I hate college .
You should have wrote more.
I rolled a 1. No capitalization errors.
No spelling errors
Dez I rolled a 6 and it needed to be longer like " I hate college so much it stinks."
It was a beautiful day...So I decided to go outside and read a book..
It was a beautiful day, so I decided to go outside and read a book.
No capitalization errors.
It was a beautiful day-- So i decided to go outside and read a book.
No spelling errors..
It was a crappy day at school again! so i skipped class and went outside with the cool kids and they jumped me the end!
dont talk about it if u dont like it okay just dont read it then
Really Dude :(
So I skipped class......
I rolled a 1 so
So and I
I rolled a 1 and you need to capitalize so and I.
i should be capitalized into I so should be capitalized
I is capitilizies.
It was a nice sunny day at York College and the students went outside to do their homework with their friends.
I rolled a six and I found nothing
It was a beautiful spring day and I was at my college call rainbow bunchie university and every got drunk off of twinkies because their all so good and we all got diabetes
What a story..
True story... LOL
* Rainbow Bunchie University
I rolled a 4. Spelling errors in your paper are "called" not call, "everyone" not every, and "they're" not their.
The people in the picture are sitting around being lazy acting like they are working on school work even though they are not. What they are doing is playing Nehow Kilan games on the computer.
It was a beautiful day warm but with a little breeze and I was having lunch with my friends on the grass my dog kept every one from eating since it wanted attention from every one. He finally stopped and we ate sandwiches and headed back to our dorms since it was a Saturday and fell asleep.
HI I am the girl with the curly hair. We are just hanging out on a spring day I also brought my dog Kirby he is so cute. We are supposed to be doing homework but we are just talking
Spring needs to be capitilized.
Nice job! I rolled a one and the only capitalization error is that HI should be Hi. There also should be punctuation after HI, spring day, and Kirby.
It was a beautiful spring day; and the magnolia trees were full in bloom. Me and my friends are going out for a break to talk and have fun. I was the first on there, and I got out my laptop and chips and started to wait. My best friend Joe got there with 4 other of our friends. It was our normal routine, and we started to have fun.
There is no capitalization or punctuation errors.
It was a beautiful spring day; the magnolia trees were in full bloom. Of course, I don't really know what a magnolia tree is, but I guess that's why I'm going to college. Some of my friends and I were studying in the grass for the quiz we had coming up. We were peacefully eating out bologna sandwiches when a fierce chiwawa came running through. He grabbed our sandwiches and ate them as fast as he could. We tried to shoo him away but he kind of insisted on staying with a low growl. Just then, and older lady came running through yelling, "BRUTUS! BRUTUS! COME BACK!!." She finally slowed down and sighed with relief when she saw the ferocious beast. She picked him up and carried him away while we watched in awe.
No errors, Good Job!
Great job. It was great!
It was a beautiful Thursday morning at the Oklahoma State College in Oklahoma. There are six college students enjoying this beautiful morning with one of the students' dog. The fluffy dog was very happy to, he was yipping and hollering for the longest of times until the students heard the loud obnoxious bell ring. Dwlinnnnnnnnnnng. Dwlinnnnnnnning. "Well I guess it is time to go." she said. An they all headed to their classes.
It is a beautiful fall day the leaves are turning gold, Red and other colors. We are in between classes and having a good time. After this we sill be going to lunch. The cafeteria is 20 minutes away. We walk there everyday and eat after that I have college philosophy.
Rolled a three. Don't capitalize red. Period after eat. Capitalize after.
It was a beautiful spring morning. I was with a group of my best friends, and we were having an amazing time. We had a ton of homework, but we were not really doing it. It was so close to summer, but the worst part is that we have a lot more tests than normal. I had a huge biology test and the others had the same but I think that it was a little more important to me than it was to them. It was so hard to actually study with all of these fun conversations. Then this dog comes up to me and it was so cute I had to pet it. Then I decided to just wait and study tomorrow. It was actually a very fun day even though I have more to do tomorrow, I think I will be able to get a passing grade, when I have fun while I study I seem to be able to lock it in my brain a little easier than when it's quite.
Hi my name is Bob I am going the the college of Pink Fluffy University. I am sitting here with my friends doing my homework outside in the fresh air as you can see. I love going to this college because every classroom we go into is all pink. I love that we can have class out side. I like to do my homework with my friends. I am studying to be a Wendy's worker.
I rolled a two and I found no errors.
Hi my name is Jeremey and I am in collage and hanging out with my friends after class. Well how I started collage was I first went to yale collage. Then I went to UNL and that is how i'm here right now telling this story and i'm still working on going to play football and get a digree.
I rolled a 1
no errors! :)
If you look in the picture you can see i'm a bit confused. See that guy who's kinda chubby smiling and laughing. Yeah that's not me. You see that guy laying his head on that girl's lap. He's not me either. I'm the guy with the hat. I was just sitting there studying my Spanish then all of a sudden they sat down and all started laughing they just kept talking like I was part of that conversation. They told a joke about the Mongolia tree's blossoms that I kind of got so I gave them a slight smile but, I just wanted to study. Wow I thought I'd never say that.
It was a beautiful spring day Janet and her friends were sitting outside under beautiful magnolia trees. Then along came a dog it was so cute. They sat there for the longest time petting the dog. Then finally they decided to keep it as their pet. But before they could do that they would have to put up signs saying that they had found a dog and were looking for it's owner. But they did not find an owner and so they kept the dog for their pet.
*it's to its, fifth sentence
*for to as, last sentence
It's in the middle of the afternoon, and I'm relaxing with my friends at my dream college. The breeze is cooling underneath the warm sunshine. We're collaborating on an assignment. Homework can sometimes be overwhelming, but today, we're pretty laid back. The beautiful magnolia trees were swaying in the wind. I'm loving this moment.
I rolled a four and found no spelling errors. GOOD JOB!!!!!!!!
It was a beautiful spring day. Hi my name is Erica. I have long curly hair. I also have glasses. I was sitting with my Friends when my dog Fluffy. I said "Fluffy. what are you doing here?" I turn around and see my little sister. She ran to me and hugged me and ran back to my parents. My parents came to me gave me stuff and left.
I rolled a 4.
There were no spelling errors!!!
It was a beautiful day, schools out and its the start of the summer. The 7 of us meet up at our usual spot. We started planning what to do over the summer. We all had different ideas, go to movies, go to concerts, hang out at the park, and go to Lincoln for a fun day. We all voted for witch one we wanted to do. The most voted for was movies and we thought that it could be a little better than just that. So we decided we wanted to make our own movie, a horror movie, about the towns witch that possibly still lived in the middle of the woods responsible for possibly 100 kids missing.
witch should be spelled as wich
It was the first spring day of 2014 and it was beautiful. The birds were chirping flowers were blooming and the wind had a slight whistle. I was lieing down outside of my dorm and my friends found me and sat down next to me and were silent
It was busy, study hard day at collage. Finals were gonna be tomorrow. Everybody wants to pass theses finals. So I was sitting on the stairs looking a my study book and trying to study but the magnolia trees were so pretty and it was so nice outside and I just couldnt keep myself concentrated! It was hard people were texting me asking if I wanted to ¨study¨ I just kept telling them no because I know O would get even more distracted! So I studied studied studied then I went out with my friends to eat dinner and I went home and studied a lot more!
Ah it a really nice spring day out in the grass before school starts. My orange hat up on my head sitting with my friends and having a good time. working on today's math assignment that we forgot to do last night. But that freaking dog keeps messing up all my papers. Oh-no schools starting and I'm not done with the math assignment!
It was a sunny day and i saw students on the grass and i went to sit down with them and i did my homework. The end
Im a student named Mia and I use to to highschool and now im gonna throw a party woooooooooooh
It was a beautiful spring day; the magnolia trees were in full bloom. I was int he back of a picture this guy took of his friends. lol #photobomb
You spelled in-tell wrong I also rolled a four.
It was a very sunny day outsider. I was so tired because I stayed up all night long studying. I love college. JK it is the worst place ever. JK it is the best place ever
Do not use text abbreviations in your writing!
It was another terrible day at college. I woke up at 3:00 P.M. and missed half my classes. I didn't really care so I went outside with a bunch of my friends and ate sandwiches for the rest of the day.
The teacher told us that we would go outside for class today. One of the girls in the back of the room complained. I was happy to go outside for class. The sky was blue,the sun was out, and the grass was green. It was also a rare oppurtunity for the teacher to take us outside. So i take the chance when i can.
you need to capitalize your I's
capitilize your i's
You need to capitalize your I's and add commas.
I went to this picnic one day in college and this dog is eating my leg off. But I don't understand why because he just ate a huge steak. But he must be hungry. So what ever though.
I was in class when the teacher came up to me and said finish your test. So I finished it up and gave Mrs.Stork my test and then Mrs.Stork gave me a after school test from the dictionary. All I did was put ok jose on my paper.
" Hey puppy! Come here puppy."
"You are such a freak."
I felt a pang of disgust in my chest. I just met these people and I know they love dogs too because they brought this one.
"Geez don't be so literal, I was trying to make a joke."
I dropped a fake laugh and said,
" ITs okay I guess you are just foreshadowing yourself as a freak. Don't be so literal." I said in a nagging voice.
" Egh." They said and walked away whispering.
Bailey, you had no comma errors but this makes me sad.
It was a beautiful spring day. Seven friends were out with their friends. They were studying for a test the next day. They were all so bored. So, they decided to go eat lunch.
It was a beautiful day at the college. Hi, my name is Sarah. I am 15 years old. I have long brown wavy hair. And bluish/ green eyes. I am sitting with my friends and my friends dog. We are all talking about a skit for class due on Monday. Today is Friday. So it only takes us like 30 min. to type this on the school's chrome books. It is funny.
No spelling errors!
Great Job! :)
It was spring and i was eating lunch out side then i went to class.
I was sitting there with my friends and dude it was crazy. This girl was weird. She was looked like she drank to much. This other dude over here was picking his nose. Also this couple was lovey dovey. It was nasty. I have alot of creeps in my class
It was a beautiful Spring day. The flowers were blooming the weather was nice. Some of my friends and I went outside during lunch to have a picnic. We told funny stories and studied. I had a blast. When was over we packed our stuff up and went to class.
Rolled a 2. No comma errors, good job!
It was a beautiful day outside and I just woke up and remembered that I didn't have school today.So I looked out the window and saw some of my friends outside studing for the big test so I grabed my stuff and went outside and studied with my friends
It was a beautiful day at collage. I went outside with my friends over lunch and we messed around, talked about our high school years, and talked about are boring classes and teachers. Then the bell rang and we all freaked out and ran in the building, but we diddent notice the grass was wet and we all sliped and fell in a big ball. It was terrible.
You spelled didn't and slipped wrong.
#5 Adjectives and Adverbs
*We didn't notice that the grass was *soaking* wet
It is a beautiful day. Soon I will meet with some of my old high school friends. I'm bringing my dog, Sugar. When I get there I go running to my old friends. Sugar isn't to far behind me. I hug them and say hello. I missed them so much! Sugar is jumping all around, just as happy as I am. We talk for a long time, and Sugar is a hit all around. All of us are going into great careers. When I have to get to class we say our goodbyes. As I walk away I almost cry.
It was a beautiful Spring day. I was on my way back to my dorm when a group of people approached me. They asked me if I wanted to hang out with them, I replied yes. Later on in life I became best friends with those people for the rest of my life.
Man this day stinks I got punched in the face then kicked in the gut. N ow I have to go to a picnic, and I really don't want to go. I'm so glad I did cause it was super good, and I made new friends.
rolled a 2,forget to put a comma before Man and I
it was a awesome and sunny outside. I was in health class and was bored out of my mind. So I asked the teacher if I could go to the bathroom . She said of course. Of Course , Like PLEASE this is the 21 century people. So then I went to the bathroom and then I thought hey who cares about Health . So I skipped that crap and went outside where My BFF was waiting. Hey Liz. Hey . skipped health. you know it. so then we went shopping and got ready for the party. The party was off the hook!!!!! That was the end of that day. BYE!!!
It was a beautiful spring day and I was petting my dog and eatting my lunch and talked to my friends,!!!!!.
I rolled a 1 you put a , instead of a . k but good work.
It was beatilful out side so i went to hang out with the squad
so we went out to read books and play with the dog.
One thing is your in college and your busy,piles and piles of homework you have to face every single casual day,but today is not one of those days,sure I have some homework,but that won't stop me from enjoying this moment that can be scarce.Its that moment where your kicked back on a tree,peacefully doing my homework peacefully,enjoying the quietness a mouse would have,looking around thinking that its good in the hood.Also that your there with your homies,chatting your mouths of,talking about the thrilling adventures of you.Then theres were your just gone away from the world...
I rolled a 2, and I found no errors.
It was summer, beautiful day so I went outside and took a nap.
It was a beautiful spring day and the magnolia trees were in full bloom. me and my friends were studying for calculus and we had a free hour. I was on my lap top looking up notes, and my friend were reviewing the sheets. Luckily we are all pretty smart so it went along quick. then the bell rang, and it was time for next hour.
I rolled a 1 and you forgot to capitalize me
One Spring, partly cloudy day, I was sitting outside with my buddies in the courtyard lawn. We were chatting and doing homework all afternoon. It's actually quiet peaceful when you hear the birds chirping, and dogs barking. I wish you could have pets in our college, but we can't something about a noise complaint last year I don't know. The least I would want is a cat if I had to. Two of my friends are leaving to get all of us lunch so I'm sitting here with Jared, the new kid. He's really quiet nice! I just love his clothes! They're just so styleish! I especially love his green and orange hat!
I rolled a 4 and there is no spelling errors.
I rolled a 2, I got no comma errors.
Thank goodness that class is finally over. My last class is the worse class ever. The teacher is sooooooo dull and always talks in the same tone like a robot. Anyway... back to the story. Me and my best friends are sitting in the lawn outside of the school and we are having a great time. The sun is shinning and the flower are blooming. It is the most wonderful time of the year. We are all finishing our homework for the weekend so that we don't have to do it over our weekend break. Our usual Friday schedule is this same thing and when we are all done we check out home work and go back to our dorms to do whatever we want. I usually watch a movie with my best friend. Her name is Becca and she is in the back left of the picture, behind the guy in the hat. Ya it's not a very good picture for her. We usually watch a Disney movie so I think we are watching Finding Nemo tonight. That is my favorite movie and I can't wait!
It was a nice sunny day in York, Ne I am Alex I go to York College. It is Saturday. Noah, Creighton, Reed, Morgan and me were outside.We were playing football.The teams were Me,Noah, and Morgan. We dominated Reed and Creighton.......
Good Job... There were no spelling errors.............
It was a warm spring day and I was sitting and with my friends and talk about college.Then all the sudden a cute little puppy came about he was so cute. The puppy had no one with him or any thing.
It was B.E.AU.FULL day and we where in college and us friends where going to prank the dog but it wold be to rude and so we are now going to prank bob (the dogs owner). So we where going to mess with his hake sack but that wold so cold not even bill wold do that and he put yellow putting in my socks. After that bob ask why we where going to do that but we all said i haft no idea what you are talking about after all that we sat and had sum pie yum it was so good
Got a 4: beautiful was spelled wrong
Last night was a crazy party.I parted all night tell past out.I woke up the next day not knowing what was going on.
It was a butiful fall day so the thot to have there class outside so they did. Then suddenly a dog ran up to them and play whith them then the owner found there dog and took it home.Then they kept on going then suddenly a nother dog came to them to play catch..........
It's a beautiful fall day. The mild breeze rustles through the magnolia trees. We're all sprawled out on the lawn of my sorority. My puppy is happy to be playing while my friends and I study. My friend Nadia and I quiz each other for the dreaded quiz Mrs. Kirsha, a terribly rude teacher, hands out every week. As the bell rings we rush inside, my pup eagerly waiting for us to come back out.
You know those days where everything just seems perfect? That's what today felt like. The magnolia trees in full bloom, my best friends in the world right by my side. It was perfect. If nothing ever changed, and if every day was just like this one that would be fine. As we sat there in the perfect weather, I could smell the trees. Oh what a wonderful smell that is! It's like natures cotton candy. We could have sat there for hours after we finished our school work. This truly has been the perfect day!
I rolled a 6. It was perfect could be it was so perfect I cried. Be emotional!
One day in spring my friends and I were sitting on the lawn and Molly said," You know, we should really study for the big exam on Tuesday." I replied,"Ya we should and mabey get a movie in tonight." Then Bryan said," Great! Lets go." Then Nichol, the party pooper, said," Nope I'm going to study and read." I replied, " Are you going to have you nose in a book the rest of your life?" Then we all laughed.
At college in California, it's always nice out, so my friends and I always go and sit on the lawn. The trees looked bright and colorful, the flowers had a strong scent.When we went out to sit, today, before we knew it. A little dog ran up to us and tried to eat our papers, so we played with it for a while and then the owner came and called the dog back...
I am a collage student with many problems like when I accidentally killed that homeless man....it was a cold night and I was coming home from a long walk to the dog fighting ring and back.when suddenly a man from the shadows jump out and said"i am you're worst nightmare" so i slap him because no one likes batman quotes.then i had to make sure he doesn't try to mug people with quotes ever again.so i locked him in a tree house... THAT WAS CONSTANTLY PLAYING CRAPPY BOY BANDS!!! which is why i never drove with lamas again.....oh and the homeless guy just tripped over my wet noodle gun and died.
found no spelling errs
It was a beautiful day in spring, the sun was out and the grass was green. "Hi my name is Amber. I am a college student at UNK. We are all working on a project together for a English class. The school dog is here too. His name is Spot. I am a student who has just started here. Almost all of my class mates have been here for a year or 2 or possibly even 3 years. But little old me has just been here for a year. Oh I am the one who really curly hair. I have loved college so far I have had a lot of homework though. Even thought I have homework does not mean college is not fun...........
It was during school, that are Teacher during 8th period which is a free class to do whatever, So my friends and I decided to go outside, and eat our lunch. And my puppy was there to to join the fun! What a great day!
One beautiful Wednesday after noon me and my friends we laying in the grass laughing and talking about various things. As I was laying in the grass with my curly brown hair waving in the wind. As I was getting board I brought out my computer and started to go on my Facebook. After I got board of Facebook I forgot that my friend brought his dog with us and it scared me when it started to bark and chase a squirrel, As we are chasing the dog the dog just stops and starts jumping up at the squirrel thinking that is can get him. We all started laughing and giggling.
It was a beautiful spring day, until it was ruined by finals. You see, I go to College University. My friends and I are studying for finals at the park. It's a nice, sunny day. I'm working on my laptop, when all of a sudden a little poodle comes up to us. Not one of those poodles that look like clown, but a nice one with shaggy fur. It runs right up to me and shuts my laptop. Everyone else notices and we all just burst out laughing. I have never laughed this much in my life. Of course we can't take the dog home I thought. Even though it doesn't have a tag. The RA would never let me have a dog. Oh well. I might not get to keep a dog, but I will never forget today.
thought, even; well, I
Today is college day! Well actually every day is college day for me I go to my dream college UNL. It's around noon and i'm sitting under some trees with my friends Sara, Meghan, Amber, Kasandra, and Rick all of my college friends. We eat under these same trees every single day. Sometimes Sara brings her dog Fido like today as you can see. We all have horrible classes before lunch so we like to talk about our how our day is going. I always have English before lunch,Sara has math, Amber has reading, Kasandra has Spanish, Meghan has choir, and Rick has band before lunch.
It was a beautiful spring day and several young college students sat outside doing there work and eating a healthy snack. As they sit over there an English professor walks over and asks them to speak at a high school and they say sure what about. He says about college and what they want to do. I want you guys to persuade them to come to this college and why you chose this college. You all have to get together tonight and think what ur gonna say. It start of Yale and Harvard r u best choices but you don't get much one on one time so come to stand-ford.. That would be great and we would love to have you but the choice is yours its not a decision u make over night its a choice you have to make at a period of time.
I rolled a 4. Their* You need quotations, Are* Your* Stanford* You*
I was walking to my dorm room to do homework .When I saw my friends having a get together, and so I joined in and Callies dog was there when I sat down Sassy started to licking my leg.We just sat there tell the next class one of us had to leave .so me and callie walked back to our dorm room.
SO WE LEFT SASSY WITH STRANGERS?!?!?!?!? IM NEVER FORGIVING YOU!!!!!!!!!
no we take we take her with us
It was a beautiful spring day Jack, Jesse, Elizabeth and I were sitting under the big oak tree studying on the quad. I was reading my English book when Jack came up from behind me and scared me. "JACK! Don't do that! You could have gave me a hard attack!" "Sorry." He replied. Jack is the kind of person you want to be around .He's kinda funny, and is a goofball. I was to excited to read anymore, so I laid my book down on the grass. "What do you guys wanna do?" "I don't know." said Jesse "we could just lay here and act like we are actually doing something." At that moment I heard something behind me, I turned and say it was the cutest dog ever! "Hey guys" I yelled "look who I found!" "What is it?" I picked up the dog, and set him in the middle of us. "I think i'm going to name him Charlee." "Hey our R.A lets us have small pets" said Elizabeth "he could stay with me!" "Ok." And that is the store of our dog, Charlee.
Heart not hard
no comma erros.
We decided to go to the park and study today I brought my dog and every body brought some thing to do or to watch like I said I brought my dog mr nibbles and he's a blast hes a boston terrior
mr nibbles needs to be Mr.nibbles
And a period at the end
Otherwise good job.
today. I, MR. NIBBLES.
It was a beautiful day, or so was it... I was pretending everything wasnt blowing up inside the College,
It was a beautiful morning in the west of town, outside of college. I was hanging with my freinds.
Sorry! My friend came and asked what I was doing, sooo I had to give her something... Any way, where was I? Oh Yea. Ok so I was pretending everything wasnt blowing up in the college near us. Everyone thought I was a little weird. Okay I will fill you in. Okay so I was going through my regular routine. Going through classes getting stupid homework, failing math and ecanomics, But in math, HE GAVE US A HUNDED AND TWENTY-NINE QUESTIONS!!!!!! And not any normal questions, some including 2+2! what thats to hard. And I'm usually smart at this stuff. Okay but I got to my dorm and got one bomb out of my collection.. of bombs. Then I planted It in the math room. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH... OH GOD I HAVE TO GOOOOO
I breathe in a scent so fresh that I sigh. My best friend Lillian and Catalynn sit across from me. We laugh and I lean into Stephan's shoulder. He instinctively wraps his arm around my shoulders. I just love spring.
I rolled a four, and found no spelling errors. I loved your story, because you kept it short and sweet. Your word choice was great also.
Gosh this is such a great day to be with you all. I know we have a lot of homework but man its a great day. So in class today the teacher was having a emotional rollercoastaer. She was screaming and crying! SPewwwww all of a sudden this huge missle came and killed us.
Before emotional there should be an.
I liked the twist ending.
It was a beautiful spring day;the beautiful flowers were blossoming. I decided that me, and my friends should go study for the finals that were a few weeks away. I haven't study at all, and I really need to. I called up all my friends and at 2:00 we went outside to the park by the campus and we all study physics, architecture, and science. We also had some snacks to. They were delicious, and tasty. A few weeks later we all aced our finals. My friends and I decided that every year we would all study for every final until we graduated.
That was all I found you just used the wrong tense twice.
It wasn't a beautiful day I hate all the people around me. I act like I like being outside but I don't. The fools are boring very boring.
My name is Cameron and I go to college. I don't really need to because I became famous making YouTube videos and Vines with my friend, Nash. And when you get a specific amount of followers you get a specific amount of money. So I'm rich. But I went to college because I had the money so I thought, "Well why not?" So I'm at college and I love it. It's amazing. Me and Nash went to the same college so we're in a dorm together on our request. I love living with Nash because when we were in high school, we couldn't hang out anywhere but school because our moms nagged at us all the time. So it's amazing. Also, we're in the same fraternity together and we have made many other friends. College is amazing, and I'm glad I'm here. When you grow up, kids, you should go to college because I have some of my best memories here already, and it's only the first semester of my first year. I gotta go, though, because I have to study for an exam. Bye!!
Hi there my name is Jeff. If you couldn't tell I am the one with a hat and a banana shirt on. One of the things we do here in this college is learn. If you ask me it is not a lot of fun. I think there is way to much homework. And another thing I don't like about this college is that all the people here think I am smart. I am not smart, I am very dumb. But it is still a college so I will take it. And that is why I don't really like this college, or any college for that matter.
It was a okay day at school, stormy weather,clouds. We where doing so math homework on are computers. With a dog that was getting annoying and all wet from the rain and splashing us.
Rolled a one didn't see anything wrong.
I rolled a four, and I didn't see any spelling errors, but I did see the first a should be an not a.
I was chillin' with my friends, eating chips and drinking pop and lemonade. It was nice, the smell of blossoming trees, and the beautiful weather made the day the best one so far at college. It was amazing not to think about work and tests all the time. I really wish every day could be like this.
I am in there to I'm just hidden behind the kid in the back on a warm day.
It was a beautiful sprint day and we decided to have a picnic for lunch.
Every one brought something to eat. We had pizza , cookies, and chips. After we ate we decided to play a little football in the grass. Then we decided that we would go get some ice cream, and then it was time to go back to class.
It was a beautiful autumn day and a few friends and I were sitting on the campus of The York College and talking about our classes. Then I had to go to the football game since it was right across the street from the campus. They decided to join me, so we walked over to the football stadium to pay to get in to watch the game. Then once it got over we went to go eat at Wendy's. Then we had to go home back to our dorm rooms because it was 10 o'clock so we went home and went to bed. THE END...
Good job, except for autumn should be Autumn!
Good Job! I didn't see any spelling errors.
So it was a perfect day for a college picnic... but here is the thing they we were really doing drugs. Yeah drugs we put tums in the chicken. What? You seriously thought we would do stuff like heroine. God you are all drama queens. Well I guess that is a typical thing. Lots of college students do drugs and drink beer. Well I am going to this party that has beer in punch... but don't tell Mr.Janson. Well we are not going to be drinking the punch that has beer in it. We are going to be drinking regular punch and try to get Mr.Janson in trouble for drunk driving. We literally bought out a street just so no one would get injured. Why? Well here is the tale. So Mr.Janson gives F's to people that really deserve A's and A's to people who deserve F's. How do who know they do the people that deserve F's make two sentence paragraphs and don't have punctuation's. Well thats it see you later.
That was a very intresting story...... I found nothing wrong with yours
Rolled a three. Seems legit.
Well, this is actually kinda fun. Who knew. Other than people who went to college... but, eh. If you're wondering why I'm here wearing my clever disguise, it's because of the reports of illegal activity here. I don't see anything illegal, just regular college endeavors. Except for that awkward part when I walked into a meth lab, but that was off campus. It's like the dog-fighting ring, no on notices. And that part with that kid in the trash can waiting for folks to walk by... that was really awkward. And really, not illegal. Just weird. I wonder why I'm the one being the recon-dude, shouldn't it be a cop or something? Just weird. Whoa, got a report of a wet noodle monster nearby on campus! Gotta go- nope nope nope nope nope it's a Class A nope. (Noodle monsters are ranked, the Halloween monster was only a Class D) Well, these students can go down but not me. Air lift! Air Lift! Air lift? Oh, it flew into the noodle monster. Well. I'm so ou- TRANSMISSION END
uhhh well then im just gonna walk away slowly now.............
I rolled a 2 no comma errors.
Nothing really but you forgot the e in one in the sentence that says no one notices. Other wise it's fine.
Holy crap i'm so high. Why did this happen? Who has done this to me. They will pay! I will kill them!
come on dude
Apparently drugs are not "school appropriate". So I'm the guy on the right... Bye.
Rolled a 1:
This story makes no sense by the way.
It was a beautiful spring day and my people and I are hanging out at the park eating lunch. The kids were screaming and the dogs spoted a flaming red car zooming at the fasted speed ever recored. It was the best day ever and no school.
Hi my name is Johnathan, and I am talking to my friends after class. I'm the one with the hat and I really like to wear purple, but I'm not wearing it today. I first went to York College, and then I'm at UNL. That's how I'm here telling you this story.
Rolled a four, notin
I was hanging out outside with my friends and we started to talk about why we were there and we thought about it for a long time until billy said we are here because of Jake of werts and now we need to start a rebellion instigated him so they all got of and found some swords and guns laying around and when to find jake so the found him and just said YOUR DEAD!
The magnolia are in full bloom, and their flowers are floating in the wind. My friends and I are sitting in a circle and talking about our college classes, other friends, and the adjustments we've had to make since high school. Thoe is has his head sitting on my lap, his straight, black hair in perfect waves. His pale skin and his old sole make people think he's a vampire. Which my friend Anne is totally into. She's sitting right to me probably wondering what it would be like to have a vampire boyfriend. Her blond, curly hair, pale skin, and gray eyes make me think that she could be one too. Than she says, "Cate, I wondering what we would be doing in another universe in without the magnolia trees in bloom."
Interesting story, not what I expected but no errors.
Hi I'm lizzie I'm a dragon. The weird thing is that I'm rasied as a turkey. This is lexi shes a red and brown turkey. My mom,dad,and brothers are all green. I'm the color blue.but one day I found my true identity. I'm a human princess. I turned into a princess with flowing hair and with a sword and a scaly blue dress. THE END p.s my parents got hunted by hunter and I accidently ate them this thanksgiving. Opps!