what ever happened the dog did it ^_^
What ever happened the dog did it.
I rolled a 4 no spelling errors
Rolled a 4
no spelling ares
Rolled a four.
No spelling errors.
Rolled a four.
* Capitalize Whatever
I saw some errors,but with the number I rolled you did pretty good.. Altho it looks like you tried to skip work.
rolled a four Whatever should be capitalized.
Dear Mr.owner guy
I am telling you i did that for you that paper stuff is always attacking your but .So i was just defending you ,I was in the tub because the toilet paper attacked back. I was just helping out and did you pick up my food. from Mr. cuddle
Rolled a 1.
capitalize your I's and space after periods
Dear so called "owner",
The reason I made such a mess is because I don't like you! I made this mess so that you would bow down to me and clean it up. You think your all that in your nice fancy bed, while i have to sleep on the floor! You are selfish and don't even get me top of the line food! By the way, The generic brand does not taste good! So that's why I did this, because I dispise You! I hope you hate it so much that you get rid of me, so I can go to a GOOD owner
Please capitalize your i to I. thank you !!!
I rolled a 4
nice job reed
you did really good
I am very sorry i made a mess but you bought a dog and i hate you for that. But i am sorry because i used you're toothbrush to clean the toilet,
I shredded all the toilet paper to i am currently hiding in the bath tub i hope there is no hard feelings but that dog is smelly, dumb, and ate all my kitty litter what do you expect. That i would just be fine btw you might want to check you're pillow before you go to sleep tonight. Also you need to buy more cat food the dog ate my food!!!!
I am very sorry I made a mess. But you bought a dog and I hate you for that. But i am sorry because I used you're toothbrush to clean the toilet,
I shredded all the toilet paper to, I am currently hiding in the bath tub I hope there is no hard feelings but that dog is smelly, dumb, and ate all my kitty litter what do you expect. That i would just be fine! BTW you might want to check you're pillow before you go to sleep tonight. Also you need to buy more cat food the dog ate my food!!!!
You need to capitalize your I's
Sorry about the mess I made. I was outside doing my business and I saw another cat that ran inside our house. I chased him into the bathroom and we had a big fight. The other cat looked confused. I kept fighting anyway. That was when I remembered we have another cat.
I rolled a 4. You didn't spell anything wrong.
I kinda got carried away with the toilet paper see cuz well the dog came in and said hey im going to eat u so i went to my secret base A.K.A the bathroom so then i built an fort out of toilet paper i was powerful until the dog grabed one of his wepens A.K.A toys so he knocked down my fort as if it was just a slim wall so then i had to go and hide in the basement which is the bath tub so then i said lets play another game but we forgot to clean up i will not do it again hehehe ya i will ur cat marbles
I rolled a five. No adjective needed
Capitalize your I
When you were at the grocery store I kinda made a mess of the bathroom. I jumped up on to the roll of toilet paper and then it started to unroll. I probably should tell you why I did it before you yell at me. I did it because I did it because you did not buy me that new toy that they advertised on tv.
Tom the Cat
*When you were at the grocery store, I may have made a mess of the bathroom.
*I jumped onto the roll of toilet paper, and then it started to roll.
Dear owner, I know you are mad, but first let me tell you what happened. You know that treat you left out for me ? Well I thought I would save it for later so I left it there thinking nothing would happen to it. Well, I was wrong. When I came back for the treat I saw a mouse eating it, and I already hate mice. So, I charged after it and it darted in the bathroom. It ran into the cupboard were we keep the toilet paper. So I tore through the toilet paper to find nothing but a bunch on mouse turds. Then I dug even deeper which is why there is toilet paper shreds all of the floor. All of the sudden, I saw him. I pounced but missed and he ran into the sink. I chased him in there and he ran into the bath tub. I might of hit the water faucet and turned on the water. Then I followed him into the bath were he ran down the drain. Thats when you cam in and started yelling at me.
Sincerly, Your cat
I rolled a 6 and found nothing that needed changed.
Dear my favorite owner,
I see you may be a bit upset about the little mess I may have created. You see, since it's so hard being a cat, I wanted to be like you with your kindness and forgiving nature. My claws and my instinct both got in the way of that, though. I tried to clean it up, but it just made things worse. I am sorry for the mess, but you'll have to clean it up for me. Don't forget my food, please!
Your fabulous cat,
Looked through it could not find anything. Good Job!!!!!!!!! Bye the way I rolled a one.
I rolled a three, and I could not find anything wrong with your story, AMAZING job!!!
rolled a 1
I am very sorry I made a mess,but I could not help myself. You know that I love to play. I could not find my toy mouse so... I decided to play with the toilet paper. I did not mean to shred it up but when I was playing with my claws came out. At first it was just a little mess the it turned out to be very fun. I am very sorry its just so fun so that is why I am hiding from you in the bath tub....It PROBABLY wont happen again.
I rolled a 4, but didn't find any spelling errors. I did notice a couple of grammar errors and missing punctuation.
I'm so sorry and I i'm going to tell you why I made such a mess in the bathroom. I was just playing around in the house when i saw that the bathroom door was open and that this was the first time I got to in the bathroom cause the door was always closed. So I just went in and I saw some toilet paper, and i wanted to play with it so i went and rolled it out from the hook and then I started to rip it apart. Then the toilet paper was out and in little pieces, then I saw a whole bag of toilet paper and ripped it opened and started playing with it. I heard foot steps coming to the bathroom so I hopped in the bathtub and hoped it was just my imagination. But sure enough it wasn't. I was in the bathtub looking at you and hoping I wasn't in trouble. I was in trouble but again I am very sorry that I made such a big mess in the bathroom please forgive me.
From, Your Cat
I'm sorry I made such a mess.I was not expecting you home for another hour. Okay let me tell my story, it all stared when you went to work ,and the kids went to school. The dog made me furious because he hogged all of the water so I chewed up the toilet paper ,but just a little bit. So then later I was sleeping soundly tell i heard the squeaking of a cricket. I could not find it so I got sad so to cheer my self up I rippped and tore that toilet paper to pieces.
From, The Cat
P.S. I found a cricket you might have have to take care of that there were a lot of them.
You did really good!!!
I didn't mean to make a mess I saw a mouse so i tried to kill. The mouse went in the bathroom so I went in the bathroom.He went in the toilet paper so I ripped the toilet paper and it was a big mess.
I did not find anything good job I rolled a two
I tried to kill it.
That's all you missed
First of all, I would like to tell you that I love you dearly. My heart was broken when you shut me outside because I "smelled funny." I knew I had to make it right somehow, so I put a lot of thought into it. I've seen how you make the dog go into the bathtub, and scrub with soap. But I have also seen how you get mad when he gets you all wet. I decided to sneak through the little doggy door and take a quick bath. I scrubbed and scrubbed until I thought I could scrub no longer. When I was done, I realized I didn't have a towel! I was so furious with myself. I tried using the toilet paper so dry my fur off, but it started to turn into itsy-bitsy teeny little pieces and fell all over the floor. I started to pick it up, and put all the tiny pieces back together, but that was like trying to put a jigsaw puzzle back together. (which we all know is very near impossible for a cat to do) I was so ashamed of myself. I crouched down, and hid in the bath tub until you discovered the mess. You were so mad! You started yelling, and put me back outside where I started. I decided the best thing to do was to get you an apology gift, so I left you a dead mouse on your pillow. At least, I think it's dead.
Your beloved cat,
I rolled a 4 and I don't see any spelling errors.
*I least I think it's dead. (I don't think you need a comma)
my other story randomly deleted so here is a short one
wasn't me it was Charlie :p
I am so sorry i made a mess i really didn't mean to. I was just really mad and it just happened. This is how it happened.... It was Tuesday morning and you were going out the door and usually u tell me were you were going but you didn't and i was getting worried then you didn't come back tell Thursday! so i got really mad Thursday morning because you haven't showed up in days! So i went into the bathroom to see if there was any food but all i found was toilet paper i was having fun just to pass time! I really didn't mean to, I am so very sorry. First of all you should have told me you were going to be gone that long. Second of all I was hungry you could have told someone to feed me, and Third please don't every leave me home alone again! I seriously didn't mean to do!
Love Your Cat,
*I am so sorry, I made a mess.
* I was just really mad, and it just happened. ....
CAPITALIZE YOUR the word i to I. Thank you!!!!!!!
You may think that the mess in the bathroom was me,but I can solemnly swear that it wasn't me. First,you have know me all your life have I ever done something like that for no reason what so ever,no I don't think so. Second, the reason why the bathroom is a mess is cause it was taken over by aliens. While you were at work I always, and you know, I watch TV. Well I was watching my favorite show and laughing so hard when I heard the noise coming from the bathroom. being a cat I was scared at first but then I remembered that I could show up the dog down the road and make him my servant for ever and ever. So I went in to only see two little green things steeling our toilet paper and I attacked them and that is how it happened.
,I rolled a one and couldn't find any errors
I'm so sorry for making a mess. I have learned my lesson I will never do this again. You have to be honest, making me sleep outside tonight is very mean. The reason I made such a mess was because I thought that you were never coming home. I mean like you guys go out to dinner every night and what do you leave me, the same cat food as I always get. Well guess what, I would like to eat a fancy dinner too sometimes. So I guess what I am kind of saying is that I'm not sorry I think you should be the one who is saying your sorry to me. Well what did I do you say, well I went into the bathroom and I decided to tear up the toilet paper. I took down the shower curtain, and i tried to hide in the bathtub so you could never find me, but you obviously found me. I hope that you guys have learned your lesson about leaving me to eat this nasty cat food.
I rolled a 1
* you did nothing wrong
I rolled a 1 you had nothing to fix so good job !!!!!!!
I made this mess because you haven't gave me food in a week!!!! So now you have to clean up the restroom...There's an extra roll of toilet paper under the sink...
P.S..You should start buying me the better kind of cat food...
I rolled a 4 and I see you only need one exclamation point, you should have said bathroom and I like your story hehe its cute har har
I rolled a two
I did not see any comma mistakes.
I am very sorry about the food all over the carpet, at least it wasn't the yellow stuff. Even though it stained the carpet, I hope you will forgive me for what I have done. The tomatoes and the sauce, and all of the other staining material. Around lunchtime I saw a mouse running around the kitchen, so I ran after it. I just had to spill everything on my way to get the darn thing. At least I got the mouse.
Love, the PAINE
I got bored. I was tired of my toys, and there was nothing to do. I found the toilet paper and didn't even notice how big of a mess it was until you came home and yelled at me. If only u would just buy me more toys then maybe I wouldn't make such a mess, but until you do I will always be bored and make a mess.
I rolled a 4.
Good Job ;)
Hey it's me,your cat,writing this.I know,it's crazy, right? Well, I'm writing this letter to you because it's sort of a sorry note.Well, I made the mess because I thought I saw a mouse underneath the package of tp. It was about lunch time and I had to go use the bathroom.Then bam, all of a sudden there was a mouse running around...I got it haha and then I saw the mess
your cat, dumb dumb
I roller a 6... your sentences looked good.
I did made this mess only because I saw it on a show on the TV. The show was called, How to make a mess for cats. I watched the show and there was plenty of messes to make one was not going number 2 in the liter box, I considered that but I didn't have to got number 2. So I decided to make a mess with something that involved in going number 2. Then this one with toilet paper came on and was on the spot right away, I thought it was an amazing idea to take toilet paper and rip it up and unroll, so i went on youtube to watch toilet paper ideas to make a mess. There was this one video where kids where trowing toilet paper all over a house. That was the start of a new crinimal. I decided to do what those kids did but in the toilet room. Since I was a cat and I had super sharp claws and and awesome teeth. So I made a huge mess in the toilet room and I can't wait till you get home to see it
Your cat, BoB
I rolled a 4, but didn't see any spelling errors. However, I did see some grammar issues and run-on sentences.
*The show was called "How to Make a Mess for Cats".
I hope you'll understand that it wasn't my fault that your toilet paper was destroyed. It wasn't me I swear! It was the toilet, I was sitting there minding my own business then the toilet went awl. It started chewing the majestic, fun, and very playful toilet paper.( Mmm toilet paper.) The rest landed in the trash and the toilet went for that. (Oh I loved that trash! Well um... I mean I didn't play with it.) Then the trash fell and some toilet paper spun out of the fun thing that fell, I mean the trash can. It flew high and low I tried to catch it but well let's just say that I have more claw then paw. And the toilet went back to it's seat and froze. It was like that never even happened. Except for the mess. It was like a winter wonderland. And I just sat there. Doing nothing. So I hope you understand.
Your innocent and loving pet,
I sending you this letter to tell you why I made a huge mess in the bath room yesterday. I'm sorry but i was so bored I couldn't have helped it I was so bored there's nothing to do when you at work I sit at home bored wonder and wander around waiting for you to get home. What you should do is buy me a play set so I'm not as bored it would make it a lot easier if you bought me some toys too so I can entertain my self when your gone. Or you could buy a cat sitter so someones paying attention to me. I don't like the alarm that sounds off that's why I meow all morning long. I guess that the mess is also payback for the alarm sound that wakes me so abruptly
I rolled a 4 I found no spelling errors
I see you saw my mess but, in my defense a mouse was running around. I know how much you hate mice, so I decided to chase it around! So please don't be mad and don't give me one of those bath things. I hate those so much!
- your cat batman
'' - your cat, Batman"
Dear,Who ever is my owner
I am so sorry about the mess i did on Monday.I was chasing a mouse and i caught the tail of the mouse but the tail ripped off of the body.I got mad at the mouse and start messing up the house and messed up your entire room and messed up the house.I am sorry about the house.But the good thing is i caught the mouse at least
You probably saw that I made a huge mess of the bathroom. I am not sorry at all that I did it. You are the worst owner ever. I want to leave this terrible place. It stinks! You never play with me, or pet me. All you do is kick me. You feed me once a week, and the dog gets food five times a day! Please give me someone else who is nice to cats.
"you are the worst owner ever, i want to leave this place
rolled 4 saw no spelling errors awesome story matt
Dear Mr. Sausage,
I'm am gonna explain to you why I made this mess. Alright well I'm a cat and um I have a fear to rats. I was just siting in the bathroom doing my thing and when all of a sudden a rat ran out of a whole that was by the sink counter and so I jumped and I started to run after it. The rat was to fast ran up on the toilet across the toilet paper and ran into the shower oh my goodness rat. The rat was so fast that he was able to make it to his hole. Then I realized that I had made a big mess toilet paper ripped up and stuff all over the place and now i'm scared you might be mad at me.
I rolled a 4 and it looks good from what I saw so keep up the good work
I bet your wondering what happened here. Well this is the consequence for forgetting to give me my treats. Since when you come home you usually use the bathroom, I decided to go there first. I looked around and saw all the wonderful things on your counter, but then I saw this white stuff on a roll. I pawed it, and it unraveled, but then it looked a little like string, so I dragged it all around. It was so fun! Then I jumped up on the counter and saw this thinner white stuff. I think you call it floss, and and grabbed it in my teeth.
I am sorry for making a big mess in your house. I hope that you can forgive me soon. The only reason I ripped into the toilet paper was because it was dangling and all my toys are gone so i had to do something. i realized that the paper was to high so i just jumped its roll but that diden't help it just fell so i got mad and scrashed it.
Your cat, Polly
*...all my toys are gone so I had to do...
*I realized the the paper was to high...
*...so I just jumped...
*...so I got mad...
Rolled a 2
no miss takes
I'm sorry I destroyed your bathroom, but did you seriously have to leave me in the bathroom while you went to that 3 day conference couldn't you have at least left some food in there? I got so hungry I started to eat the toilet paper, but it was terrible so I spit it out on the ground. Also sorry I pooped in your bathtub. What else where you expecting I was in there for 3 days you try not going to the bathroom for 3 days it sucks. So what I'm trying to say is that your a terrible owner and I hate you.
Dear Jackie Chan,
I made a mess in the bathroom, but no one cares. And yes I did rip up the toilet paper and most of the towels, but I did wash my paws after I did that mess. And I am not sorry for what I did because its your responsibility to keep me away from the bathroom and any other room in the house. I am not going to clean it up because I don't have any thumbs and I just don't want to. If you don't clean it up I will eat all the chairs up and the couch and the bed, and the ................. bathroom again.
From , The Cat
I know I may be a little messy , but I'm a cat what can I say. Some times I'm the most boring pet, sit on the couch and watch my soap operas. I love to make messes chew on toilet paper ,and the occasional eating your socks. I'm so sorry, cats do what cats do. I'll try to resist making a mess, but don't count on it. Just wanted to say sorry ,and try to avoid the bathroom.
I'm writing this letter to tell you why I made such a mess. First I made it because i like watching you pick it all up for me. Second I like making messes. Third I want you to get rid of me.
P.S I hate you truly from the bottom of my heart!
I rolled a 4, and i didn't find any spelling errors. Good job Creightypoo :$
Dear owner I meant to do this because, I hate this place. I went into the Bathroom and I saw the dog Latwan and guess what he was taking a dump right by the sink. I said stop it stupid we are going to get in trouble. He barked and he came after me, I took his turd and threw it in his face. He ran out the door and I closed it. I was messing up everything so i could move somewhere else. Bye
After Dear owner put a comma there * Dear owner,
Don't put a comma after because
After stupid put a comma * stupid,
Hey, it's me, sorry I didn't mean to make a mess in the bath room. I was on the that white thing doing what you do on it, when I was done I tried to grab the paper and I fell pull the paper with me, then I tried to get back up, but I fell in the, toilet is it called? Well anyway I fell in it and my mouth was open, you can guess what went into my mouth. I gagged and jumped out. I through out chunks and it went every where. When I tried to clean irt up and I ripped up the paper and, yeah. Sorry Your Cat.
I'm very sorry that I made a big mess.It technically was't my fault this mouse made me very mad that he was in the house so I tried to catch it,and make it go home but he wouldn't so I started chasing him around the house.Then finally I cornered him into the bathroom when he got into the opened toilet paper bag and so I chewed it up to try and find him.SORRY
You did really good XD I got 2 and after
Then finally I cornered him into the bathroom, ( put a comma )
Dear Joe, please don't be angry with me. I was just minding my own business when out of know were the dog Jack started chasing me. So what did I do yep that's right I tried climbing up the curtains, But I fell leaving scratches in the curtains. Then I jumped on the desk good idea right wrong Jack followed me and knocked your favorite glass vase the one that is bright red. Well I hope you can see this was not my fault
I'm sorry that I made this mess. I wanted to show off to my cat friends that I could be bad. I didn't wan to make this mess but I did. I realize now that I shouldn't do something to impress my friends. When you had my friend Joe and Billie come over they said that I was a goody goody. It made me feel bad and they were telling me stuff that they did that was bad. I had nothing to say cause I never do anything bad. I shouldn't have done that to impress my friends.
* between to and my add the word all
*friends, that I could be bad
I have no more time thank you
Dear beloved owner,
Today,I must tell you that I have made a very dirty,filthy mess.I'm sorry to say but your bedrooms and bathrooms are all filthy with cat litter,furballs and such.I was having a party with my furry cat friends and it got a little out of,you could say.Well my apoligies about the mess and I hope you have a jolly good day
I am so sorry for the mess in the bathroom and i am going to tell you why. I was walking around the house and went in the hall. I saw a door that the door to the bathroom was opened, since i never went in there i decided to see what it was like. I walked in there and i saw a toilet paper roll, and i was rolling it around and I made little scraps on the floor. Then I saw that there was another pile of toilet paper. I made a mess cause i got scared by being alone. then i heard you coming so I jumped into the tub. i thought i wasn't in trouble, but sure enough i was.
I rolled 1.
*capitalize your your I's otherwise you did good
Dear owner, sory about the mess. I was out side doing my business. When i saw another cat that ran to our house. So i chaced him into the bathroom and we had a big fight. that we made a mess.
I rolled a 3
you did good on sentences but you spelled sorry wrong and you needed to capitals your I
yours is funny
Dear owner, Sorry about the mess, when I walked in to the bathroom I saw a random dog from the street that made the bathroom look like a tornado came through and when I did see him he started to chase me around the house, I got so scared to death so I ran into the kitchen and ran right back to the bathroom and made even a more mess, 'Sorry'.
Sorry for the mess. I saw a mouse running around the house so I decied to chase it. It looked so good i just wanted to eat it all up. He was running every where he even found a little hole in the wall and I ran and hit the wall. Just to let you know I got him! YUM!
I rolled a 5
instead of just putting mess in the first sentence you should add * sorry for the enormous and stinky mess
or when you put I ran and hit the wall you could say * I was sprinting and ran into a wall that felt like a ton of bricks.
Okay. So I might have made a huge mess... but I have a wonderful reason as to why I did what I did. Here it is. So after you left for work i was reading all the stuff on your desk, when i came upon a happy birthday card from your mom. I thought maybe I should do something for you on your birthday. I wasn't quite sure what I should do for you though. I was sitting there trying to think of a good idea when a bird ran strait into the window! how stupid right? That's when I had the great idea to throw you a surprise party, and whats a surprise party without confetti? So I came in here to find something to make confetti out of, and I found this toilet paper. So that's kinda what happened...
"Well, here is the thing, I was in here sleeping and the dumb dog came in a woke me up and I got a little scared. So I peed a little and I tried to clean it up and that did not work well for me because look at me I have no thumbs just claws !!!" "So that is what happens when you bring a dog in the house and you leave !!!!!"
saw a roder in the bath room with a raite on tope of him so I had to atake the rat on top of him then the rat ran and got under or near the to atake him and i got the rat and killed it.........
Have I ever told you that I love the new couch you got last month? Anyway I wanted to tell you that I should not be punished for the mess I made in the bathroom. If I recall, YOU are the one who forced me to take a bubble bath last week! And just so you know that Prada bag you bought, it wasn't real I've had real leather before. Oh! You haven't seen that mess yet? Whoops.....I didn't say anything. So my advice to you, is to prevent this in the future, I like Iams cat food only frozen with extra meat and fish.
Love yours, Cat
If I recall, no "if"; It wasn't real "leather" I've "ate":.....
I was a normal cat whith a normal life till my owner didn't feed me.i tried scratching by he didn't feed me.So i went into the kichen broke ever thing.I got ever thing out of the rephergerater and took ever thing out
I don't know what got in me. I was trying to get the fish out of the bowl and I did. But when I got him and at him I slip then I fell on a skateboard. Then I rolled. But can I tell you something the song catch me riding dirty.
owner some people blame the dog . but this time it was the cat so the dog was getting a drink from the toilet .and you know how he is not to do that so I ....
Dear Owner, I'm so very sorry for this huge, disasters mess,but..... IT WAS FUN!! I mean if i don't play I'll get fat and chubby and i won't be able to run or walk, AND if i can't walk or run then i can't eat or get a drink of water,then.... that will lead to...... DEATH!!!!! (maybe I over exagerated a little bit but still!) ANYWAY..... I'm sorry about this mess and I will attempt to clean it up (maybe) :)..............
Dear, Mrs. owner
I am very sorry that a made a mess in the bathroom ,but there was a dog barking outside and I got scared.Sorry for the mess that I made ,I am so sorry that happen can you still feed me I like food sorry.
I'm sorry,that I trashed you litter box. I was just bored and I'm only a baby. Also cats have a tendancey to shred paper. To be honest, I really did not care until you got home.
P.S just keep it in the cabnet
I like it
I just want u to know I love you and I only made this mess because I love you. I will not say i'm sorry because i'm not, you guys should be sorry for leaving me here alone with the babysitter and the baby, who you didn't know pulls my fur and ears. I want you to take this to heart. I am terribly sorry if I made you cry, however i did want you to say sorry to me so when u get back an apologie letter would be nice!
I'm sorry that I made a mess in the bathroom.I was really mad because my girl friend broke up with me.I did not no what to do so I clawed the toilet paper.
I am not sorry for ripping up the toilet paper. I did it because i hate you. It was all your fault for locking me in the bathroom while you went to your stupid 4 week vacation to Hawaii. I decided that when you get back i am leaving....... Forever!
This is me your cat Buttercup Jr. you thought I was the best cat in the world well, you thought wrong. Yes I was the one who trashed your bathroom or was it your bedroom probably both but lets not get off topic. I'm sorry about trashing your bathroom. The bedroom you had coming though so I don't feel sorry about that. I was trying to be a big boy a go to the bathroom on my own but I couldn't quite reach the toilet paper you can figure out the rest on your own i'm out of time.
I'm very sorry for attacking your toilet paper. It was the closest thing to string... I was starting the Bath just as you came in to try to make things better between us.
P.S did you bring my kibble?
From Mr. Whiskers
Dear owner, you are problaby wondering why this place is a mess. Well I got mad that you locked the fish tank up after last time with Mr. nibbles.
So i wanted something to eat and I didn't want cat food so I went wondering around for something....
Dear owner should be it's own line
Dear my sweet, beautiful, respected owner,
I know you're mad but, let me explain. When i was in the kitchen, i saw someone walk into the house, a burglar! I love you so much, that I wanted to protect you so I chased after him. He ran into the bathroom, i decided to get him right then. That's what happened, i was only trying to help you!
Dear past owner,
I am very sorry the I messed up the bathroom. I was very thirsty and I wanted a drink, but my water bowl had no water. So I used my small but knowledgeable brain and it told me to try and get some from the bath. Once I went in there I turned on the rushing water, but then I fell in. I wanted to dry off really badly so I tried to find the towels. I couldn't find them. I then found toilet paper and tried that. It didn't go very well but it got the job done. Don't you think you took it too far when you sold me... Sorry again.
Hey, whats up... So I here you want to know about the mess... Well, I would rather not tell you. But, I dont want to get in trouble so i guess I can tell you. So...umm.... OK. So me and Bamboo ( you're other cat) were playing around. or so i thought. He pushed me down!!!!!! INTO THE BATHTUB!!! Thats why you found me in the bathtub. SO BYEEE
Sincerely, THE cat
I'm sorry I made a mess in the bathroom and scratched up all the toilet paper and hid in the tub. If you must know why I did it then I'll be glad to tell you. Here are just a few of the reasons I did it. One, when I go and grab the books of the bookcase I don't mean to make a mess (if you notice I only take them when your eating) I just want to sit down and eat with you. Two, when i crawl up onto your lap when your playing videos games (such as Destiny) i just want to watch while you play. I don't mean to annoy you I just want to spend more time with you. Three when I come and still your homework i'm just trying to make sure it's correct. So think of the mess I made the next time you deny me lunch with you.
Ok so let me explain how this mess got hear So I found rat well I whent after it for a while when I got it was sooo happy. Then i got to the bathroom. I was going to put the fish in the tollet but i did not. Then I found it paper but it was not that it was soft fun and alot of it so I was the only one who can be that so I KILLED IT :)
how this mess got,"here".
So,I found a rat,and well,I went after it for a while and when I got it, I was so happy.
I hope you aren't mad when you see the bathroom, but I can explain. You see I was sitting in the living room when a brown mouse scurried across the floor. Myself, being a respective cat chased it. it ran into the bathroom and I might have knocked over the toilet paper stand when that happened it ran into the cardboard part. Again, I straight out attacked it. I would say I'm sorry, but I caught the mouse so I'm good.
I rolled a six. I would make the second and third sentences a compound sentence, by putting an "and" in-between "floor" and "myself". I also found a capitalization error in your fourth sentence. You put a lower case "i" at the beginning of the sentence.
I wanted to say sorry for making a giant disaster in your dream bathroom. You had left the house for grocery shopping and I was laying in my fish shaped cat bed. It was so hot I couldn't stand it any longer! It felt as if i was swimming in a freshly erupted volcano. I was thinking to myself and I wondered how I could make it cool. I came up with the idea to go to your bathroom, because that's where you keep all the toilet paper, and I started ripping it up. After I had gone through eleven rolls, and all of it was shredded, I got into the bathtub and started throwing the pieces into the air. I laid down and imagined that I was making snow kitties with cold, icy, and beautiful snowflakes falling on me. So I'm very sorry for making my happiness cause you trouble.
I rolled a 1 and the only thing I saw was one capitalization error...
It felt as if I* was swimming in a freshly erupted volcano.
but besides that nice story...
Well the reason i meowed the mess is becuse........ Well I guess I thought the couch was a bear attacking me!!!!!! So I like killed the bear then ran off . I was hiding in the bathroom the whole time until you came here.. Oh I almost forgot I was scared so thats why the tub was kinda yello........
to many periods
Dear, Owner Billy Norris IV
So I am here to tell you about the toilet CATastrophe in the bathroom haha get Catastrophe. Well anyway I took a well you know.Well I needded toilet paper. Hey DO you know how much kitty litter hurts.WEll when I tried to get the toilet paper and fell in the toilet. Yeah you know I hate water. Oh and next time please don't leave me a big surprise in the toilet.Well even though I hate water I had to take a bath that is why your head and shoulders for women is gone. Oh and why do you have womens shampoo you are a guy well see you later.
Your Cat, Pupperwinkle
sorry, sorry about the mess I made last week and I know its weird that Im a cat and in writing a letter to you but i started to unroll the toilet paper and I thought it was so fun so i kept doing it and doing it until it was all on the floor and once it was on the floor I tore it to peices so... i'm sorry. sincerly your cat
Rolled a 3.
The intense number.
Daaaaang that sentence is HUGE!
Also it's not in letter form.
Oh Travis, you also forgot to capitalize a lot.
I rolled a 1 and I found a few capitaltion errors like you need to capitalis I and I found you need some apposterphies.
I regret nothing. I really don't. I may or may not have been re-enacting the twin towers incident as the plane. No. OK maybe. At least I didn't use my glorious golden 9mm pistol. Gourden still has that. That's a different story. And ignore the yellow stain in the bathtub. I couldn't open the toilet, so let's say it's that Axe shampoo you have. It's wash out. It's a shower. And as for the toilet paper you can guess they were the twin towers. Well actually I got made because they were giving me the stink eye. Anyway, I am gratefully not sorry, since I cannot feel regret. I am too good for regret. I gansta.
I am not sorry that I totally and utterly destroyed your new purse.
I will, however, explain it to you.
I was simply walking around your room looking for a good place to mark my territory, when I smelled something so lucious and delicous I had to investigate. It ended up to be that new catnip you bought me. I ate the whole bag and became extremely hyper.
Sincerely, Mr. Whiskers
P.S. You need to clean my litter box.
P.S.S. My water and food bowel is empty.
I rolled a 4. I liked how you added the P.S. and the P.S.S. Nice ending. No spelling errors found! Good job!
I am truly sorry about the mess. I am writing to you to tell you about why I made that mess. When I was minding my own business, guarding the house like always from those awful big rats. I went into the bedroom and I saw a big smelly rat on your bed making a huge mess. The rat was all muddy from the rain today and rubbed the mud around on your bed. I hissed at him and jumped toward him but I missed. He ran into the bathroom and was sitting on the high sink. He knew I couldn't reach it but this time I ran and flew onto the sink. I felt like superman!! He screamed and clawed at me. I hit him in the bathtub filled with water. This rat hated water. He was screaming and the tub was filled up with mud. Gross!! When I wasn't looking he jumped out and while he was jumping out I smacked him into the toilet. When I got down I flushed him down. I felt proud. When I turned around the whole bathroom was dirty. While I was cleaning it, I fell into the bath and made a bigger mess. I am sorry for the mess.
Sincerely, Mr. Me
As you hopefully know, I've made a horrific mess in your bathroom, it's not a normal cats mess if you know what I mean... It all happen when I say the nastiest, scrawniest, smelliest RAT ever! I chased it all around, I even jumped into the bath with it, but to my dismay, there was water in it as well! Meowing with horror I jumped up and went psycho-cat and tore it all up! To make sure you won't yell at me, I've run away and have become a hobo-cat with my new friend, Darrel,(which is the rat I attack.) I shall return with Darrel in about a month, so don't fear!
I know you're mad, but it was impossible to resist. Okay not IMPOSSIBLE but pretty hard, I just couldn't help it. I guess the bathroom did smell like rotten fish but I like that smell and you should know that. Also, you should know that I love to tear up tiolit paper. Most of all I really just want to get out of this house. Meow!
I made this mess because it was dark in the house.I thought there was a robber. I heard something and I thought that there was a person in the bathroom so I went in there and started attacking and then this is what happen and then I heard you coming and then I hide from you.
I rolled a four, and I found no spelling errors. But I did find some tenses that were wrong, happen should be happened, and hide should be hid. That's all I found.
As you come home today you will see that I have made an amazing mess throughout the house. Don't worry though, I didn't clean any of it. I thought you would like to do that. But back to the mess. I have scattered toilet paper everywhere and there are no longer cushions on the couch. It is just a beautiful mess that I have created. There may also be scratch marks all over you chairs because somebody didn't give me a scratching post for my birthday. So there is the amazing mess that I have left for you to try and pick up. I hope you have learned that you get me what I want the next time it is my birthday.
I rolled a 6. I find no errors.......
I remember when you made a mess so keep this in mind I kind of made a mess of your dresser top with hair balls but remember that you promised you won't yell OK I lied about that part but don't send dad after me please I won't meow when you feed me!
P.S I also peed on the rug.
i rolled a 4, you have 1 spelling error. it is cencerly is actually is sincerely. But nice job. :)
dear owner bob
ok well im a cat and i like to make messes and make them look bad when they arnt bad at all and actually they haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaack whoops that ant pretty well im not not sorry i really am sorry and i dont know why i did it. well i hope your not really mad at me and i need to go poop and its going to regret this and done and omg that smells like cat poop.
*Dear Owner Bob
*You only have 2 periods in all
*Run on sentesces
funny read me
Not enough periods way to many run ons. You need to capalize. 1-10 you got a 1
Sorry fir the mess. I had the best party in the world and guess what? You were not invited so that shows how low you are on the social latter so that means that you are vary vary low. Lower than the worst personin the world.
I rolled a four and I found a few like the word that need fix like very and few
rolled a 2,
needed comma after latter (ladder)
spelt for wrong, ladder, very, and person.
other wise really good
You didn't feed me before you left for a day so this is payback. I just knew you were going to be mad about it so I went in the bathroom to pass some time before I got in trouble. Since you love the couch so much I scratched that first, then I moved on to the rest of the furniture. Then I decided there was nothing to destroy for me in the kitchen so I moved to the bathroom, since you shut the bedroom doors. So I destroyed the toilet paper and the towels and pooped on the floor then I got tired and fell asleep in the tub. Then I heard you guys come home so I decided to stay in the tub until you found me.
Sincerely, Your Cat. :D
The reason I made the mess is I got in to the Mountain Dew . I got all hipper and started running around the house . Please don't blame me ,it was the Mountain Dew its not made for cats . When you where away the babysiter gave me it. Please don't through me out please
I rolled a 1 and I didn't see a period at the end of the last sentence
Dear Owners, I'm so sorry that I made such a mess in your house.I know your probably going to punish me , but first let me explain.It all started when I was trying to get a drink out of the toilet, and I slipped and fell into the toilet. When I got out I was all wet, so I jumped up on the counter and tried to grab a towel, and I knocked off everything that was on the counter. The towel landed on my head and I was running all over the place knocking everything down. I ran into the kitchen and knocked all of the plates , utensils and food off the table
Dear Mrs. and Mr. Butlertin,
This is your dear old cat Mr. Fluffles. If your wondering about that little mess in the basement.....it was me. I'm sorry about your couch I didn't mean to scratch and claw it. I had just gotten to the scariest part in the horror movie I was watching.
I'm also sorry that I sprayed on that newly painted wall. When you have to go, you have to go. I invited my friend Prince Fluffy over. We drank a lot of Mountain Dew, and things got crazy in the living room. We broke the TV, DVR, your favorite lamp, and when you have to go, you have to go. We sprayed on the couch.
Rolled a 2. No errors found.
I'm sorry for trashing the bathroom I will tell you what happen. I was trying to get a fish out of the bowl and I got him.But when I got him I slip and I fell on the skateboard. I rode it into the bathroom I hit the tub then the dog came in and scared me I jump on the toilet paper and the I jump on the curtain it broke the fell and that's how the bathroom is like that.