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Jake Korn
11/19/2014 11:12:51 pm
That tv looking thing up above yeah that it's like magic. You can draw with the knobs and then earase by shaking it, so I guess you could call it magic.
Nathan Platt
11/21/2014 04:31:26 am
it's should be is.
Traeten
11/21/2014 04:32:18 am
Erase is spelled wrong It was a strange afternoon there was a guy dressed like Gandalf from the Hobbit and kept on saying you shall not pass on the front steps of the school and all of a sudden a giant hole of lava in front of him. Then this weird dragon thing came running from the highway its run was really weird and then fell in the hole yelling "SEE YA"
Riley Allison
11/21/2014 03:47:38 am
I got #4 Spelling Errors and you have no spelling errors.
Reed Malleck
11/19/2014 11:16:54 pm
So it was a cold winter day and my friend came over. With him he brought a supposed magic Etch And Sketch. I didnt believe him but he said that what ever he drew would come to life and jump out of the screen. So to test this I asked him to draw a tiger, when I said this he said he wasnt so sure we should do it. Then I said Im not going to believe you unless you show me. He drew the tiger pressed a special button and out of nowhere there was a tiger sitting in my living room. Just to my luck I was eating a steak so he attacked me and my friends and my friend was killed but Im still alive to tell this magical tale
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11/20/2014 11:20:44 pm
Etch-A-Sketch
Noah
11/21/2014 12:45:55 am
No capitalization errors
brayan
11/21/2014 03:48:44 am
no errors Noah
Lilly Holthus
11/21/2014 03:49:34 am
Good job! No spelling errors!
Desiree Pinneo
11/19/2014 11:18:25 pm
One day, I was walking down the street and I saw an etch-a-sketch. When I started drawing with it. It unlocked a whole new world. This world had flying ponies that have rainbow fur. They spit out magic fairy dust. When you eat this magical dust it gives you flying powers so that you can fly through the air. I call this world Flying Ponies Are Awesome
Tatum
11/20/2014 11:16:11 pm
I rolled a 4 you did not have any spelling errors.
Quinlan
11/21/2014 12:45:39 am
4 no error
Lindsey
11/20/2014 11:16:56 pm
Nice job! I rolled a five, but you already used a lot of adjectives and adverbs.
Andrea
11/20/2014 11:19:29 pm
I rolled a 2 (Comma errors)
Hailey
11/21/2014 04:38:44 am
4 no errors
Tatum
11/19/2014 11:18:32 pm
You might not believe that this little toy right here isn't magic. Well if you thought that then think again! Bob got this for a Christmas one year and this is what happened. He said I don't want this piece of traash! His mother walked up and said if you thought this was a piece of trash think again! What ever you draw will come to life so all day he sat there and drew what he really wanted for Christmas. Then he got grounded from it because he was being naughty. Then when he got it back he lost it because his mother told him to clean his room but he didn't.
Natalia
11/20/2014 11:18:38 pm
I rolled a four and it is spelling errors and traash should be trash, and what ever should be whatever.
Hayden
11/19/2014 11:18:38 pm
When I opened the gift for Christmas it was an etch-a-sketch and I played with it all day long and I think that I played with it so much that it became magical and it started drawing the coolest things I had ever seen and then it would erase them and I thought, what if I would bang it on the table then it might not erase.That was not the case. It broke and it was all over the floor and my parents made me clean it all up.
Beau Woods
11/21/2014 03:49:02 am
No spelling errors. Good job.
Andrea
11/19/2014 11:18:51 pm
At the old toy store downtown, rumors were spreading about some sort of magic power that brought toys to life. Most people didn't believe one word of it, but the kids in town really wanted to see their favorite toys dance with them throughout the store. A certain toy especially was one to watch for. The Etch-a-Sketch was rumored to hold little people inside, drawing on the board when you turned the knobs. Curiosity got the best of the kids, and they smashed the magical drawing board in half, only to find no little people stuck inside. They all then had to pay for what they had broken in the not-so-magical toy store.
Desiree
11/20/2014 11:21:35 pm
I rolled a four and found no spelling errors. Good Job!
Kaitlyn
11/21/2014 12:47:16 am
I rolled a one.I don't see any errors
katelynn
11/21/2014 04:41:42 am
I rolled 1 no error
Hunter Royal
11/19/2014 11:18:57 pm
In the beginning, there were dinosaurs and etch-a-sketches. They were the most wonderful things in the world. during school, dinosaurs would write their math problems on their etch-a-sketch but their claws would scratch the screen off of their etch-a-sketch. Some of the dinosaurs would go through almost 21 etchy-sketches in one class period. They needed a new invention. So the teacher decided to give them homework. They needed to find something that they could not scratch through.
MorganC
11/20/2014 11:25:55 pm
capatalize etch a sketch
Morgan
11/19/2014 11:18:57 pm
One day Jimmy got an Etch- a- sketch for his birthday. It seemed like a lame toy to Jimmy. But his mom said it was magic. He never believed her. But one day he was sitting in his room and he heard a strange noised. Jimmy looked around to see what it was and he found that his toy was drawing on its own! It turns out they weren't lying when they called this one ''magic''.
Dezmond Krause
11/19/2014 11:18:57 pm
This thing what ever it is it keeps wet farting and every ounce in awhile out came a rainbow monkey who barfed happiness and pooped rainbow skittles and for some reason I felt a desire to eat them so I did.And then started barfing up happiness.
Hayden
11/20/2014 11:18:54 pm
Good job Dez
Ryan Nelson
11/19/2014 11:18:58 pm
I guess they weren't lying when they told me this thing was magic. This thing is pretty cool but I can never get something drawn into it. All I get in to it is just a bunch of scribbles and that's all but my brothers on the other hand, can do the nicest thing in the world, like the president of the United States. What I thought of that was, my bothers are just flat out crazy! But after a few years of growing up I managed my self to do it to and the things I could draw on that thing were crazy! Then I figured out this thing my brothers taunted to me how it's magic and there the only ones that can do it, but then I figured out that it really isn't magic it's just skill and how you use it.
Jessica Fuehrer
11/21/2014 12:43:30 am
I rolled a 1
Jacob
11/21/2014 12:47:34 am
I rolled a 4 and you didn't spell anything wrong.
Traeten
11/21/2014 04:35:12 am
No spelling errors Im proud of!!! Bro for life
Kaleigh Homan
11/19/2014 11:19:04 pm
One day I was outside on the porch and my little sisters Etch-a-Sketch drawing pad was laying on the porch so I pick it up and and I start messing around for hours on end and finally I finish making a teddy bear then my mom called me in for dinner and I leave the Etch-a-Sketch on the porch swing while I was eating. After I finished eating I went back outside to unite with Etch-a-sketch before bed and the teddy bear I made was not on the screen but it was alive! On the ground walking!! I guess this ting really is magic!! I better hide this from my little sister before she makes something!!
Maddie
11/20/2014 11:24:24 pm
Rolled a 1. No errors.
Alycia
11/19/2014 11:19:10 pm
So I was just playing on my Etch-A-Sketch when I spelled out President Abe Lincoln I was taken back in time to the age when Lincoln was president! So I started to write things like JFK and Airplanes. It took me to the most historical thing that happened with what I was writing. Once I was courious and I wrote my name and It took me to the future. I became the world most advanced Physical Theripist. Then my Etch-A-Sketch dissaperd. I was defistaed. The end.
Alycia
11/20/2014 11:20:36 pm
Your capitalization was correct good job
Laura Eckhart
11/21/2014 12:47:56 am
No problems:)
Ellijah
11/19/2014 11:19:16 pm
Once there was this drawling pad thing called an etch a sketch it was wired. When ever i drew something the pad talked and said yo stop drawling. Then I said y? Then it said i like podding it came to life and jumped off the cliff then it turned into a rainbow peach pony and said I must defeat the bucket! So i got out my pixie dust and flew with it it flew and i followed it to rainbow peach pony land and then i landed and grabed a peace of the rainbow sidewalk and ate it i think it was chacloate thats what it tasted like then i found that rainbow peach pony and puched it in its ear. Then it did a flying ninja kick at my face. But then i got out my pie gun and shot it it didnt die my pie wasn't strong enough. So the etch a sketch kicked again then i went into acoma the end.
Maddie Vodvarka
11/19/2014 11:19:16 pm
Some people don't think magic is real but I do. Let me tell you about the day I figured out magic was real. I was on my bed when I heard my mom told me to come in the kitchen. She gave me a package and I ran in my room. I opened it and saw it was from my cousin. It was one of those etch-a-sketch. I started playing with and drew a phone and laptop. I went out of my room to get some water. I came back and there was a laptop and a phone. I told my mom and she kind got scared.
Abbey
11/21/2014 03:46:42 am
Great job it looks amazing.
Serenity
11/19/2014 11:19:23 pm
Okay so one day I was just walking around the store withn my mom and I saw this cool thing. It was like a little drawing pad. I asked my mom if she would buy it for me, she said she would buy it for me if I cleaned my room. When we got home I didn't want to clen my room so I went to my bedroom and I started to draw with it. My mom yelled at me and told me to clean up my room or else she would take it away. So I decided to clean I picked up one thing on the floor and said "I wish someone else would do this for me" and I went into the living room. My mom said that she was going to go see if my room was clean. I knew my room wasn't clean and when I went to my room.... It was clean. I went to go get my etch-a-sketch from my bed and on it it said "Your welcome bruh". I went up stair and told my mom that it was clean and from that day on my etch-a-sketch cleaned my room and did my chores.
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11/19/2014 11:22:32 pm
You're****
Hunter
11/20/2014 11:22:13 pm
Up the stairs.
Leah Renee Oldenburg
11/21/2014 12:47:27 am
I rolled a 4 and so you put a withn its just with by the way and u spelled clean wrong and I love your story its funny especially when you said Bruh! lol
Lindsey
11/19/2014 11:19:30 pm
In the North Pole, elves work away, preparing presents for all the little children to receive on Christmas morning. Santa sits in the corner, sipping some hot chocolate. Everything seems exactly as it should be, except for one wicked elf. He has an evil grin on his face as he pounds away on a "magic" etch-a-sketch. This vicious elf will send this toy to an unsuspecting young child. But as the child opens the gift, he will realize that this etch-a-sketch is much more than it seems. Soon, the toy will begin giving the little boy or girl messages that lead to the elves' secret layer, unleashing powerful secrets that have been hidden from society for hundreds of years.
Aislinn Luther
11/21/2014 03:49:54 am
Oh no!.... Good job! I rolled a 5 and you used a lot of adjectives and adverbs already!
Lauren Peters
11/21/2014 03:50:24 am
I rolled a 4 for spelling errors, I found no spelling errors but, etch-a-sketch should be Etch-a-sketch and you can't start a sentence with but. Good job! Good creative story!
Natalia
11/19/2014 11:19:39 pm
I wake up on Christmas morning and the number one thing I wanted was a etch a sketch. I run down stairs and there is a ton of presents under the tree. I go for the first one, and... ¨What do you think you are doing mister." Before I turned around I was already able to tell that it was mom. ¨You have to wait for you brother and then you can open them. Once my brother comes down I am the first one to open a present. ¨It's an etch a sketch!¨ I yelled. I was so excited I did not open any more.Then i say something, there was something written on it. It told me to go to my room find the key in my closet and open a little door. I had no idea what it was talking about because I have never seen a little door in my closet. I find the key right in front of the door. I go to my closet, there is a little door, I carefully open it and there is a little box with a bell in it. I ring it and it sounds so magical. I run down stairs I ring it to my mom and she seemed to not even hear it, it was very I guess magical, but maybe not.
Aj
11/21/2014 04:36:56 am
There should be a comma between tree and go. :} :] :)
Major Eiland
11/19/2014 11:19:39 pm
Huh they weren't lying when they said this sketch etch board was magic. I was just playing around with it just for entertainment and the random everything was erased. I got a little mad and then it said "help me" it was faded but was thick enough see I was freaking out I threw the thing and then I heard I dunno some demonic growl I was scared. I pick it back up to see that there was nothing on it I thought that it was just my imagination then so abruptly the sketch etch started shaking I dropped it and scooted to the wall. I was shaking in my boots I was frighten. I had brought to a priest that know exorcism and the demon was banished. I don't think after that I can be the same again.
Major
11/20/2014 11:22:32 pm
*then randomly
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11/20/2014 11:23:46 pm
frightened
Elliot
11/19/2014 11:19:48 pm
through out history there's one thing that everyone was wondering about and that is magic. Magic has been a mystery for hundreds of years and still nobody has figured out if it's real or is it not. Other people have claimed that they found out what magic is, but their theory always became a failure. Nobody has found out what magic is until now when a little boy got a present from his grandpa just before he died. When the little boy came home he opened the package and saw that it was just a etch-a-sketch. He was mad and he threw it at the wall and fell in bed to cry. But at that moment the etch-a-sketch started to glow!
Michael Heinrich
11/21/2014 12:49:20 am
I rolled a 1 through at the begging should be capitalized Etch-A-Sketch should be capitalized other wise good job
Cam
11/19/2014 11:20:12 pm
Your probably as surprised as I am, or you will be surprised.
Cam
11/20/2014 11:27:20 pm
I mean't steal.... not still 11/19/2014 11:50:31 pm
Here in caveman village every on is pretty dumb. The only one that can figure stuff out around here is me. They have this temple built around an Etch A Sketch that they claim "magic". It was brought from a time traveler who we ate for dinner that day for dinner. When they searched his bag the found it and immediately the storms stopped and the plagues were over. So now I'm in prison for saying that the Etch A Sketch was evil and not magic. Then one day I was let out because they needed help. A giant Etch A Sketch Monster was attacking the village. So now it was my turn to be the hero. I went into the temple and found the time travelers bag. Then I found the eraser. I ran outside and through it right into the monster and he was gone. Then I became Gorge Washington the third and landed my plane in Canada.
Matt Mittman
11/20/2014 12:48:18 am
One day at the store, I bought an Etch-An Sketch. I took it home and tried it out. It didn't work, so I put in in the closet and forgot about it. Then one day when I was getting cloths out of my closet, my old toy talked! It said that I was very bad because I never used it. It picked me up and threw me out the window. Now it rules my house.
Bladen
11/21/2014 04:33:06 am
rolled a 1
Dalton
11/20/2014 12:49:08 am
We were playing around in the basement and decided to play in the attic. So we went up there and looked around at all the cool stuff. We found a lot of magic stuff, a magic ball, a magic TV screen. Then we found a magic etch a sketch???? I don't know I looked at it and it actually was magic. So I decided to make my life awesome. Well it turns out, that life isn't so awesome when you are rich. All the flowers, girls, paparazzi. So I turned my self back into a loser. I liked my self better that way.
Quinlan
11/20/2014 12:49:30 am
One day I bought a pie when I ate it there was none left. Turns out there was an etch a sketch it the pie. It was a magic etch a sketch and gave me the power to draw something in the air and it would become real. I made a bunch of mind-controlled squids that were made of gold and I killed 7,281 humanoid fish. then I drew a "the end" in the air and every thing went dark and all I could see was a giant "The End".
Major Eiland
11/20/2014 11:20:49 pm
I rolled a four found no spelling errors.
traeten
11/21/2014 04:35:40 am
No spelling errors
Samuel W
11/20/2014 12:50:42 am
I was using an Etch-a-sketch when it wouldn't draw the write line, so I chucked it at the wall. It screamed "ouch why did you do that" I tried running away but it froze my with its magical powers. I know live in a cave full of bat mobiles with my friend Batman, and Chuck Norris.
Elliot
11/20/2014 11:23:21 pm
lol that was funny rolled a four and turn my into me
sam
11/21/2014 12:48:16 am
thanks Elliot
Jacob
11/20/2014 12:51:24 am
I woke up at six o'clock in the morning so excited to go downstairs to see all of the presents I got for Christmas. The first present I opened was an Ethc-a-Sketch. I got so mad because I specifically asked not to get that but I did anyways. I started playing with it. I wasn't very good all I could draw were weird lines. After I opened all my presents and played with them I went back upstairs to go to bed. The next morning I woke up and I was flying around my room. Then I remembered that yesterday on my etch-a-sketch I drew a picture of my flying at least that's what is was supposed to be but it looked nothing like it. At that moment I realized that my etch-a-sketch was magic. I sprinted down stairs and drew a picture of my room full of smarties. The next morning I woke up my drawing came to life and I smoked and snorted smarties everyday for the rest of my life. THE END.
Noah Burke
11/20/2014 12:51:37 am
This thing is magic maaaaaaaannnnn!!!! I can fly on this thing, I have seen almost every state. I get scared though, it does go really far up in the sky. I had to wash up the etch-a-sketch because I peed my pants on it. One time I was flying around the town and I got something in my eye, but don't worry I could see barely. I couldn't find the little handle bars on the etch-a-sketch so I started singing where da at doe where da at doe. Then Bobby Shmurda was in his private jet. THE END!!!!!!
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11/20/2014 11:17:26 pm
oh
malikmpatterson
11/21/2014 12:49:53 am
Rolled 1.
Zayden Loreman
11/21/2014 03:47:09 am
No errors
Alexis Linder
11/20/2014 12:51:54 am
They weren't lying when they said I was magical. One Christmas morning this little boy named Joe received me as a present. He thought I was just a normal etch-a-sketch that's where he made his first mistake, just kidding, I'm not evil. Here's the thing I can feel what a kid feels in his or her heart. If they're in a predicament I know and I'll write something up on my screen and help them resolve they're situation. So this first day Joe had me he had no clue I had a secret until he was wandering why he got such a stupid toy for Christmas. I didn't want to get thrown away so I showed him my magic. On my screen it read I'm magical. Let me tell you I never left that kids side. Ever.
Kaitlyn
11/20/2014 12:51:59 am
It was Christmas and we are opening are presents.I get to my last one and its small I open it and its a Ech-a-sketch. I hate those things there so dumb so I through it away and just as I through it I heard a noise it sounded as it came from the toy I looked and on the screen it spelled the word ''ouch" that's when I knew that it was magic.
Leah Renee
11/20/2014 12:52:04 am
one morning I woke up and I heard a banging on the door I ran down the stairs and open the door this little box thing was just sitting there. I picked it up and moved the handles and when it didn't work I threw it and it said ouch! I looked surprise I ran over picked it back up and said are you alright not noticing it said something but I didn't care I have a magical talking red box thing yeah i'm gonna be the coolest kid in school with my magical talking thing mibobber!!! THE END
Kaleigh Homan
11/20/2014 11:20:30 pm
Capitalize- One
ethan
11/20/2014 12:52:05 am
This exo sketch is magic because it knows the awnser to every homework problem all you have to do is write the question and the awnser will come up on the screen.
Jake
11/20/2014 11:16:47 pm
You did good on the comma/\/\/\//\/\/\\/\//\/\/\/\/\//\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\//\/\/\/\/\/\//\/\/\/\/\/\
Cam
11/20/2014 11:19:52 pm
Rolled a five You need to spell answer right. (And Etch a Sketch is what its called and you should've capitalized it.)
maria humanes
11/20/2014 12:52:11 am
For my birthday my parents got me a etch-a-sketch. the day after that the thing came alive with legs and arms. on that night the thing was alive again it got a knife out of the kitchen cabnet. It came to my room and sliced my neck open. JK, no it got the knife a cutted up the cake woke me up and i ate the cake and the cake had poisoning. Then after all I died. and exploded because it also had a grenade. THE END! lesson never get a etch-a-sketch.
serenity
11/20/2014 11:21:50 pm
I rolled a 1 and you need to capitalize On in the second sentence. Capitalize your i's. Capitalize and in the second to last sentence.
maria
11/21/2014 12:42:51 am
I rolled a 4 and I for got to capitalize the I's.
Bailey RObinson
11/20/2014 12:52:16 am
I hear something in the corner making noises. I look to see what it is. My etch a sketch has a message written on it. Bailey write back as soon as possible. I write "Who is this?". It is Betty your aunt! "Betty died four years ago! " No NO I have a message for you. You have to do it. Go to the farm. Tell grandma that you need to borrow her tractor. After that- even if she says no- take it a drive it back to town. Then demolish the movie theatre. You have to do it! " Woman I know you are crazy! You were on my dad's side of the family!" I said as I walked away. Every once and a while I hear it but ignore it.
Emma
11/21/2014 12:44:46 am
I rolled a 4.
alex
11/20/2014 12:52:24 am
One day i was walking down the street and i found a Etch-a-sketch on the ground.I took it home and i started to draw an dinosaur and then the next day when it went to school and there it was a dinosaur that was attacking the school so that time i new that the Etch-a-sketch was a magical and after that day i new i had a magical toy that was made from a witch.
Michael Heinrich
11/20/2014 12:52:30 am
It was one day in July that I found a magic itch it sketch toy. I picked it up and started to play with it when I noticed that the knobs were getting harder and harder to turn. Next it started giving me messages like watch your back, and look behind you it was creepy my parents said it was stupid and that I imagined it. So I threw it out the window then that night in the middle of my sleep it came in to my room and said good night forever.....
malik patterson
11/20/2014 12:52:36 am
It was a cold winter morning. I was drinking hot cocoa. I was home alone. Where was everybody? I seached all over the house. All I saw was an echo sketch on everybodys' bed. I go back downs stairs, only to find a echo sketch were my doll was. It had a picture of me sleeping. I ran In to my room to hide. There was an echo sketch by my window. They had me trapped all I could do was dance. So I did every dance I could. First I did the Bobby Smurda. Then I finished them off will the Covered Face. I woke up sweating.
Aaliyah
11/21/2014 03:48:03 am
I rolled a 4, Shmurda**
Sevanna
11/21/2014 04:34:28 am
Rolled a four... ^^ Same as Aaliyah, Shmurda******
Jessica Fuehrer
11/20/2014 12:52:43 am
Some people think that magic isn't real, but I do. So one day I woke from my bed and heard this noise. I went downstairs and this blue medium sized mirror was DANCING!!!!!! I crept down the stairs watching it. Then when I got to it, it stopped moving and lay so that the mirror side was facing down. I thought "Well how could that be." I assumed that it just was my imagination. So I picked it up and threw it across the room so that it landed in the computer room floor. It said " That is going to hurt real bad." I started screaming. "AH!!, THERE IS A TALKING MIRROR! Then it got up flew right to me and the next thing I know is that I am in the air holding on to the end of the mirror. It said "So, how are you doing". I could not believe that he had just said that to me. "GET ME DOWN RIGHT NOW!!! I commanded. He said that your the boss, and dropped me only to find that I landed on a air mattress. Boy I was lucky. Then after that all happened, I opened the front door, Chucked it outside and ran to my room. I thought that this was a dream, but It is not. I waited for my parents to get up. Once they did, I told them and they thought that I was out of my mind.
David cowen
11/20/2014 12:52:52 am
I was walking down the side walk one day after school I was going home then an old man come up to me and asked what my name was. I stared to yell stranger danger and a man come and kicked the older man in his face and I said thank you. He said no problem. Before he left he gave me a magic etch sketch. I said thank you and then I asked him how is it magic but he was gone. I went home and told my parents the story and they said cool. As I was getting ready for bed I tough to my self how is it magic and said HI...
Lauren Newman
11/21/2014 03:51:16 am
I rolled a 2 which is comma errors and nothing was wrong. Good Job !!!
Emma
11/20/2014 12:53:06 am
When I opened my new etch a sketch I didn't know what I was in for. I ran to my room as soon as words that said "Go somewhere private, there is an adventure in your future," appeared magically. When I got to my room I shook the toy until the words disappeared, and then more words appeared. "Prepare to come to our world in 3..... 2... 1...!" I was whirled into a magical world that the people call Etch-a-Scetch Amazingly Fun World. There are amazing rides and delicious food! Then I hear my mom coming up the stairs to see what I am doing. I ask how I get out of here and they say that nobody ever gets out of this place. But then I wake up and realize that it was only a dream. I go downstairs and open the first present, and there is a Etch-a-Sketch.
Laura Eckhart
11/20/2014 12:53:14 am
When I woke up on my birthday I ran downstairs and there sitting in front of me was a big purple box. I opened it up and in it was a brand new etch-a-sketch. it was sitting in there with a tag on that said 'magic' I pulled it out and started playing with it. After I finished my cookie I shook it and all of a sudden a cooked flew out and landed on my hand. My sister saw it and said " I guess they wern't kidding when they said it was magic"
Abi
11/21/2014 12:47:42 am
No spelling errors.
Anthonie Gomez
11/20/2014 12:53:58 am
It was definetly no lie,but the truth.The Magic Etch-a-sketch was real!This magical toy could make anything live or appear!Many people searched and searched but could not find it,twas a dangerous quest, oh yes, but there was one person...
alex
11/21/2014 12:48:07 am
U spelled was wrong u put twas
xzavior
11/20/2014 03:52:25 am
It is not magic it is tiny tiny balls. When you shake them thy fall to the bottom. Go through a tube and you twist the knob. It draws so that is how it works.
Matt Mittman
11/21/2014 12:47:49 am
Rolled a 2.
Jett Spencer
11/20/2014 03:55:56 am
One day I was walking to the batcave when I saw a present on my door step. The tag read: Dear Batman, I decided to get you a gift. Sincerly, Night Wing. Oh this cant be good. So I opened it and it was an Etch-a-Sketch. Oh Great, Why would I need a Etch-a-Sketch? I picked it up and everything went dark. Went the light came back on I wasn't in the batcave anymore. I was in a restraunt. In front of me was a bowl of spegetti. so I ate it and grabbed my Etch -a-Sketch and walked out.
Anthonie Gomez
11/21/2014 12:49:39 am
rolled a 4(spelling errors)
Jason Franklin
11/20/2014 03:55:56 am
On Christmas Day Johnny was so excited when he opened his first present. It was an Etch-a-Sketch and it had a creepy message on it. It said,¨something is going to happen to you today.¨ Then it erased its self and later that day Johnny broke his arm sledding. When he got home it said,¨ I told you something would happen.¨ So it was magic and what he did with it is still a mystery. He might have sent it to someone else.
person in your class
11/21/2014 03:53:07 am
its not crazy... 11/20/2014 03:56:05 am
It was a cold, windy day outside today. It is Christmas morning! I woke up and ran upstairs, to see if there is any presents under the Christmas tree, and there is. I go and wake up my parents so I can open my presents. I had one present with my name on it, so I opened it and there it was a Etch-a-Sketch. What I always wanted...
Jason franklin
11/21/2014 03:46:33 am
Rolled a 1 no errors
Tyler Wright
11/21/2014 04:34:45 am
Great job no errors.
Nick A.
11/20/2014 03:56:19 am
ok so one day I was out for one of my enthusiastic walks through the forest when suddenly I found a etch-a-sketch lying on the ground on the back it said whoever's name you write on the toy will die in 45 second...at first i thought it was some scam so i wrote light yagami...afterwards i was watching death note when all of the sudden light got shot which made me mad because what was the point of the show if the main character dies in the end (i hope that spoiled it for all of you watching death note right now).but anyways after i realized what i could do with something like this i killed a bunch of criminals got found out by the popo and got shot to death and am writing this in the afterlife
ethan
11/21/2014 12:47:56 am
no spelling errors.
colton
11/21/2014 03:50:18 am
Nice job I found nothing there
Nate Sutton
11/20/2014 03:56:25 am
It was a harsh cold blizzard and Ted was stuck out side. He had no idea where he was and he could only see a few feet in front of him.
colton
11/21/2014 03:51:42 am
nice lob
Ashton
11/20/2014 03:56:31 am
It was a snow day and my little sister found their Etch-a-Sketck. At this time I was sleeping. When I was sleeping they wrote random letters and word.Then all the sudden I was up so i went down the stair and it had a very scary sentence on it. Ever sense then we never touch the Etch-a-Sketck.
landon jk meier
11/21/2014 03:48:50 am
no errers
kyle yates
11/20/2014 03:56:36 am
Well that friendly wizard was not lying after all, The Magic etch a sketch really was magic after all you can twist the knobs too magically color on the screen I have never seen this before. One time I was all alone in my room and it started to glow and I looked at it and it said save me! I am trapped in here. I wrote who is in there and she said Fionna the long lost girl that got trapped by a wizard, Yesterday I saw some writing on the board and thought that I was saved and can you please free me from here? So I did I let Fionna be free and live a happy long life.
Aislinn Luther
11/20/2014 03:56:37 am
It was a crisp, clear morning in December. To be exact, it was Christmas morning. My brother Jorre was so excited to open his presents, he flew like an ostrich down the stairs! By that I mean he tripped and fell down most of the stairs. Well after he got to the couch safely, he ripped open his present, only to be disappointed. It was just a lame Etch-a-Sketch. Little did he know that this was no ordinary Etch-a-Sketch, this was one was magical. Jorre later found out that you could ask it any question and it would tell you the best answer it could. We had so much fun with this Etch-a-Sketch, but then one day it just disappeared. We have never found it, but some weird things have happened since...
Alexis Linder
11/21/2014 12:45:00 am
Nice job! No errors
Bailey Robinson
11/21/2014 12:51:06 am
I rolled a 4. There are no spelling errors, you ostrich!
Aaron,Thorne
11/20/2014 03:56:42 am
It was September,6 (my birthday) i wok up and my family had a cake for me and then it hit me there as only one present for me i ask if tare was some money hidden in it but their was not any thing so i open it and it was this red thing in big words it sad hello Aaron i ask if this was it and then looked at it and it said yes i jumped right out of my seat it said what wrong do i have something on my knob? i know something was wrong with that thing but it was so cool and i wold do any thing to get another one like that me and it always talked mom said it was not healthy but it said it was fine then out of known ware it said it was magic man so from then on i called it MM
Jett Spencer
11/21/2014 03:50:13 am
I rolled a 2 no comma errors
Lauren Newman
11/20/2014 03:56:43 am
¨This one is magic for real, it is.¨ This is what I try to tell everyone every day but nobody will listen to me. They all keep saying ¨IT IS NOT MAGIC!¨ So I just stop and let them win because I am tired of arguing with them ALL the time. So back to the story of me telling you guys out there that this thing is magic. The first day I got it it started to TALK yes talk, and I am not kidding here. The thing said ¨Hello there how are you doing?¨ And I am telling you it is a little weird when a thing you just bought has just talked to you.......
Beau Woods
11/20/2014 03:56:48 am
It was a dark, cheerful day in jad vioj I was walking around the merry-go-round and I found a etch-a-sketch. This etch-a-sketch wasn't any ordinary etch-a-sketch this one could make whatever you drew on the screen come alive. At first I started drawing $1,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000 and then I got tired of that so I created imaginary creatures that can fly and do other crazy things. Then I had an idea I decided to make a jetpack, an invisibility cloak, an aqua suit, a privet jet, a mansion with a ton of secret rooms, an arsenal, an under water trampoline park, and a ton more. The best part was the etch-a-sketch never ran out of ink. It was truely magic.
Lilly Holthus
11/20/2014 03:56:49 am
It was a beautiful December morning. The sun was shining brightly, the snow glistened like little crystals, and Santa shimmied down the chimney making his last Christmas delivery. To this young girl, Chloe, he gave a "magic" Etch-A-Sketch. Anything the young girl wished for, it would pop out of the Etch-A-Sketch.
Reed
11/20/2014 11:21:43 pm
No Problems :)
Lauren Peters
11/20/2014 03:56:49 am
" i can't believe it." says Lilly. "Did you do this?" she asks Aislinn. "I didn't do it" she says. "So, the magical Etch-a-sketch just wrote me a letter saying "Don't you think I'm magic?" Lilly asks certain that Aislinn did write the letter. "No, no, of course something had to do it!" By the time she said that, the mysterious Etch-a-sketch had already written them another letter. "Are you saying I'm not real?" The girls said in unison. " Wow, this Etch-a-sketch is really magic." Aislinn said. ...
Lily S
11/20/2014 03:56:55 am
It's a nice sunny day, or at least I think it is. I was locked in the attic by my brother. I decided to look around. Books, pictures, a creepy etch-a-sketch that says help me, a lamp-wait a minute. I picked up the etch-a-sketch, and shook it. After the text went away a girl's face was drawn on the screen. I was so freaked out I dropped it. When I picked it up again it said, 'Please find away to get me out of this'. I wondered if I could talk to her too, so I said to the little game 'What is your name'. Then I shook it and the text spelled out, 'Brooklynn Misu, before you get me out find the other four etch-a-sketches, those contain my friends.'...
Lily S
11/21/2014 03:45:30 am
I see no errors.
landon jk meier
11/20/2014 03:57:01 am
It was a very dark dark dark night a kid named jimmy woke up and went down stares and got some cookies and milk and got a tray and put 4 cookies and put it on the tray and put a glass of milk on the tray and went back to sleep and woke up the next morning and opend his present it was a magic sketch screen so he drew a pitcher of a brother he wanted and it came true................................
Abbey S.
11/20/2014 03:57:01 am
It was the day after Christmas and I had just got and etch-a-sketch. I was sooooo excited to be able to play with it. Once I was done eating breakfast I run upstairs as fast as I could to grab it off of my dresser. When I grabbed it I stopped and starred at it for probably five minuets trying to figure it out. It said, "It turns out they weren't lying when they called this 'magic'" I ran to my mom and showed her and she said to go and throw it away because it was broken. She didn't get it, this is amazing and I wasn't going to throw it away just because she said to. I took it to my room and hid it under my pillow. The day went on and it began time for me to go to bed. I was so tired after a long day. I fell right asleep almost as fast as my head hit the pillow.
Riley Allison
11/20/2014 03:57:17 am
It was a cold December morning and Beth woke up to the smell of bacon and french toast.The first thing she did was put on her fuzzy robe she got for her birthday last month and her slippers she got last Christmas and ran down stairs. The first thing she saw was the Christmas tree at the bottom of the stairs and she screamed so loud that it woke up their dog,Scruffy. He came running as fast as he could.She ran past the tree hugged her parents and ran back to the tree and hugged all of her presents.Her parents said she could open them so she opened the smallest one there was because that's her tradition of opening presents. So she opened the smallest one to see that it was a Etch-A-Sketch! She was shocked at first but she loved all the presents she got.She set aside and opened the rest of her presents.Eventually,she got all done opening her presents and she decided to have some good breakfast.After breakfast she took all of her presents up stairs and started to play with them. Of course she left the Etch-a-Sketch last because she always liked the big ones the best.She got tired of playing with her other ones so she played with her Etch-a-Sketch..........
Cole
11/20/2014 11:17:33 pm
I rolled a 2 and I don't really see any comma errors
Zoe Collingham
11/21/2014 04:32:39 am
I don't see any errors....
Aaliyah
11/20/2014 03:57:26 am
Honestly this goes way back to when i used to play with sketchy thing. Well i grew up and me and my friends were in my tree house and the sketchy thing was up there no big deal we thought. Well we were all messing around watching vine and a bruh vine came on and we were repeating bruh and magically it sat up and starting copying us and took us to that vine.. like in that vine i met Cameron Dallas Shawn mendes and others it was amazing.. we never stopped using it in till one day it stopped working.. I guess you have to use it once and a while for it to work and here i am now.. look behind you...!
Kaleigh Homan
11/20/2014 11:23:02 pm
Capitalize your I's
Aaliyah
11/21/2014 03:56:44 am
haha okay
Serenity
11/20/2014 11:36:22 pm
Barley
Aaliyah
11/21/2014 03:58:18 am
ohhhhh stop and r u frl
Riley Allison
11/21/2014 03:51:36 am
Good job! I didnt really see anything wrong.
bailey
11/20/2014 03:57:38 am
It was a strange day today the mail man dog was with him or so I thought .It was his dog the dog came up to my door and barked so loud the mail mad ran over to see what was wrong .when he cam to the door he knocked on the door and I answered the door he gave my a big box I took it in side and opened it and a etch a sketch was in a box with a little tv so i hooked up the tv. the tv said where do you want to go and i said the united kingdom and I was shot in to the tv when i got out of the tv i was in the united kingdom ....
Callie
11/20/2014 03:57:52 am
OK,OK, So apparently the Magic Etch-a-sketch was real! OkOk so I was walking down the staires, and someone did a really wierd knock on my front door. I went and opened the door because I didnt see anybody when I looked through the window. When I opened the door, a big pink with zebra srippes and leopard dots all over it! On top it said residant. My dad walked through the room and said '' what are you doing?" I showed him the box but he didnt see it. I went and tried to put my arms around it. But all he said was what are you doing? Then he walked right through it. Apparently It was a Magic Etch-a-Sketch...
Emily Biel
11/20/2014 03:58:05 am
It's January 13. Well, to be exact, Friday the 13. I was walking home from school, on my usual route. I walk out the back doors of the school, turn right onto Blackburn, and start walking down the side-walk. I had got about half way home, when I saw something laying in the street. It was kind of peculiar, it was exactly parallel to the yellow dashes on the road, and precisely in the middle of the road. Being a curious kid, like normal, I walked accross the road picked it up, and started for the other side of the street. It was an Etch-a-Sketch! I hadn't seen one of those forever! I looked around for someone who might have dropped it, like a little kid or someone. I didn't see anyone. I figured that i'd just take it home, and give it to my younger brother. I walked about one block before my back pack started shaking. I thought it was probably my mom calling my phone to see where I was. But it wasn't. I took the Etch-a-Sketch out of my bag, and a message was written on the front of it. The message said "This is no trick, I kid you not, you picked me up off the lot. I thank you much, but it's time for me to be set free. Say these words 3 times, 3.".................
Colton R
11/20/2014 04:04:18 am
It was Christmas morning and we were all up very early to open our gifts so when mom and dad got up the first thing I got was a etch-a-sketch didnt think anything about it so my day went on and I thought about and I started to wonder what I could do with an atch-a-sketch
Nate Sutton
11/21/2014 03:47:16 am
Rolled a 4
ni
11/21/2014 03:57:06 am
the etch-a-sketch in the sentence is spelled wrong.....
Traeten
11/20/2014 04:41:02 am
This kid was majic. Not the way other people are ! The others are all fake this one was a true kid who had majic powers. Ever since they found that there is such thing of majic but only a few people in the world have it. This boy dark haired tall well built and handsome and had these powers. He could hover above the ground for minutes every time it seems he can hover longer and higher. Its almost like he gets more powerful evertytime he uses his majic. One day he got a message saying that they feel the kids or adults with majic are going to be killed by the goverment. He responded different then most. The letter said he had about 3 weeks to live and spend time with family. He did the exact opposite he trained harder and harder to where his powers became greater and greater. He could get to the point where he could fly for hours at times and he could shoot lighting bolts and people. The day came for him to get picked up from his top bedrrom he looked out and saw hundres of suvs coming with guys on the side heavly armed. Right then he knew something is about to go down. He shot out of his window like a bullet and shot the biggest blast of ligthing and fire ever it plowed through the concrete and created such choas that all of the cars exploded. He decids to say bye to his family and say he does'nt know when he will see them again. 20 Minutes later he got a call from POTUS he said that they were sorry for there acting all of the superhumans may live but they have to serve for there country. And they all did exactly that. America has never been svaver then before. And on top of all the fame there familys live in very nice houses and whenever there not in a war or someting they can go visit them whenever.
ni
11/21/2014 03:57:48 am
magic is spelled wrong
Dean Erdkamp
11/20/2014 04:41:39 am
OK so my friends and I were going to save this unicorn princess from the evil wizard Corneleus, see he is so evil because he cuts off unicorn horns and then brutally murders the unicorn. Yes he murders them. Well we were going to stop him from destroying Unicorn kind. So when we got there he said what are you doing. Turns out he already cut off the unicorns horn. He was about to kill Princess Unicorn Face. So we showed him a picture of a squirrel picking up a tree and saying " am king of squirrels now I eat acorns for life" yes it's dumb but that's why it was funny. Well whe nwe went back we told them we used are magical powers then they said, "No you didn't" then they left. They probably didn't listen because we're only 4 years old and we like to pretend we are the amazing Jake von Werts of Ilumination. Yes we live in the all known Ferguson Republic, and yes we were later sent to exile so this will be the end of our furry days... what we're gerbils gosh you don't think gerbils can write well you're wrong and goodbye.
Jakob Werts
11/21/2014 04:34:52 am
Rolled a three.
TRAVIS ROBINSON
11/20/2014 04:43:28 am
One day I found a random etch e sketch but one day earlier a random wizard bought one at Wall-Wizard and took it home and thought he could do some magic spells on it but when he got home he lost his magic book and could do any spells so he tried some from memory and nothing really happened to he did it about ten more times and nothing happened so he threw it out on the curb hoping some would pick it up. So that brings it back to me and now what ever I thinks it draws it on the screen.
Dean Erdkamp
11/21/2014 04:31:12 am
All I have to say is shorten sentences other wise it's a good .
Nathan Platt
11/20/2014 04:44:35 am
One very cold Christmas eve I got a present. But it wasn't any ordinary present. It was a very weird one. It was an Etch-a-Sketch. I didn't know why I would want an Etch-a-Sketch. All I knew is that it was magic. I mean it was literally magic. The thing could tell me all of my homework problems. All I had to do was try to right it out on the Etch-a-Sketch. And most of the time I could get it to work. The time I actually found out it was magic was when I tried it and then worked out the problem for myself. But if I was wrong it would tell me that I was wrong. And I listened to it because everyday it would tell me. So with all of this I came to the conclusion that it was magic.
Kaleb Ortiz
11/20/2014 04:44:46 am
I just opened my last birthday present and found a wizard hat. Then some guy came out out of nowhere and said, "You're a wizard Harry!", that made no sense because my name isn't even Harry! Then some other old guy with a ten-foot long beard appeared in an explosion and he said, "Dumbledore!", what the heck was even going on! Then thousands of creatures and people started bursting into my house chanting "You're a wizard." Then all of a sudden, I woke up, only to find that I was in some weird school! I remembered then, that my dream really happened... last week.
AJ
11/20/2014 04:44:53 am
On Christmas Eve, i was going to eat a chicken with my friend.It attack my sister,my friend,and me! {:0 My sister broke her arm, my friend survive, and me i survive but I don't know how!!!$$
Kaleb Ortiz
11/21/2014 04:33:18 am
Rolled a 2. No comma errors, but a lot of other ones.
Aj
11/21/2014 04:43:13 am
i forgot a part I was the main victim
Darin Ellis
11/20/2014 04:44:58 am
The Etch-a-Sketch is magic because santa claus blessed it with his magical applesauce. This apple sauce was not normal, because the apple sauce was made out of raindeer poop. YES! You heard me right raindeer chocolate. The best kind! Normal apple sauce is raindeer poop too it just has food coloring. RAINDEER! POOP! IS! AMAZING!
Aaron
11/21/2014 03:48:22 am
2: nothing wrong with your rain dear poop
Sevanna
11/20/2014 04:44:59 am
I got an Etch-A-Sketch for Christmas. There was a note tied to the box thing it was in. It read, "Dear Sevanna, this is a special device for you that no one except me knows about. Keep it hidden. All the best, Santa" Now I don't believe in Santa so I figured my mom and my dad got it for me and wrote "Santa" on the tag thingy. They do that almost every year. Anyway, I didn't find the thing until later when the tree was taken down. Nobody noticed it. I thought that was kinda odd because the box was fair sized and had really bright wrapping paper and a huge bow. Oh, well, maybe it was just blending in to the heaps of wrapping paper laying everywhere. No big deal. So I just took the thing to my room and opened it, and a message was already written. It said, "Ask me any question and I'll give you an answer. And it doesn't have to be a 'yes or no' question." I said, "Where did you come from?" And a message scrawled itself on it, almost like magic. It said, "A box." So it was a funny little thing. I asked some more questions and got some smart-alecky replies. I just gave up and went to sleep. I woke up later in the day at about 3:30. I thought I left the toy on my desk across the room, but I woke up, cuddling it. I freaked out. I hid it in the oven drawer thingy and forgot about. But when my brother went to a hospital, the same Etch-A-Sketch was next to his body. He broke his arm and got a concussion. I burned the thing, but I have a feeling I'll see it later in life...
...
11/20/2014 11:25:47 pm
Oh.. I see.
Tyler Wright
11/20/2014 04:45:05 am
One day I bought a etch a sketch and brought it home to play with. I loved playing with it so much. That night when I went to bed I set it right by my bed. In the middle of the night I heard someone talking. When I found out that it was the my etch-a-sketch I was so scared that I picked it up and threw it out the window. Then I decided to go back to sleep and 10 seconds later I heard something talking again. It was the etch a sketch .Then I decided that it was just a dream, but it wasn't because it woke me up in the morning.
Dalton
11/21/2014 12:46:09 am
I found no errors.
Bladen
11/20/2014 04:45:12 am
So there I was, a young boy with a Etch Sketch a bored boy that wanted something to do so I pulled out my hand entertainer Etch Sketch. And then all of the sudden it drew all by it's self by turning the notches. It was very magical Etch Sketch that drew it was cool.
Ross Fraser
11/21/2014 04:33:25 am
Rolled a four and I saw no errors.
Zoe Collingham
11/20/2014 04:45:12 am
This etch-a-sketch is magical, see? It's magical. How are you not seeing this? Seriously?! You have to be seeing this... Oh I see how your not seeing this, it's because I'm insane... Well I better get back to my schizophrenic brain... Or is it magical??? You tell me...
Cate Berkheimer
11/21/2014 04:35:28 am
I don't think that there are any comma errors, but there seems like there are a lot of dot-dot-dots in there. Maybe replace some of those dot-dot-dots with some commas and conjunction. Like You tell me, but by the way I'm not actually schizphrenic.
Ross Fraser
11/20/2014 04:45:18 am
So, I'm a Magic Etch a Sketch and nobody thinks I actually have magic. So one day I come out day and everyone buys one identical to me. Then one day my friends and I saw this new iPod come out and we all got really mad and we tried to sabotage it when the store was closed, that didn't turn out to well. So we all just got taken out of the store. I don't know how they knew how it was us but we almost all of got destroyed but just I had escaped.
Samuel Warneke
11/21/2014 12:46:44 am
rolled a one rolled didn't see anything bad.
Hacker Von Foltz Of the Jurassic Park expedition
11/20/2014 04:45:24 am
The Etch-a-Sketch is a lie. So everyone sent their google mails to Santa. Santa then gave everyone Ebola in their stockings because everybody was involved in the Holocaust. The End.
....... Ellijah
11/20/2014 11:20:16 pm
The Etch-a-Sketch is a lie. So everyone sent their google mails to Santa. Santa then gave everyone Ebola in their stockings. everybody was involved in the Holocaust. The End.
ellijah
11/20/2014 11:22:07 pm
never mind im sorry!
Hacker Von Forgiver that forgave the Ellijah
11/21/2014 04:40:13 am
It's all good.
Cam
11/20/2014 11:25:37 pm
HAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAHHAA! That's funny!
Jakob Werts
11/20/2014 04:45:30 am
So, I was taking my normal hike in my usual snow-hiking attire, shorts, short sleeves, and sandals. I was warming up a bit before I shoved my face in the snow again. It was my marker to let people know I was there. And it makes me more of a man because I never flinch from it. And from the cold my face is numb so I can't feel it. And it feels great. The I felt the urge. I shoved my face in the snow. Hard. Then I took my face out and noticed there was blood in the snow. No, it's not blood. It's something else. No, I think it's blood. But next to my face print was an Etch-A-Sketch. I picked it up and stared at it. It then proceeded to tell me that Travis is rubber. I already knew that and was about to 360-No-Scope-MLG-Across-The-Map it but then it said something else. I watched it in disbelief. It had just called me stupid. The nerve of this magical toy! I kept it with me the entire way back to the presidential castle and ordered it to be executed. It was satisfying watching the handles roll off the toy into the basket. And seeing it look like swiss cheese. I knew those TEK 9's would come in handy. Now they're the new weapons of the FR military. Well, that basically sums it up.
Jakob
11/21/2014 04:32:25 am
Forgot the n in then in one of my sentences. My bad.
Travis
11/21/2014 04:33:55 am
rolled two and no errors that I know of.
Hacker Von Corrector that rolled a 5
11/21/2014 04:37:52 am
Instead of saying "Hard" say "Solid" or don't.
Jakob
11/21/2014 04:41:58 am
I shoved my face in the snow solid?
Hailey
11/20/2014 04:45:35 am
It was Christmas morning when I woke up.. I opened my presents when my mom and dad came down and I got this writing thing and I didn't know how to work it. The thing could wright and I finally figured that I could do it. It was a Christmas merical
Cate Berkheimer
11/20/2014 04:45:55 am
"You know it's magic, right," questioned Alison Malers.
jordan
11/21/2014 03:54:45 am
One day I was walking in the batcave. There was a present from robin. It was a bat robot and bat was magic. It had shape shipping powers. He got a pad drawed and erased. I was the batman who can draw new verision of anythig. Leave a Reply. |
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