One day I was just eating my food and my mom called me to the kitchen. I went to the kitchen and my dad, mom, and all three of my sisters where there and I didn't think it was that serious..They told me to sit down and then they told me I was a dragon.
(By the way..They're Turkeys)
hahaha oh okay
where should be were.
Good I guess.....
No spelling errors found cuz I rolled a 4... Ugh
Okay my name is Jubala and i am a dragon who was raised by turkeys. I found this out when I was 15 years old because my parents were fighting my dad said " He is a dragon not a turkey so we cant take him to see the family this year" I ran away and never saw my parents again.
no spelling errors good job
It was thanksgiving morning and just turned 18 so i finally said i'm going to college and my mom said um i think its time we tell you something important and I said okay.They told i wasn't a flying turkey and i was a dragon so i said so why did u adopt me then?Dad turkey said because you were suposed to be a turkey egg but u are a dragon.I was so mad that i ate my family and left to cooking college and thats how thanksgiving was made
Oops for got to caps my I's and I forgot a period.
I I I I I I .
I I I I I I .
Thanksgiving, I, I, I,you, you I,
I, I, I Thanksgiving
So i'm a dragon raised by turkeys, and I have to live with them ad they just keep having babies so I take and egg when i'm hungry boil it with the fire that comes out of my mouth and eat it. You get protein and some extra flavor with the eyeballs. The turkeys don't really like that, so I say do you want me to eat you or them and then they let me have scrambled eggs every morning.
No capitalization errors.
Now it all makes sense, I'm a dragon! All this time I've been wondering why I am different from all the others. What a relief, all of my friends couldn't fly but I could and their skin was all feather but mine was hard and ruff like scales.
I rolled a one no capitalization things wrong good job!
No Spelling Errors !! NICE JOB!
1: No caps! gooooooooooood job
I was Thanksgiving day the year was 1798, it was a nice day out side Ronald McDonald the dragon was on his way to have dinner with his family. He got to his family's house his mother had redecorated. She had bought a new mirror so Ronald looked at his family and then at him self in the mirror. He thought it was one of those crazy mirrors but it wasn't. Ronald asked his mom Wendy and his dad Burger king why he wasn't like them they said "You were adopted" so Ronald ate his parents for Thanksgiving dinner then lived happily ever after!
I rolled a four and found no spelling errors. GOOD JOB
No errors great job!
Hello my name is Jeff and I live in a family of turkeys, not just regular turkeys satanic deathmetal zombolaids, but I don't look anything like them. I breath fire have scales, a long tail, wings, and super nasty teeth. As I was on a walk with my family I started to fly, even though I've always had wing I've never flown. So I tried to go down but kept going up until i reached the clouds and saw a kingdom of dragons. They told my I was a dragon and that this was my family so I ate all the turkeys the end.
turkey after zombolaids
I rolled a 4 and you need to capitalize your I k okay kk.
you for got a comma betweenfire and have
Wow.... I just found out that all these years my parents have been lying to me. See I am a dragon but I was raised by turkeys so for the last 15 years I have been acting like a turkey. I am so mad right now that im going to toast them with my fire and eat them for my breakfast. That will be the most delicious thing I have ever eaten! The reason I am being raised by turkeys because when I was just a young dragon the turkeys were wondering through the forest when they stumbled over me. Since then I have been taught to act just like a turkey. I never really knew I was a dragon. Now I an going to fly away and be a free dragon for the rest of my life
No spelling errors great job.
it is ok
No spelling errors I ate all the doougnuts.
Hi I'm a dragon but I used to think I was a turkey since I was raised by turkeys but then I found out my true identity I actually like being a dragon because I can fly really far and breathe fire. When I found out I was a dragon I got so mad that I accidentally burned my parents with my fire breath sorry. They kick me out and I'm flying to the dragon lands now so you will never see me again unless you are brave.
I rolled a 4 and in the last sentence it should be kicked not kick.
Wait whoa whoa I can't believe that I'm a dragon I thought I was a turkey sense I can remember. This this is a lot to take in I mean I thought I was a turkey but I'm actually a dragon. I'm a little mad that I've been lied to this whole time but it also explains why I was the best flyer of all my friends. No wonder I'm the biggest too. I guess that being a dragon isn't to bad because they seem really cool and they breathe fire so that pretty awesome. Now time to explore the world as a dragon.
Hi, I am going to tell you about the day I found my true identity. One day I went outside and tried to fly. I flapped my wings of courses I fell. I got up on the tree and I flapped my wings. I felt weird I looked down and saw i was fling. I was so happy until I was not looking and ran into a tree.
I rolled a four.
Fling should be flying.
Same what Emma said. ^^
One day I was walking by the park and I saw a mirror. So then I looked in it and I saw how I looked I did not look like a turkey I looked like a dragon. Then I went home to my family of turkeys. When I went inside I asked my mom if I was a dragon and she said yes. Then I asked her why she had not told me all of these years. She said because I wanted you to think you were one of us. Then I asked who is my real mom and dad. She said they live in the valley about 10 miles away.
Then I went for a walk to find my real parents. When I got to there house about one day later. I saw them making mud cupcakes. My stomach started to growl. Then I knocked on the door and they said come in and I told them the story about me being their son. They said come right in. We lived happily ever after.
I rolled a 2 you did not have any comma errors.
I rolled a one (Capitalization and punctuation)
Insert a period in the first line after "looked".
No comma erros.
I was raised by turkeys and I thought I was a turkey to but the day it is a day I will never forget..... Ok so the day started out like this. I wzs at home woke up went to eat some korn (corn) for breakfeast and it wasnt a normal day it was snowing out and my family didnt like to leave the tree when it was cold but I didnt see the big deal, anyway I was outside eating korn and then I noticed that my korn was burnt and I was wondering what it was that burnt my korn, Then I sneezed and instead of snot it was fire and I freaked out cause my nose was like burning and my turkey legged mom walked out and asked what was wrong and I told her that fire came out of my nose and then she told me I was actually a dragon and I was so mad at my turkey family for not telling me my true identity so I lit them on fire and ate them.
wzs should be was.
I rolled a four.
It was a frigid Tuesday night when we found a little dragon on the doorsteps of our cottage. He was in a basket with an umbrella so he must have fallen from the sky. When we brought him inside he stopped crying. We knew he was going to be happy here. For the next three years he became as tall as me. We had taught him to fly away from any danger that had come in our paths."But soon, he will have to go." said mama turkey. We would have to move into the neighbors property if we want to have enough food for him. Sadly, they had to kick him out.
My name is Sparkle-Berry! My moms name is Dazzle-Berry and my dads name is Dandy. Im a turkey and my parents are turkeys to, But one dad they told me that i was going to have to go to dragon school and I asked them why and they told me that I was left out all alone when i was little and they took me in and said i was a turkey and i was their child but Now that I know this Im not a turkey and they are not my real parents! I really dont know how to act to this but I know I am sad and mad! I really just want to run away! I never thought about me looking diffrent from all my friends I mean some of them pointed it out but I always just ignored them. My parents are truly sorry but I told them I dont want to go to dragon school and I want to stay here at turkey school! If i were to go to dragon school I wouldnt make friends and I know that dragons are mean! They make fun of people and its not cool!! I love my friends here at turkey school and I am going to stay here no matter what people say!!
you forgot to capitalize your i's
Well, I have always thought I was the odd man out in this family and I never came up with the nerve to ask my mom and dad. Every time I look in the mirror I always ask myself who am I. Then one day I finally decided to ask, but I'm asking my mom and not my dad something about him makes me a little scared, I love him but I would never talk to him about something like this. I go to my mom and ask her where I came from. She stared at me with the whitest eyes I have ever seen. She looked like she was about to cry, but she didn't, she sighed and started to tell me." I new this day would come, Henry your father and I love you very much, when you were little your mom gave birth to you and she was a very close family friend, but once you entered this world she left this world." She paused and I was silent I had no idea what to say. " This was not your fault she was very ill before she even had you, we had no kids when we took you in and we have loves you ever since then." I still had nothing to say so I said I loved her and I told her that I loved her and I left.
Nice job! I rolled a three and found no errors.
Okay so I guess that i'm a dragon but I guess other people and other dragons are saying that i'm from another family and was raised by turkey's. Well so of course I didn't believe it so then I guess after a few years I started acting like a turkey, dancing like a turkey, and talking like a turkey. Then it just went to far that I just filled with rage because I never got to go and hang out with the cool dragons. Every time I go to school I get made fun of because again I act like a turkey, dance like a turkey, and talk like a turkey. I hated my life so much so I just had enough of the getting made fun of and pushed. So that night I went right to bed and woke up the next morning. That's when I just had enough of it so I went to the woods and tried to find a turkey and found one and that is when I found out when I was raised by a turkey.
I rolled a 1
No errors :)
I have always noticed that I was a little different from the rest of my family members, but it never really bothered me until I had grown up. Over the years, I realized that I had been growing much faster than the others. I was really tall and muscular, but I didn't have any feathers. My family members hardly grew at all, they were plump and stubby, and they had a mountain of feathers on them. I always thought it was a genetic thing, but it's definitely something else. They slowly even became to took appetizing, and it made me insane. I asked some friends of mine who looked like me and thought I was crazy. They told me everything, and I was stunned. I had almost grown up by then, so I left my feathery family and flew away to live on my own.
I rolled a 4, and I saw no spelling errors, good job!
No adjective are needed! ;)
My name is Deon the turkey. I am from a field in Nebraska, and I was raised by a family of turkeys. One day I was packing up for college and my turkey mom said she had to talk to me. Mom said that I am not a turkey, I am a dragon. She said I was born in another country and my original parents are dragons. This is crazy.
Rolled a three. No errors.
No spelling errors...
"Squawk squawk squawk squawk!" That's usually all I hear from her. Honestly I most of the time don't know a word they're saying. I just guess what mother is saying its easier. Dad I can understand more he'll even translate what she says so I can understand. I always feel, bigger like I'm looking down on everyone. I feel different but they tell me I'm not. Then one day I was pecking for some seeds and mother came up and squawked slowly. Then dad came and translated. "You are different your actually a dragon like in the stories we tell you." I looked down. "Are you serious?" My dad nodded slowly. I opened my mouth to say something, but my voice wouldn't work. Instead I ate the whole flock in 1 gulp. And from then on I terrorizing anything in my path.
Have you ever heard the saying, "You can soar with the eagles when your flying with the turkeys?" Well, that's how I felt my first day at public school. Early in the morning, Momma Turkey woke me up and made me ham sandwich. (we turkeys like to stay away from turkey sandwiches) She then put it in a paper sack and sent me one the big yellow bus. The moment I stepped on the bus, I noticed that it was divided into to sections. Of course, the turkey section, but also a section of big ferocious dragons. I immediately sat down next to a turkey wearing a baseball cap. I thought we looked about the same age, and maybe we would have something in common, like baseball. He turned to look at me and started crying. Tears rolled down his face. I tried to comfort him, but that caused him to start screaming! I was so confused. By then, the bus driver was there. He picked me up and threw me to the other side of the bus, next to one of the beasts. I didn't know why I, a turkey, was on the smelly, squished side of the bus. I became so mad that I began yelling and throwing a tantrum, but then fire came out of my mouth. That was the first moment that I realized that I was a dragon, not a turkey.
I rolled a two and I found no errors in that section.
Great job!!! I found no errors!!
Hello my name Mr.happytimeunicornfunfunplace. My parents names are Mr,and Mrs. cornbread stuufing were are wild turkey well at least they are im a dragon .Ilearen this the mourning that the whole flock was gone their was a note the tree and it said yeah kinda forgot to tell you this but you are a dragon and we decided that whene you found out you slould have nobody to be their. So i grabed my shootgun and went hunting now it is thaksgiving and and i am having smoked turky
I got home one day and I heard my mom talking to my dad. It sounded important so I listened. She said to my dad 'Shes gonna find out sooner or later that shes adopted.' Ounce I heard that I ran to my room, packed all my stuff in suitcase and I wrote them a note saying that I was running away to find my real parents. I opened the window and flew away. I was going to find them no matter what.
I didn't find any problems!! By the way awesome story!!
:) no mistakes :)
No spelling errors that I see.
No spelling errors.
No mistakes !!!!!!!!!
Wow.... I just found out that all these years my parents have been lying to me. See I am a dragon but I was raised by turkeys so for the last 15 years I have been acting like a turkey. I am so mad right now that im going to toast them with my fire and eat them for my breakfast. That will be the most delicious thing I have ever eaten! The reason I am being raised by turkeys because when I was just a young dragon the turkeys were wondering to look for food and they found me laying in my bed. So they thought that they could raise me . So they took me back to their home and raised me.
I like your very own original response.
Oh my gosh. For 835 years my parents, Or should I say my "parents" said that I wasn't a turkey. Unbelievable, the way they treat me. I always knew I was somehow different. When I was 300, this was in 3rd grade, When we all tried to fly. I went about 400 more feet than they did. Now that I realize it I am about the biggest living thing alive! Oh I feel like I have been shunned! I am running, far far away!
I rolled a 4, and i saw no spelling errors but I saw that or shouldn't be capitalized. Anyway, good job!
I rolled a 4 no errors
Today was a crazy day. I just found out that I am actually not a over sized turkey! I always thought that I was a little weird to be a turkey. It all started when I was talking to Mom and when I said "fire" fire came out of my mouth. I finally now know that I am actually a dragon.
One upon a time there was a family of turkeys who had a baby dragon. When little Timmy was just a little guy he didn't know he was raised by turkeys. When Timmy got middle aged he started wondering about his mom and dad and why they didn't look like him and why they were fat and he was skinnier than him. So Timmy was all grown up and realized his parents were turkeys and Timmy got mad he shot them and ran away and never came back! THE END!
Timmy? What happened to you Timmy?
The day i discoverd i was a dragon was when i was 15 feet tall and every body else was 2 feet tall so i decided to eat them. After that i flew around and ate animals.
I've know since I was little that I was not the same as my family. We were both brown and both have wings; but then again I was ten times bigger than them and didn't usually get shot. When ever my family interacted with humans, they usually ran away right when they saw me; other wise I would have to breath fire. Right now I am not feeling good. I have a feeling that someone bad I coming. When I get scared I usually go and watch for people, so that's what I'm doing right now. Coming across the hill I see this huge creature, with another one right next to him. They start flying towards me when they see me. I am too terrified to run so I stand there like a statue. The creature lands right in front of me. He silently say "Hello son," and that's when it hits me that I am definitely not who I thought I was.
I figured out why I'm so tall! I'm a dragon and all the other little kids are turkeys. It started in the third grade, I was sitting in class not paying attention to the teacher and I started to wonder why I was 7 feet tall and all the other kids are 2 feet tall! I went home and asked my mom, why am I so tall and all the other kids are short? She said she didn't know so I slapped her. So she told me to looked the mirror . I found out that is was a dragon! so I got my baseball bat and hit my mom with it cause I didn't want to be a dragon!
Rolled number 1.
So is not capitalized
I am a dragon, and I was raised by a family of turkeys. I was always bigger than them but finally found out what animal I really am. It was the week before thanksgiving during turkey season, so we where prepared for the evil hunters. I was on charge of guarding camp when I heard a twig snap and a gun being loaded. I stood up and tried shouting for mama turkey, but instead of shouting I let this huge fireball out of my mouth killing the hunter and burning the forest.
My parents we glad but mad I burnt down their home. We now live in
northern Nebraska where we stay away from humans.
Well you see kids I was raised by turkeys because my mom and dad died when I was just an egg. There was a family of turkeys that took me and raised me the first time a noticed I was different is when I was about thirteen years old it was hunting season my parents were cornered and I jumped in front of the hunters they rain like they had just seen a ghost. I asked my parents why did the hunters try to kill you but not me. They said it is because that we have lied to you you are actually a dragon you can breath fire and fly. Cool I thought to my self. So kids that's how I found out that I was a dragon.
rolled a 3
Hello my name is Bob and I'm just a normal turkey here just telling you my life story. It all began when I was born, of course, I was raised by my mom Tina and my dad Joe I have two siblings. One day I noticed I looked a lot different from my family, I asked them why. Then they told me. "I'm a dragon no I can't be" I yelled. "You, you lied to me all my life" I yelped. I moved out and found a new family.
Rolled a 2. No errors Good Job!!!!
Every day I wake up, eat breakfast with my family and head off to school. But for some reason today I woke up late, coulden't eat with my family and so I was late to school. When I walked into school my friend turkeys stared at me. Not like they usely do joking around, saying im a random unknown thing but they looked at me like they knew something. I guess they realized that i knew something was up so they turned away. I asked them and they all refused but my one friend who always tells me every thing. IM A DRAGON!!!!! I cant be a dragon i thought i mean i have always felt out of place but never could i imagine being a dragon, so i ran and flew! Ya i FLEW in the sky. That's when i realized it was true.
You forgot to capitalize your I's
Great job, but remember to capitalize "I"!!
When I hatched I was in lots of hot water and I had to swim up for air. When I got to the top I was in some sort of cave, but the thing is that it didn't look like a cave should. It was nice and cozy and had a lot of soft bouncy stuff. Then a tall animal came down and saw me, it screamed and chased me out. I then saw a lot of feathery thing hopping around, they avoided me as I walk over to them. to be continued.
I remember when I was a little kid (also it's pretty important to know that I'm a dragon) I was flying around with my parents then all of the sudden I started falling I didn't know why I just was I hit the ground and got knocked out. Then I woke up in the jungle surrounded by turkeys. All I could understand was them saying was gobble a bunch then they started to walk away and I didn't know what to do so I followed them and that's how I started getting raised by turkeys. Oh yeah I forgot to tell you that all of them were wearing some weird underwear thing.
I am now 18.Since I was born I thought that I was a turkey.But that thought changed cause when I got home from playing I heard my mom tell me to come here and she said"Did you have fun playing"I said "yeah why"she said there is something I have to tell you"She said that she signed me up for this marathon and I said cool.So The day of the marathon they would let the bigger animals go last and the smaller one go first so I get to the check in spot and they say are you here to watch I said no the turkey said that I cant play cause I'm not a turkey so that's when I found out that I am not a turkey.
I was a loner before I was adopted by a family of turkeys when I was 1000 years old. They brought me to their house and fed me and then changes my diapers. I used to take care of them also. If they needed to cook something, I just spitfire, but sometimes I got a little wound up. So I went outside and then I figured out than none of my brothers or sisters or mom and dad could spit fire like me. But I said who cares and kept walking. One day I was walking with my dad on thanksgiving and he got shot with a bow. I ran before whoever that shot it shot me instead. In my head I thought why was it him not me he was so young. That's when I came home and they were cooking, and told them dads dead. I went to my room and thought am I really a turkey I could get shot and I don't want that to happen. So they told me that I was a dragon and then I said naww. They said yaaaa. So I ran away and after a million years I wrote this book and sent it to my kids. That's when my son got adopted by a deer!!!!?????!!!?
I was turning 17 at the point when my parents finally told me i was not theirs and that they found me at a young age. I was in shock. They asked if i forgave them. At this point all i could think about was all the anger and i was hungry. So i roasted them alive and had myself a turkey dinner. Man was i hungry, now with a full stomach i went to bed. I woke up with a jolt and farted out fire i was so scared. The turkey hut burnt down i tried to put it out with my spit but more fire came out. I thought well more turkey for me. It was close to Thanksgiving day anyway why wait. After I feasted I went up to the farmers door. His wife was scared i asked do you know where my parents live. She started to run. I tried to scream for her to stop but she was burnt alive instead. I started laughing and i don't know why. Maybe i was tired or still hungry. I accepted the fact i would be a loner for the rest of my days. #lonerforlife
Okay so one day I was eating my snack when my mom called me to the kitchen. When I went in there my mom said that we can't tell dad, that he will figure it out sooner or later. And I said "Wait, What". I found out quickly that my mom said I was a dragon. WoW! So i guess if dad found out then he would be mad. One day he came home and went to the kitchen to get a drink, as usual. My mom went in there and she said I hoped you wouldn't find out, but you did. So it's not a secret anymore. Then he said, It's alright, I don't care anymore. But when she gets fully grown, then you will put her in the adoption.
I was eating in my room than my Step Mom, and my Dad called me to go to the livingroom there was my 2 brothers and 2 sisters i didnt know it was that serious they told me to sit down so I did they were saying weird stuff then it got scary they told me I was a Dragon..
Ok,to start things out,I have to tell you that I am a dragon,and I was raised by a family of a turkeys.That's crazy, I know, but the thing,I really didn't know that I was me until that one day that showed me what I was.I was with my turkey family,and we were just done with dinner(which was fried sheep),and I decided to go put the dishes away,and I heard something coming from my parents room,they were talking.I wanted to know what they were talking about so I flew up to there room and right when I did I heard they were talking about me,and they were talking about how they found me lost,abandoned by my parents,and that I was a dragon(for the truth I didn't realize that until they said that)I got mad cause they should have told me more about myself,so I got so mad that I just left,gone from those unloyal turkeys,to live my life.
Hi my name is billy the turkey. I live with my sister, brother, mom, and dad, but killed them all. I killed her because she told me I was really a dragon and I didn't like her anyway. She gave me spankes. So I ate her. I ate the rest of my family cause I was bored. Turkeys are really good to eat.
Um no spelling errors I think Spankes..??
It was a cold, foggy day in December and a group of Dr. Knight's henchdragons came and attacked Turkeyville where all the turkeys live. The dragons come to our nest and asked my parents if they would come nice and calm or is they had to kill them. They wouldn't go so they killed them right before my very eyes. They would have killed me because I thought I was a turkey but Dr. Knight said that I was a dragon. He asked me if I wanted to join his henchdragons and I said "Yes." He took me under his wing and raised me as his own. That was the day I learned I was a dragon. THE END!
I knew it. I've always know it, i'm a dragon. My stupid little brother has always said i'm adopted. My parents just came out, and said it to me. They said that my parents, the dragons, just put me up for adoption and flew away. Thankfully, the turkeys, adopted me. I'm bound to find my real parents, I can't live my whole live "gobble, gobbling" and fleeing away before Thanksgiving. I'll try my hardest to find my parents, even though it might mean that I'll never find them. I'm just sick of turkeys.....
Well, I guess my life was pretty normal. I ate with my turkey family, I sleep with my turkey family, and pretty much everything with my turkey family. It started when I was little. When I was little my family told me that I was going to grow up to be a brave, strong turkey. Well, unfortunatly I did grow up, but not as a big turkey like they said I was going to be. No, I grew up to FLY, have big,big wings,and breath fire. I had to be careful when I got angry because If I got to carried away I would probably kill my WHOLE family just by my fire! That would be bad! When I got to the age to move away, my "parents" told me that I could never fly because since I was a "Turkey" I had to stay hidden or else I would be dinner. So I went away and I still flew but I never got shot.
I think I did pretty good!
You know, when you are a dragon being raised by turkeys your life can be really weird. Hi, names Smaug and this is what happened to me. When I found out my true identity I was walking through a village not far of the river and I sneezed and fire came out my nose and I might of burned their feild of corn. I thought it was just an allergy but then I jumped and I flew, so weird. I flew to the river and looked at my reflection and you know what I was a dragon. So now I just terrizoize the towns people and they come after me with torches and pichforks but hey it's all fun and games for me, and I ate my family, oh well so be it. I love my dragon life it is so much better than my other life.
It was a cold winter day and all my what so called family was making weird sounds. I always wonder why I can's.One day i got the answer because they are turkey and I'm a dragon. Well after that I ran away and never saw them again.A week after that I meat up with a new family of dragons.
fix can's to can
Hello I'm a dragon my name is toothless yes I am a night fury. I was trying to get some fish to eat and some boy came up and drawed me on paper. So I went to hang on a tree. He followed me. Then he left he came back with some stuff to put on me so he could ride me. He had some fish in a basket. Then we flow into the sky it was. Oh and the boy's name is Hick up.
Hi my name is Bubba .I live with a my family of turkeys .On Thanksgiving one year my mom and dad and sister all got taken away but me .So I was wondering what they are doing to them when the big van came up to get them .I heard what they called me .They called me a dragon and tried to kill me with this long stick thing that shot out some little rocks .It hurt so long story short my life was all fake kinda I am a dragon now I know that much I hope that my mom did not lie about anything else....
Ok, to start out I am a dragon and I was raised by a bunch of Turkey's. When I was a little one I had lost my family and could not find them then I found these Turkey's and they took me in. They called me little scamp, I thought it was weird but oh well. Anyways back to my story I was about 9 years old when I found out I was a dragon living with a bunch of Turkey's.......
"son you are a dragon".......NO YOU DON'T SAY! I mean seriously how could I not tell mean i'm HUGE what is wrong with you turkeys did you really think i wouldn't notice I burnt bill last week did you think I wouldn't notice the whole fire breathing thing.... god you guys are idiots. WHAT'S NEXT I'M NOT YOUR SON...don't even say it or so help me I will eat you all..."but son we just wanted you to-NO! don't you dare say another word "but if you you knew then what are you mad now"...sarcasm I was using sarcasm you IDIOT...wow just wow I quit I can't take your stupidity any longer
Once upon a time there was a dragon that grow up with turkeys.The turkeys took cear of him but when he grow up all the kids in turkey where scared of him.he always got in trouble with the princible.So one day he started to think to him self why am I so diffirent from the other kids.When he was 13 he gruw his wing.then he ate him parents.the end
CRACK! I burst out of my shell! I was finally born. When I opened my eyes a saw a family of large birds that are apparently called turkeys. I love my family and they taught me many things, but nothing prepared me for what I was about to find out. It was my third birthday with my family when I realized that I wasn't like them. I had scales, they didn't. I had four legs, they had two. I had a long skinny tail, they had a big fan-like tail, and the list could go on. I knew I wasn't like then from that moment. What exactly was I then? Well I kept on with my life as if I never knew I'm not like the rest of my family. Then on my fifth birthday, I got the courage to ask my parents about it. They said it plain and clear. They said "Honey, you are a dragon." I clearly understood this, so about a week later I flew away in search of someone like me.
I rolled a 4 and found no spelling errors, good job!
Hi! My name is Brooklynn. I was walking with my family down a road when we see a wild, mysterious, deadly killer-a human. I wasn't one to eavesdrop, but I felt like I had to. I heard it say, 'Why is that dragon following those geese?'. I must have misheard it, because I'm not a dragon. Then I looked at myself in a puddle. I did have feathers, a beak, or webbed-feet. It was right! I am a dragon. A monster feared by all! I quickly flew away as fast as I could. After flying a while, I went to a large cave. I decided to stay there waiting for an unlucky soul to wander by. When I was hungry. Very hungry.
Last 2 sentences= Then I would be hungry, very hungry.
change geese to turkeys
I'm a dragon, and i live with turkeys (my parents)...........
Honestly I was in the perfect family. They fed me they taught me how to fly all though my brothers and sisters couldn't I thought that was kinda strange. My dad didn't even try to teach them, only me. I got so curious one day that I asked my mom and she said " Well....um..you... go ask your father.". So i flew as fast ass i could over to my dad. I said "dad how come i can fly and Lucy and Mack can't.". He said "well son you're different from us your a dragon and your supposed to be dead by now but your mother and I didn't wanna gv up on you all we did was care for you and you grew and you grew, so we decided we better teach you how to fly and that we did you had a curious look in your eye so we knew this day was coming around the corner and here we are now. I cried and ate them everyone who knew besides my newborn baby sister she didn't know anything even though shes a turkey i will teach her howto fly!
This Thanksgiving has probably got to be a world record of the WORST Thanksgiving in the history of the universe. My "parents" Mayor and Mrs. Turkey decided to tell me that I was a dragon, and not a turkey. Here's how it all started. I woke up bright and early Thanksgiving morning so I could get a head start on the food I was cooking. I had just stuck the roast beetle in the oven when my parents gobbled into the kitchen.
"I think we should tell him," my mother said.
"It's safer if we don't dear," my pops said.
And that's when they saw me, their eyes were wide with horror. I asked what was going and and they were silent. My fist started smashing the freshly baked pumpkin pie.
"What do you need to tell me," I asked.
At the same time they replied, "You're not a turkey, you're a dragon!"
I was panting so hard by then that fire came out! I ran out of the house sobbing. My mother felt awful and was sobbing also. I decided to go back into the house, but things weren't the same ever again.
I rolled a 2. There is no comma errors.
Hello my name is George the dragon I was raised by a family of turkeys after all my family was killed by the towns people. My mom was a very strange turkey i think she loved to gobble up stew all the time which kinda freaked me out. When I was brought into this family I didn't really know what to expect but it was kinda nice of them. I told my family that one day I will get revenge on the people that killed my family even if I have to die trying, so I did. I set off in the east of the mountain because that is were there village was. I really hated them for what they did, they deserve what is about to come. After flying for 3 hours I finally reached my destination. As one person saw me they started to shout "The Dragon is coming" Over and over and a load of archers came out from there armory they started firing over and hitting me over and over but they aim was pretty bad so that was a advantage. As I landed I started burning them alive with there houses not even caring any more. As all the houses where burned I got slayed by a mighty boy.
Once upon a time in a forest there was a dragon and three turkeys.
The dragon was supposedly there son and he had to fly them around on his back. One day when he was 18 years of age he saw something in the sky that made him question his "parents". He went to go see the turkeys but when he got back he saw there where three baby dray devouring the turkeys. He didn't really care because he knew he couldn't be anywhere close to related to the birds. He went up the the babies (still eating roast turkey) and asked them where their parents were. When one of them opened his mouth to speak some turkey came out of his mouth so he just pointed behind the dragon. When he turned around he found a huge yellow dragon standing behind him. The yellow dragon spoke with a low voice and said "How are you and why are you disturbing my children's feast?"...
You used the wrong there it should be their, what is a dray? You put the twice in a sentence, other wise there is no other errors.
Once upon a time, I, the beastly fire breathing dragon, was a turkey. Yes, a turkey. It all started when I was three, my parents and my sibiling went our to get lunch. It was my turn to stay home and gaurd the nest. I had been dinking around in the living room, when I heard people shouting "Look it's the beast and it's family! Get them!" I have never seen my real mom again. At the time I didn't know what was going on, so I went to sleep on an empty stomach waiting for my family to return with food. I woke up with these strange creatures looking over top of me. "Who are you people?" I said. "We are the turkeys" they replied " from the northern part of the mystical forest." They helped me up, and took me to their home.I had learned their ways, ate like them, walked like them, talked like them...............
OK it all stared like this...One day i wok up and my turkey mom told me it was time for briefest and so i got up and went well i always knew i ate more then all of the turkeys in the house I had 2 full sided pigs it was the best ever and my family all had corn after that i walked to school and all of my friends are running away well they do that every time but this was different they said i grew some big wings i said yea all of us do but when i looked they had no feathers Mamie i wold molting but i cold not have been i did not see any on the floe when i looked at the mire i got mad and flew away then killed a knight THE END...
I woke up* Woke*breakfast* I always* Maybe* I would* Could* Floor* Mirror*
Hi my name is Landon ya I now that Im a dragin and i now that I was rasded by a trky well there not going to be in this story becase I ate them they were delisios so lets get to the story so I was waking one day the I herd a noise in the trees so I got ready to burn them ges what it was it was a deer so I burned it any way it was good then one day I was waking and a dragen came out of the trees I asked him if he was lost he was not he was my father the my mom came out the a buch of deer came out so we killed them all with my famly.
So after all this time I'm a dragon I wondered why all this time when I would cook and eat somebody every once and a while they would stare at me like i was a loon and then proceed with there grazing my parents always said it was just a faze so I never though of it but just the other day I noticed I didn't look like the rest I'm fifteen foot tall and I have scales and breath fire!!
Hi! My name is Kathy, I'm a turkey. Yesterday was my birthday and I turned 21, My parents had a wierd rule that I couldn't leave the house until I was 21. But I woke up this morning and I felt like today was the day, I went into to the kitchen, made hickory nut pancakes. I all so made clover pancakes, cherries, and frog pancakes. Those are my family's favorite kinds of foods to be put in there pancakes. My parents came down and I said todays the day, Im going to college. They started saying I couldnt, but we got into a fight, They randomly yelled at me '' YOU ARENT A TURKEY YOUR A DRAGON!!!!'' I ran out of the house......
I rolled a 1
I don't see anything wrong.
so good job
It was a very very cold day and my family was telling me that it is the day before thanksgiving. They said that we had to take cover because people are hunting for us for thanksgiving. Oh and just in case you hadn't figured it out we are turkeys, well at least I thought I was. Okay, I get, you're wondering how in the world I wouldn't know i'm not a turkey. Oh, I almost forgot to tell you I am a dinosaur. Ya, ya, that just makes it worse and I can't even believe it. I just grew up around them and put together in my mind that I was just a little different. Oh fine, a lot different. How was I supposed to know. Nobody told me. Anyway back to the story. It was the day before thanksgiving and my family and I were going out to take a walk when we saw a hunter. Well I have five other people in my family and I heard five gunshots. I knew it was over, but wait, there was only five gunshots and altogether counting me here are six people in my family. Then I over heard the hunter and his partner talking about how the had no idea what I was or what they would do. Then I realized that I'm not a turkey. I am just a strange ugly animal that found the best family I could ever have and I would never forget them.
On Thanksgiving day, me and my turkey family went over to my cousin Larrys house. When we got there, their children were scared of me. I wanted to play with them but they ran away from me. I got really sad and went up in my really really big tree house. My mom came up and talked to me. The moment became really silent and then she finally spoke up saying "You're a dragon." I was so shocked. I thought I was one of them. She told me how she saved me from being a dragon burger. She told me everything I needed to know. She thought It was time for me to leave and do my own thing. I didn't want to leave, and I never wanted to. She said " I had a amazing 13 years of my life, and I think you're old enough to explore new things." I got up, and gave her a big hug, even though I almost smashed her between my wings. I finally flew off and later on I found a lot of things about me I never knew. I'll always miss my family but now I'm where I belong.
Once upon a time there was a dragon. But this dragon didn't have a regular dragon family. They were more like birds, or like turkeys. This dragon was very happy with his family though. Until one day he had a sudden urge to eat a turkey sandwich. So he ate the turkey sandwich not knowing his brother turkey was in there. Then he ate another turkey sandwich, but this time his sister was in there. His life was terrible then. So his parent turkeys told him the truth when he was around 21 years old and found out he could blow fire out of his mouth. They told the dragon exactly that he is a dragon. Not a turkey and he never will be a turkey. So he cooked them with his fire breathing powers and ate them.
SO I was just playing with my bro chicken. We were playing football my fav game! I was running and then my brother said use ur wings!!! So I started moving them and I flew off the ground and then stopped and fell backdown. I knew for sure something was up. At night I sneeked out of our barn . I did the flap again and this time I could control it! I soared through the air. Only then did I relize im not a chicken because chickens cant fly.
I was born around a bunch of turkeys and they said I was their child. I have spent my whole life with them, they have been my guardians. So for the longest time I thought I was a turkey too.
Until one day I was walking along and I came across a man walking and he said that I was a dragon, but I told him that I am a turkey. Then he showed me a mirror and then showed me a picture of a turkey. That was the day I found out I was a dragon.
"Bale Fire! Help!" My sister Tiana gobbles in terror as the loud bang fills the air. I run towards her but her body goes limp and she dies. Her spirit leaves to join the remainder of my family in heaven.
I whimper and take flight, flying away from the terrible slaughter of my entire family.
I was the only one who could ever fly and that's why I lived the longest. I was also much larger than them too. I fly to a higher altitude, higher than the clouds and nearly collide with something that looks like me.
It turns around and looks at me.
"Bale Fire?" Her voice is soft and hopeful.
"Yes? Maam how do you know my name?"
"I'm your mother."
There are no errors that I could find, except that the ending doesn't seem like it's really an ending. It's too much of a cliff hanger. Other then that I think it's great.
You need to have commas in a lot of your sentences and that's about it.
Never mind I was wrong its fine.
I was adopted. I found out when my parents told my that I'm a dragon, not a turkey. What happened was I had to get a blood test and it said my real name is Alfred B. Draggin'. This seemed odd because I was always called Ashton D. Turkey! So when I confronted them about it, they told me the story of how they were in the woods one day and they saw my real mom getting slain. So after she die, they took me in (I was her only egg) and as I grew up they told me I was a "special" turkey. So I just went along with it. I grew up thinking I was a turkey. They found me when I was a newborn, now I'm 15. So I spent 15 years telling everyone I was a turkey. That explains all the weird looks I've been getting. Now, if you'll excuse me, I'm gonna go cry and think some more. Bye!!
You have no errors. I rolled a 4. And also. XD
Well here is my story a couple of turkeys took me in after a knight slayed my real parents so they told me after some turkeys were making fun of me and I got so angry I burned them so I thought might as well not let them go to waste and there is my life's story.
Rolled a 2 no errors.
Life's story? What? I rolled a four and didn't find anything wrong.
I was always bigger than my turkey siblings. One day I was walking around and a guy yelled " A DRAGON!!! " and I was all like " That's not my name my name is doodledorf." . The next person said he was a dragon to and I started to freak out. So I look what a dragon is and I got angry. Then I went to the town and demolished the town. The End.
I was finally leaving my house to explore the world, and my parents told me that instead of being a turkey like them, I was actually a dragon! It came as a shock to me, but as I thought about it, it made so much sense! This new discovery only made my journey more personal for me, and I wanted to discover who I really was. Now was the time.
So there I was, a young turkey with scales and wings blowing fire at my fellow turkeys. Cooking them for thanksgiving for the humans . And then I noticed I wasn't a turkey and I asked my self is this my true self ,going around gobbling and getting shot at by hunters. No it wasn't so I left all the turkeys and lived a lonely boring life. Burning down forest and living in caves.
rolled a 2 didn't see anything wrong.
I rolled a four, and I didn't see anything wrong.
I'm a dragon raised by two turkeys. I had wings like no other. One day I was flying as fast as I could and crashed into a mountain. and broke my right wing. I yelled as loud as I could and then I could hear the sirens of the turkey ambulance heading my way. That made me feel a lot better. When I got in the ambulance and looked in the mirror. That was the moment that I finally realized who I was. I was an over weight turkey.
one day I was sitting a playing with my wet noodle gun and then my parents came in and had a talked. They said I was a dragon and in case you don't know my mom and dad are turkeys.and I'm a dragon all of a sudden. So I was devastated that they told me I was a dragon the other kids a school made fun of me all the time but I never knew why. So I ran away and I set off on my quest.
Capitalize the O, Capitalize And
one should be One ; and should be And
Wait I knew all along but I'm not to sure about the "dragon" part. Will you be turned into pie? Or will the crazy lady die in a pot of boiling gravy? I know it's just a movie, and about chickens but still.
I was a dragon that was raised by a family of turkes. The sun was being down on this warm summer day and there were the hunters. I was the only own who saw the hunters and I found out that they were hunting the turkes....
Hi I'm a dragon named Bob, and I'm going to tell you how I found my true identity. So one day I was in my house with my turkey family, so I thought I was a turkey. My parents were cooking up dinner when I went outside and I something that looked really good, a rabbit. I don't know why it looked good, cause I was a turkey, I felt my insides warming up then, ROAR!!!!!!!! I saw, I think it was fire then I told my parents and they told me I was a dragon.
rolled a 4 no errors
I really don't know what happened the past few months. It was pretty weird. Well, I'll try to explain it to the best of my ability.
I woke up next to a turkey. Boy, I bet you can already tell how weird this is gonna be. It got weirder when I saw I was in a costume. I couldn't tell what it was, but it was colored like a turkey so I went with it. I felt hungry, so I looked at the turkey. The fat, juicy turkey. It made a great meal. 'Cept the worms were a bit overcooked. Over the many weeks that stretched into many months I learned a lot on the life of a turkey. I learned how they got worms, how they ate, and how to fly small distances. I don't know how I could actually fly small distances, so I just chose to go along with it. Then one day, while walking, I found a spring. I decided to wash myself off, and found that I was actually wearing a dirty dragon costume. I was just brown from dirt and stuff. It was weird moment of clarity. It was then I thought it was getting too weird. I found my way out of the forest and proceeded home.
~Jakob Von Wurtz of FR,FI,ILL Who got a free dragon costume
(^ this actually would be my real last name if my great-grandpa wouldn't have changed it)
Rolled a 1
I rolled a four and no errors
rolled two no errors
I would burn all the chickens and run to my homeland. I would burn their chicken coop and eat them all! I would bring all my family and attack. In a book it would be named THE attack of dragons.
Rolled a 1. No errors, but this is not really what she asked us to write.
i don't get it?
Once upon a time there was a baby dragon that was abandoned.One day a group of turkeys took him in and raised him as their own.So he thought he was a turkey.Then he when out to get some food then he sneezed then he blew fire out of his nose.Then he heard a person said"dragon!"So he knew he was a dragon.
"I can't believe you've been lying to me my entire life," I said. Hi, my name is Rose, and this was the point in time i found out I wasn't a turkey. I'm really a bright pink and rose colored dragon. My family are turkeys though.
"Look sweetie," said my supposed mother, "Let me explain this all to you." So, I took a deep breath and let her explain herself, but she was going to have to make it good. Otherwise I am out of here.
"We found you down by Dragon's Creek. We were amazed that you were alive, because all the dragons are supposed to be extinct. We took you in as one of our own, and were going to tell you that you were a dragon when you were twelve, so that you could go get a job. It was getting harder though. You kept calling us mommy and daddy, which was making it harder for us. We finally told you know, because your getting way too big for the house. Don't get me wrong your beautiful, but your one-hundred feet tall now."
"Whatever, Mrs. Turkeyman."
Rolled a 1. "and this was the point in time i found out I wasn't a turkey." The "I" needs to be capitalized. And that's it good job. I loved your story
Rolled a 1, the ¨I¨ in your second sentence is lowercased
Capitalize the I