I think that this pill should not be legalized. I don't think it should because if you were happy all the time how would you know that something bad you did was bad. I mean if the person you did something wrong too didn't like that the only emotion you could show is happy and maybe that person wouldn't take you seriously.
It is to short.
Good job Jaylen :)
I think they would and should be legalized if it was a thing. I think that would be awesome so I am never sad. I would always be excited. I could be getting into a ton of trouble and still be happy. I would even be excited during school which does not happen like ever. I would be excited to go clean and do chores. That is why I think it should.
Good job Kobe.
You had no errors but, next time try to make it longer.
No errors Kobe, good job!
I don't think this pill should be legalized because of the fact if someone passed away in your family you shouldn't be happy. You be sad because they passed away. People at the funeral would think you were being rude because they would think you were happy they died. I do not think the happy pill should be legalized. They would think your crazy if you were happy if something bad happened to someone. I know I wouldn't want that pill.
Yes, I think it should be legalized. Because some people might be sad and want to be happy but its not that easy. So then they can just take the pill. Then they can be happy.
Ok I actually think this should not be legalized. You don't even know what is in them. And they probably don't even work.
make sure you use complete sentences not fragments.
Make sure you have 6 sentences.
I don't think they should get rid of the happy pill. If people had a hard day at work they could use some happy time for about twp hours. If there weren't happy pills, were would the hobos be then. I would take a pill at least once a month. They could kill you,but not every time you take one.
Good job Jonathan you look clean.
You miss spelled the word two.
I think that it should NOT be legalized. You are supposed to have mixed emotions through out the day. Just think, if you took to many you might become light headed and nauseous. I think you should be able to choose to be happy, not let some drug (happy pill) control your emotions. Although it would be nice if everyone would be happy all the time. This pill could solve the bulling issue along with many others, but I still believe that people need to be able to choose how they act. You shouldn't be influenced by a pill, and pretty much all of us have been raised to be happy and always look on the bright side of things, so let's not let that all go to waste.
I think that this pill should NOT be legalized. I think that you should be happy without having to take a pill. You would think that this happy pill would make you sick to your stomach and nauseous the more and more you take it. I think you should be able to be your own person without taking medicine to make you happy. You should always be happy but if your not you shouldn't need to take a pill to change that. I wonder if this pill would make you actually like the kind of happy when your laughing or just being optimistic. So let's be happy on our own and not make this pill legal.
Good job Tory, and I do agree with you.
You did a really good job, and I agree with you that happy pills should not be legalized.
Great job, I agree.
Good job, no mistakes.
Great job, Addison! No errors! :)
Good job Addison. I found no errors.
I think it would be a good idea for them to make a pill that makes people happy all the time because if people are crabby other people turn crabby and then if there happy they are all happy. So it would be a good idea because it help a lot people who have anger in there life. I bet they all get this pill. I mean a lot of people. There are so many people out there that have anger so someone discover it. So someone out there make the happy pill....
Ty in the third line help should be helps.
No way they should legalized. You have you be mad or sad sometimes because. If you lose a family member you morn them but if they had a pill that makes you happy you cant be sad about them. You would just kind of forget them how can you be happy about you family member dying that would not make sense. if someone made you mad you would be happy so I don't think if they made them thy should be legalized.
The first sentence should be...... No way they should legalize this., It should not be legalized.
Having legalized pills can be harmful or helpful. It depends on what type you take. If you over use them and get addict to them they can be harmful to your body. Its safe to use them if you get them from a doctor that tells you to use them if your sick or have a lot of pain. You should use them if you are told to use them. Don't take them for no reason. That's what I think about legalized pills.
In your 3rd sentence it should be "addicted" instead of addict. Then in your 4th sentence your first word should have an apostrophe. "It's" instead of "its." Other than that, great job!
Happy, Happy, Happy pill! Would you take it? That's the question. This happy pill doesn't only make you happy. It also makes you energized! With minimal side effects you could be happy for hours on end! What are the side effects you might ask, well you have questions and I have answers. It causes slight headache, and dry mouth, but nothing bad. Are you going to buy the happy pill?
I would not take the pill because it could make you happy than at a funeral you would be happy and people would think your crazy.
It only makes you happy when you take it... If you don't want to be happy at a funeral, don't take it before the funeral.
Add a comma instead of a period before "it also makes you energized!". You have sentence fragments not complete sentences. Other than that good job!
Good job .
I think it should be illegal because it could hurt people. It may make them happy all of the time but I think people will become addicted. I mean if they made a pill to make you have common sense it would be ok because people would not take them all of the time. Some people do not have common sense and that makes me mad. We would have far less car accidents and other thing if we all had common sense. But the happy pill could make people to happy and that scares me. We already know what happy gas does to people. So in my opinion I think they should be illegal.
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No errors, good job Josh:)
No It should not be legalized. If people were happy all the time it would be awful when something bad happened. People wouldn't care about bad things happening. Also what if someone abused this pill, that would seriously screw with their brain. Also what if you could force this to someone so they wouldn't be angry about something? The only good use for this pill would be for people who are seriously depressed or have post-traumatic stress and even then you would have to give them like 3 pills once a month so they couldn't abuse them. I think that maybe you could occasionally use them if prescribed by a doctor.
No mistakes Jake!
I don't think it should be legalized because they could not teach you right from wrong. It would be good for the kid because if they get mad at you they will be happy instead of mad. It would also be great for Christmas because then you will be spoiled. They would be bad because you could be happy and then you could be on a criminal list for Most Wanted. So when you think about these pills it would be down right stupid. I would like for teachers to have this for reasons like they are always happy but then the students would go nowhere in life.
No, I don't think it should be legalized. I think you should be able to be happy without taking a pill. I think it's stupid how people think it's ok to take a pill to be happy. Why cant people be happy without taking a pill?
The problem is some people cant just be happy, therefore they need a "happy pill" Its like telling a person who cant talk to speak.
can't* it's* can't* add commas Halli!
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You put "Why *can't* people be......
Cena should be a capitol, AKA is an akronym so all the letters should be capitol, cant should be can't, and your paragraph is not 6 sentences.
I think happy pills should not be legalized. We are supposed to have different feelings everyday. I don't think a drug should control your emotions. It would be nice to feel happy all the time, but I still think we should have different kinds of emotions. Say if someone dies I would want to be sad not happy. We all should have our own feelings, not controlled by a pill.
Great job, Natalie!
Happy pills? I think they should be legalized because some people have depression or some other disorder that makes it hard to be happy. There would most likely be less suicides, less self-harm, more confidence, more smiles, etc. The only thing that is debatable is some people could take more than their supposed to and end up having bad side-effects. But if there was a vote, I would vote legal.
Good Job! :)
I think this drug should not be legalized. Everyone would be taking this drug and every one would be happy. Some times your not yourself if your happy. And maybe some people don't want to be happy. Maybe people are happy the way they are and don't need a drug to make them crazy happy. Maybe this drug could hurt people anythings possible.
I agree no mistakes
Good job Kay, no errors!
I think it should be illegal because being happy all the time is not the best way to think. You might have taken this and maybe the next week a relative died, but you can't show affection or love because you are still happy. Some people may be freaked out by you smiling all the time. Taking this pill may even lead to some unwanted side affects. You might have been in a terrible accident and you can't tell someone what happened because they might not believe you because you still are smiling and you still are happy. So, this happy pill would make you want to go crazy after all the things that may happen after you take the pill.
No it should not be legalized because sometime you have to be sad or mad. If for example you kill someone you are suppose to be all most any emotion except happy, what if someone die you are suppose to be mad at who killed them or sad from natural causes.If you find a job then you get fired why would you be happy you would be disjointed, sad, or mad. If you can't find what to wear why would you be happy it would make me frustrated not happy like why would anyone be happy about that. And some pills that say they do things they usually do much more than that they can kill the user make the user have unusually side effects who would do that and risk the chance of extra hair growth or stunting your growth. And that is why I think that you should not legalize them.
you said die instead of dies
I think that this pill should not be legalized. Different emotions make us the individuals we are. If they made this ¨happy pill¨ a thing we would not have many things to decide what kind of people you are. If you were trying to make new friends wouldn´t you want to be friends with someone who is loyal and kind? Well if we had this pill you would not be able to see under their fake personality.
I totally agree! Nice explanation, and I didn't find any mistakes!
I think that this pill should not be legalized. I f you take a pill that makes you happy . you wont know the difference of what makes you happy or mad. And if you take it,that means your happiness is artificial. and if you have an artificial emotion. wouldn't you want it be real. I mean I get that some people are depressed but, taking a pill just to make you happy . I think that would make me even more depressed.
No because people would overdose if they thought they are not happy.Then a lot of people would be dead if we would legalized it.I bet the first day (of it being legalized) there would be at least a few people dead. It would be just as bad as other pills that people overdose on.I would hat the person who did that,because he would not stop it if people were died.
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NO that would not be a good idea. Why would people even think about legalizing an another kind of pill. If you robbed a bank you would probably think it was fun or for a good cause. And you would probably be really depressed when i wore off. And if you take a fill every time you were sad or it wares of you would probably get sick.
Yes I know that some pill can help sick people and stuff but still.
If they do legalize this happy pill they should only have doctors give it to people. No I do not think they should ever legalize this pill.
The only mistake that I found was an ¨I¨ that was not capitalized. Otherwise, great job! I totally agree with you.
Good job, Hannah! The only thing I found was an I that needed to be capitalized.
I think people could get addicted to it and end up with bad side effects.People could get too happy and go insane or something crazy like that.But i'm on the yes side too as long as they can't have any more once the police catch them with it.And maybe make certain laws not to over dose or something like that.So it could be a good thing or a bad thing because it could have natural things to make you happy,or toxic chemicals to make you happy.
I think this should not be legalized. You are suppose to have different emotions throughout the day. Who would want to always be happy? The pill would probably solve a lot of problems that have to deal with bullying and rude people but still. Why would you depend on a pill to make you happy? Everyone is happy when they want to be... most people do not always want to be happy. If something bad happened no one would care because they would all be happy. If someone miss used the pill then it could really mess with their brain or do something bad to them. No one would be them self because they are all too happy. Say if a family member dies, you would be sad, but with this happy pill you would be happy and positive and those kind of things that happen like someone getting hurt or dying should not be something you are happy about.
Good job, I totally agree with you.
Good job Elle, no errors!
What is the difference between this laffy taffy drug and any other illegall drug in the world. People can misuse it. They always find a way to feel good about them selves illegally. That is who some people are, always wanting to find something else to fulfill a gap in themselves.
It is too short,and you need to make sure you use complete sentences,but everything else is GOOD.
No I do not think this pill should be legalized. People need to know the real YOU! If you were having a bad day go take a walk do whatever you can do to get your mood happy again. If you were happy all the time I would get suspicious. Everyone needs mixed emotions. If you took the pill and something bad happened that was really sad you would be happy because you took this pill. People need to learn how to control their emotions without a pill. It would feel good to be happy all the time but do it without a pill to make you happy. So I don't think that this "happy pill" should ever be legalized.
Great job molly. No mistakes. :D
I totally agree with you, and I didn't find any mistakes.
I don't think this pill should be legalized because what if something bad happens? You won't know what is bad and what isn't if your happy all the time. Also, you choose your emotions basically. If something sad happened in your family, then you want to be sad. If something horrible happened to one of your friends, you wouldn't know it was horrible. I honestly don't think that these happy pills should be legalized.
Very good story, Good job!!
I think we can't pass this drug it is something people could get addicted to and what if something bad happens there could be symptoms.Or if someone gets hit by a truck and your just smiling you'd probably get arrested for smiling about it they'd think you planned it and be like "Nope you going to jail Mr.Sir and never getting out." and then they'd be smiling and the other cops would think that you didn't do it and he/she did and it would just keep going like that.So in conclusion I think it would be down right dumb.
Yall didn't put a period.
This should NOT be legalized because you can't make someone happy and if anyone wanted to be happy they can just change their attitude. There should only be pills to help people not to change them. There would probably be side affects and usually side effects aren't something everyone wants to have. Pills were made to care for people so they shouldn't make a pill to change something that isn't wrong with them. People aren't going to happy all the time and it would be boring for everyone was, in different situations.
You messed up a bit, but good job Allie Bell. ;)
I don't think that it should be legalized. I mean do you know what the side affects are? Also what is in it? There could be cocaine in it. If you get side affects they could be really bad and really you can't blame it on the anyone because it legalized and you took it.
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No errors, good job Nahomi. :)
Nice job Nahomi!
No. I think that people should be able to find their own happiness because a pill that UNNATURALLY gives you happiness should not be legal. Plus being happy forever would make you kind of an outcast. But hey, that's just me.
You need six sentences.
I think that it should not be legalized Because if you did something bad and you were happy about it you could get into even more trouble. If you took this pill, and then your mom died and then u would be happy about it. People would think you where the one who did it then. Also if you were actually sad or something and you needed someone to help you, you wouldn't get help because you would be smiling and then they would think that you are just fine.
One thing I found was that you put ¨u¨ instead of ¨you¨. Otherwise, good job, I agree.
Good job Bradyn.
There is nothing wrong with wanting to be happy. Some people are always sad and I could see how they would want to be able to take this pill. You don't want to live you life as a sad person, it's way better to be happy. At the same time, these pills will become addicting once you began to take them. In my opinion these pills should not be legalized just for that purpose. You can take to many and eventually die from it. So no, I do not think happy pills should be legal. People that are sad all the time need to do something besides taking pills. I've noticed that people that have more of a sad life and have bad people surrounding them are usually the ones that are alcoholics. But just for the reason of getting addicted to them and possibly sooner or later dying from it, I do not thing these "pills" should be legalized.
I totally agree with you. I saw one error where you said "You don't want to live you life as a sad person." It should be your not you but otherwise good job!
This drug should not be legalized because this drug would not let be upset. You have to get upset or sad sometimes. You have to realize what kind of challenges your going to go through. Even though I would not legalize this drug it could still be a good drug to take when your depressed. This drug should not be legalized though because if you do legalize it people are going to overuse it. Then they'd think everything was alright even if someone died. If this drug was legalized I would go against it. This drug would take over the world like cocaine or marijuana did. I think this drug is going to be 75/25 on how many people like it and dislike it. 75 being the people who don't want it to be in the United States. 25 being the people who want it to be legalized.
No, I do not think this pill should be legalized. If they made happy pills legal that would be just like a fake smile and no one wants to force a fake smile on everyday. These pills would be good for a person with depression or anger issues, but I think that they would have to be perscribed.
I do not think that the pills should be legalized. People need to have their own feelings not one feeling at all times. If people were always happy their wouldn't be those times where you just need to be sad, like at a funeral. I get that maybe then there wouldn't be thieves or murderers but that wouldn't solve anything. People should have many different feelings everyday because that's just life, it's not normal to just be happy all day every day. Also many people would probably become addicted to them. That's why I don't think these pills should be legalized.
I agree, Good job!
One day they made a pill that makes you happy. They should not legalize this drug, because it can make your life really bad. For one reason if you take and your wife comes home and says hey hone I am going to kill you and your laughing on the ground your probably going to die anyways of laughter. This drug can be used in good ways probably but still is not something I would legalize for certain reason such as the last one and this one. One day you walk home from school and see your mom, dad, and everyone you know dead sitting there in a pile you would not probably want to laugh at that. You would probably be bawling and that´s good because your letting your emotion out keeping your emotions in can hurt you. That is my reasoning. The End
Ok so today I will be telling you about this drug now wait keep an open mind please, just because I say drug doesn't mean it's bad for you okay but it can be harmful to your body in high doses just like every other medication in the world. Okay here it is it's a happy pill not very big just a normal pill but it's a interesting idea maybe your feeling down in the dumps but then you take this you are as happy as can be. Also if your friends or family might feel not so well but then you give them this one second they're wanting you to get away from them but since you can't get this simple request in your thick skull you give them this, but make sure that they actually need it and they're not just telling you to get away because your just annoying make sure to use this only when needed but it's not legalized yet so please help us get this wonderful pill into the system.
I don't think that it should be legalized. I say this because what's the point in being happy if you're not actually happy? If you take a pill to be happy all the time, how would you known when there is happiness or sadness? Taking that pill will make you have no sad moments, but sad moments are when people can bond and help each other the most. I wouldn't trade that for a life time of only happiness.
good job jacey
Good job, Jacey!
Put your actual name please not something stupid like batman.
Nice work jacey awesome story
To me this pill should not be legalized. First of all when the pill wears off you might get some weird disease, and who knows about the things that it could cause like weird hair growth, or something like that. I mean seriously who would take that drug I get it if you are depressed to take that chance of taking something that could contain a weird disease you only find in South America that is very deadly, and melts your inside and they come out of your nose. I don't under stand why you would make a pill like that they already have a pill like that that is already proven no side effects you don't don;t know if this thin has side effects, and if so what are they. It's not funny if you see some one get killed and be happy about what of someone you care about dies and you are just like he, he, he, ha, ha, ha she or he died I don't really care.
I think that this pill should not be legalized because even if it makes you happy, its still a drug! Drugs are not good for your health. Everybody knows this, and when I say everybody, I mean EVERYBODY! Seriously. Ask anybody! Anyway, I get that if you wanted to be happy because a loved one died or your video game was broken, but do you really need a drug?! Just go buy a new video game and if your parents won't let you, play other games. If a loved one died, don't try to mourn for as long as you possibly can, cherish the loved ones that you still have left. If this pill was legalized then people would always be trying to have it 24/7. Just so that their problems can go away.
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No, I do not think that it should be legalized. You are supposed to have mixed emotions, happy or sad. When you are happy and you are taking those medications you could become sick. Also I do not think that it should be legalized because if you keep taking it could wear off and not affect the way you are feeling. You shouldn't take it all the time because sometimes you need to have different emotions not just being happy all the time or just seeing the bright side of the things. That is why I think it should not be legalized.
Nice job! I so agree, that is like the same thing I put on mine!
Good job, I agree with you.
No it should not be legalized.A happy pill is not the answer to make you happy. People may be sad and want to be happy but they need to learn that a happy pill will not fix anything.They also need know that life can be better without taking a happy pill.Everyone needs to figure out what will make them happy instead of taking a pill.
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One morning a girl named Anna woke up and turned on her TV. Just as she was turning it on she saw this commercial about a happy pill. She decided she wanted to get one, so as she was on her way to school she stopped at the store. She got a pack, and took one. She was happy for the rest of the day, but she got really tired. She didn't feel good. Then she died. I suggest not taking happy pills, in fact I would make them illegal because first off you do not need to take pills just to make you happy, and lastly life would be boring if we were all happy at all times.
I think that the happy pill should be allowed because it would make a big difference to the grumpy people. It would be great when your having a bad day to be able to have something to make yourself happy. It would also be a cure to people who have serious depression, because they would have a happy life! I just can't imaging the world with all happy people! It will be the best day when they get these released, to solve all the sadness. One day it will come and everything will be amazing!
Good job, Abby no mistakes.
I don't think that they should legalized that kind of pill. I think that because depressed people might overdose on them, and die. But if there should be such a pill, they should create a law that the pill can only be prescribed by certain doctors, and can only be prescribed to depressed people. The doctors have to do a certain number of tests, and a certain kind of tests. This is because anyone can pretend to be depressed, this way they don't give it to drug dealers who will sell the pills without the doctors knowledge. Just to keep everybody safe if there was such a pill, this should be the laws for it. That is just my opinion though.
Good job, I didn't find any errors!
Very good I really like that.
I think it should not be legalized. You should like people if they bare mad or sad or even happy. If someone was sad than you could be the person who makes them happy. If your friend is happy just be happy with them. You should just like your friend for who they are not for who you want them to be. A happy pill is not needed to make someone happy, a lot of stuff could. Another reason is because after a while you will rely on the pill to keep you happy. Again the should never be legalized.
Good job! Just make sure you don't put a 'b' in front of the word 'are.'
They should never be legalized.
I think that happy pills should not be legalized. Because sometimes you need to be happy and sad some days. Your going to have really bad days and sometimes good days. Its just the way life is. You have to be yourself. Someone or something is going to make you upset Sometimes but that's just the way that life is. The happy pill will not fix anything it's just going to make it worse between you and your loved ones. Everyone is going to be upset or angry at some point in life that's just the way it is. Nobody has to be happy all the time you are special in your own way. You don't need a pill to fix your depression it's just life.
No, I don't think this should be legalized.This is a terrible idea ! If you were happy all the time you would have no emotions what so ever no angry or sad ! If someone dies you could be laughing at the funeral. You couldn't be sad if you did something you shouldn't have. They need to find happiness not from a pill. That's why i think that a happy pill shouldn't be legalized. There is only one reason I think it should be legalized is to be happy when you doing chores or at school. But I don't think it would be fun to be happy all the time emotions are what you are thinking .
I don't think it should be legalized because I think people should be able to feel the rest of their feelings. I think people should be able to express how they feel. When people feel something they don't want to be happy when they want to express their feelings.If you see something bad that happened you want to be able to feel sad not happy about it. When someone makes you angry you want to show them you made them angry (not by hitting though) you don't want to be happy while showing them that. People want to express themselves. They don't want to be controlled by a pill. That is why I think the pill should not be legalized.
I don't think that a happy pill should be legalized. If you are sad or mad or any kind of mood. A happy pill should not be the answer. The answer to your problem is to go out and do stuff and activities that make you happy, and find new people to talk to that wouldn't make you mad or sad they would make you happy. If you were going to take a happy pill. I would say you at least have to try to be happy before you go off taking a type of drug to do something for you. When and if happy pills become legalized I will not take one unless I have tried by best to become happy and haven't succeeded. Then I might think about so that I don't have to be droopy all the time.
Good job, it was the best yet!
Good Job! ;)
I believe the happy pill shouldn't be legal. There should be reasons in life that make you happy, you shouldn't have to take a pill. Being sad most of the time is cause you've made a mistake. If you don't get upset you never learn. This pill would be telling others what to feel. You wouldn't have freedom! Plus if you took the pill it's just taking away part of your humanity. Emotions are part of life. You can't just take it away.
Great job I see no errors. I feel the same way.
Good job!!! There are no mistakes.
I don't think happy pills should be legalized because: 1. You don't know what they are made of, they could have steroids in then and things that can mess with your mind and make you get addicted. 2. Drug dealers could put stuff that could kill you. 3. because people could take overdoses and die maybe because their in depression. 4. They might not even work. There are a lot of reasons why they shouldn't be legalized.
Good job, Matt. Just make sure you put the right 'there,' 'their,' 'they're.'
Lookes great no errors.
Once there was a little boy named Bobby he was never happy and he would start fights at school. Bobby hated everything and by everything I mean everything. One day his mom took him t the doctor and he prescribed Bobby happy pills. Every day he would take one happy pill after he got up and he did. Now he is very nice and he is a strait ''A'' student and never gets into trouble.
One day his mom took him t the.... Why is there a "t" between the took and him.
You need to use letters not just saying t the... .
I think that the happy pill should not be legalized. The reason for that is because if you were happy all the time then know one would be able to take you seriously. Everyone would just think that you were super annoying would hate being around you. If you were trying to stand up to a bully you would probably just get an even bigger beat down then you would have if you hadn't taken the pill. It could also be really funny though when you tell someone to stop smiling and they can't help but smile. Who wants to see a boy skipping down the hallway or prancing all the way home, I mean that would be just plain weird.
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Good job, Chase!
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Great job Chase!!
I think that there should be a pill that makes you happy all the time but, I thin that it should be given to you by your doctor. That way if you are really depressed you could not longer be depressed. I also think that they shouldn't because some times it helps if you get frustrated. You also have to fail some time if you want to live life. I think that it should not be very strong and say you forget to take it one day you'll be okay and it's not like your going to like angry the whole day. It would be awesome but, at the same time you should think of the side affects to the pill like how you know some people could get mad at you for always being happy or some thing that bothers other people.
The happy pill shouldn't be legalized. Think of being at the funeral of a close relative or a sibling or parent, and you would be smiling. That is not right. It is not in human nature to be happy all of the time. The happy pill would be cool, but if you are happy all the time it would get annoying. Also it would annoy the people around you. No one wants to see someone smiling on a Monday morning. The happy pill is stupid. If everyone took it, it would be utter chaos. Everyone would be smiling all the time and after a while you face would hurt. There should be a bill against the happy pill.
Nice job, but you forgot "r'e" in you.
Good job!! I didn't see any mistakes.
I don´t think happy pills should be legalized because you are supposed to have different feelings. You are supposed to be sad in life even though you hate being sad it´s what makes you. You can be happy on your own. You don´t need a pill to make you happy.
I agree with you logan!
Good Job Logan no errors
I would make my Happy Pill legal. My happy drug is healthy for you and I would sell my Happy Drug and people would love it. It would be great for kids. Happy Drug would be all over the world. You could take it if you were thirsty it would quench your thrust. If you were hot it would cool you down. Then if you were dying of hunger Happy Drug would quench your hunger. Finally the Happy Drug be popular!
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I think that we should have a happy pill illegalized because then we wouldn't know if some one was sad or not. If I was president I would illegalize them. Because then it would just be another drug for people to get high on. I would´n have even created it. So if there was such thing as happy pills it should be illegalized.
Hey Tristin you spelled wouldn't wrong but everything else is spelled correct and I would totally agree.
Theres a lot of people debating whether or not a happy pill should be legalized. personally i think it shouldn't be i mean what happens if people overdose on happiness that will be weird.Also a pill is not the answer it will get better eventually. Also if its addicting what if you dont have any then you will be more sad then ever before
You didn't even capitalize your "i's."
No, I do not think that this pill should be legalized. Problems would most likely start between people about whether or not it should be allowed. People are supposed to have those emotions, and sometimes people just need to let it out and cry. Making this pill would take that away. I know that I like to have emotions. I would personally never take this pill.
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Once upon a time, there was a place that was sad all the time. But a guy named Willis thought differently. He thought that there should be a pill that made you happy, and it would be all the time. Willis thought up concoctions, and mixtures, and tried it on people he didn't know ( just in case they died). Eventually, Willis made the perfect combination; julius, maxtroide,flooride, and a few others. Now, the whole world will be happy and there is peace.
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I see no errors. Good job,Lauren.
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