how cold they are their texture I also like how often it rains I also love sitting in the rain on nice cloudy days or on cold days I don't know why I like rain at all it seems like a thing most people do like though.
You forgot to put in some periods.
After texture you need to put a comma.
My favorite sound is music. It makes me happy or gives me a boost in the mornings or when I'm sad. In the morning when I'm walking to the bus and waiting in line I always have my ear buds in, at school when we get free time I love listening to music. When we have homework to take home sometimes I will listen to music and before I go to bed I am listening to music.
After the sentence 'In the morning when I'm walking to the bus and waiting in line I always have my earbuds in, at school when we get free time I love listening to music.' Put a period after in, and then start a new sentence. Good job!
Humming is a good sound to make. It could get annoying most of the time. If you hum you have to do it at the right time and not just random. I feel like you should have a reason to. Also have a good level not hum like your trying to communicate with someone in China.
Humming is a good noise to make, but it could get annoying most of the time. If you hum, you have to do it at the right time, and not just random. I feel you should have to have a reason to hum. Also, you need to hum at a good level, not like you are trying to communicate with someone in China.
Music and laughter make me feel alive. I listen to a lot of different types of music and every one makes me happy. Which brings me to my next one laughter. Laughter to me is a symbol of a happy life. When your laughing you are expressing yourself and being silly. I love to try to make people laugh that may need it.
Very good I could not find anything wrong !
What sounds make me happier is listening to music lots of people listen to music to calm their spirits.Another sound that makes me happy is kittens meowing a kittens mew is very soothing.
What makes me feel alive is the sound of that cool refreshing breeze from the wind. And the rustling leaves in the wind. Then you take a breath and feel alive.I also like the sound of the rushing water from a waterfall and in the waterfall you see a rainbow from the sunlight. Sometimes if I am around the stuff that makes me feel alive I push myself harder.Those are the things that make me feel alive.
The sound of football makes me feel alive. When people tackle someone and you can here the pads. Sometimes at the York dukes football games the cannon goes off. When the sound of the ball is kicked to the opposing team or in the field goal. But one of my favorite is when the quarterback says hike and then I know that the real season has started. Also when the sound of helmets clashing, and smashing together. The End hi Josh
Put a period after hi Josh.
Didn't find any mistakes, great job!
Mine is music. If music wasn't in my life I would not be the person I am today. Music is a big thing in my family. One time we were at a condo and we were in a hangout room there and my grandad made all of us a song book. So we sang all the music really loud and some other people there just listened to us singing.
I didn't find any mistakes. Good job Gracie.
No mistakes !! :):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):) Bye
Music is what makes me feel alive. Especially the music that I love it helps me feel better when i'm down.
Music is what makes me glad I am alive. Music lets me focus more on homework and what i am suppose to be doing. I love to listen to music because it makes me fell happy. It also makes me feel like I can do anything I put my heart to. I love to listen to music when I am doing homework because it helps me focus and understand what I am doing. When I listen to music I listen to the words and I try to find out what the song is trying to tell the listeners.
The sound of my friends talking that's what makes me feel alive.When my friends laugh I love their laugh.My friends make me feel alive because what is the point of life if you don't have the best friends you could ever have.
good job found no errors :)
A sound that makes me feel alive is laughter. This sound expresses a lot about people because I don't think there would be very much happiness in the world without laughter. I love to make people laugh when they're sad because it makes me feel good about myself and it tells me I have made someone else feel better!
Good job Abby. I didn't find any mistakes.
I would probably say that music and the sound of nature makes me feel glad. When I listen to music I love to listen to the bass of the song.Its just so cool to here the boom da boom in the background. I also love the sound of nature because for me that is what calms me down and stress free. I like when I hear the birds chirp and the wind blow but, I also like to here the thunder crack and she the lightning.
The sound that makes me glad, and makes me know that I am alive, is laughter. It tells people that that person is happy, and not gloomy and sad. Laughter can turn a person's day around; from horrible to hysterical. It makes people know that you are safe, and well. Laughter can also turn someone else's day to good. The sound of laughter is like music to people's ears.
Good job! No mistakes and it sounds great.
music is what makes me glad I am alive. My favorite type is country. It is just because I like the way it sounds.
Damon, When you are writing always make sure you start with a capital letter.
The thing that makes me happy to be alive is music! I love music I try to do most of my work with music. I dance,clean and work out with music ! To me music is like a new batch of brownies or cupcakes! Music brings joy to my family and friends. Its like a cold breeze on a 100 degree day .I just love music !
The sound that makes me glad I'm alive is thunder and rain. I love the way the rain sounds on the roof of my house and the way the thunder shakes the whole neighborhood. On a stormy day I sit down and watch the lighting burst with light.
I smile as I hear music playing softly somewhere. My pencil ends up tapping to the beat. Music is so much a part of my world. Most people know that it doesn't even have to be American music. I will listen to Korean, Japanese, any kind you can think of.
To me the sentence "Music is so much a part of my world" does not make sense.
You did a great job.
The very sound that makes me happy to be alive would be when I am out at the lake. The frogs are croaking, the crickets are chirping, and the locust are buzzing. That is the sound that makes me happy that I am alive.
There are 4 things that make me happy that I am alive. 1- The first thing that makes me happy that I am alive is music. Music creates a new mood for everything. Sad music, sad emotion. 2- The second thing that makes me happy that I'm alive is reading. Reading takes me to a whole new world! Reading is amazing! And last but not least. 3- The third thing that makes me happy that I'm alive is the sound of people smacking a volleyball. Volleyball is my favorite sport my far!
You said that there was 4 things that made you happy and you only wrote 3. Also i'm not sure whether you meant to but you put " my far" instead of by far
You did a great job. I see no errors.
The things that make me say I am alive is football and wrestling. Football is one of the best spots in the world. Football is sweaty And hot but I still love it. Then wrestling is my favorite of them all. I get most off you people out there are basketball fans, but I'm a wrestling fans.
Hey Chase you spelled sports spots and you capitalized and but other than that nice job.
You capitalized And and it should be and, and you wrote off instead of of and you wrote I'm a wrestling fans.
The sound that makes me glad that I am alive is the buzzer of the clock going off in the basketball game that you just won. Or the timer going off on my grandmas oven. Me and my grandma always used to make cinnamon rolls on the weekends but that stopped when I was 6. I was in Pre-School the morning she died of brain cancer. I was young and didn't know what that was but know I make my grandmas recipe every weekend like we used to do.
good job Ty I could not find any errors ;)
This was very good and i'm sorry about your grandma the only error I found was you put know and you need to spell now . Everything else was great!
The sound that makes me glad I am alive is the "Ahhhhhhh" sound that christian songs make. It is quiet, uses low soft notes, and it is super relaxing. I love it when it sounds like the person who is singing it is opera. It is hard to explain why it relaxes me, but it does. I love christian music.
cool i found no errors
Maddie I love yours, and there were no mistakes.
Make sure you use correct capitalization and punctuation.
The sound that makes me happy that I am alive is the sound of my kids laughing. I love this sound. It makes me smile all over.