So I was at the game show and they asked me whats in the box. I said a golf ball but the answer was blue foam
no capitazation errors
No spelling errors, great job!
I rolled a 4 no errors......
rolled 4 no errors
I love you all random answer was blue foam.
I rolled a 2 u did okay I guess.
I rolled a 4 and there are no spelling errors.
I was at home asking my mom what 9+10 was and the answer was blue foam.
I rolled like five dice and got a 2 jood gob
One day at school I had to get a piece of paper for a school project. So I went to the office to ask where I could get the paper. She asked me a stupid question and I said the answer was gold. She said no, The answer is blue foam.
I have a question for you what's blue and soft and easy to brake it's easily flammable if you make a mistake?
The answer is "blue foam."
It was the first day of quiz bowl. It was a tie breaker. The last and final question was a very weird question. The question was what am I thinking of. The red team won they got it . The answer was blue foam.
Rolled a 1 nothing to fix! Great Job
So there was a cow and she was very sick so the doctor called up Hayden Royal to see if he could find out what the diagnosis was for the sick cow. So doc Royal came there checked out the cow and said that the diagnosis was blue foam, "What, you have got to be kidding me, so i'm going to loose my prized bull?" Yes i'm afraid so.
I'm sorry for your loss.
and checked out
One day I was walking to see my tutor and she asked me a question. This question was very weird. She asked me what kind of foam the cookie monster uses and I said cookie foam. She said that "the answer was blue foam."
Nice! I rolled a 4 for spelling errors and found none.
''Welcome to the game show! Lets get started.'' I was so excited to start. I went first. The game show host ask me a question. "Is the answer foam?'' The host looked at me and said. "I am sorry the answer was blue foam.'' I ended up loosing the game.
No errors good job
I'm Docotur Rodney von Nighich and I'm trying to stop the spreading of satanicdeathmeatlezomboaids and maybe even permanently prevent the virus forever. However, most of my fellow docturin friends have been contaminated by it. I'm the only survivor that could possibly stop this horrible disease. So I had to fight my way down the streets to my science lab. I had several people with the virus in a cage so I could test them one by one. As I unlocked the cage they sprung on me. My cleaning lady Mr. berjangles sprayed blue foam before i got there and it cured all of them. The answer was blue foam.
I don't think there are any errors.
i rolled a four you spelled doctor dummie
You spelled doctor wrong.
I was on the platform ready to run to my designated puzzle. I was in the mind arena. I have to finish five mind puzzles the fastest. The one who wins gets unlimited riches. I was on the last puzzle and I lost because I put in red alligator and the answer was blue foam.
I got commas. You have no corrections.
Rolled a 4. No errors.
One day I was at school doing a math quiz. I noticed most of the questions had the most bizarre answers he gave us the first one. Which was which foam is better A. regular foam B. blue foam or C. all of above. The answer was blue foam so on this other question was. Can a match box A. no B. yes C. no but a tin can D. Bob. it was no but a tin can
Once upon a time there was a man named Jimmy. Jimmy was a crazy guy who collected weird things. He lived in a place where there were a bunch of monsters that were trying to invade the town. He wanted to build a new house that would be indestructible from the mosters. He was thinking and thinking and couldn't think of anything that would hold up. He tried many experiments and believe it or not, the answer was blue foam.
NO comma errors
I went up to Bob before English class and asked him, "What do u call a piece of foam that is sad." Bob thought a moment and said, " A sad foam." I thought in my head that he was the dumbest person in the world, does he not get that this is a joke and not a real thing. "No, you have one more guess then I'm telling you." I give up what is it." He really was dumb he just killed the whole joke. "The answer is blue foam." I laughed and we just walked away with a straight face. You are totally not fun, I thought to myself.
Nice job! I rolled a two and found no comma errors.
I rolled a 4 and you have no spelling errors.
Great job! I found no errors.
One day my mom was trying to figure out how to make one of her new decorations to stand up. I told her to go to Wal-Mart and get colored foam. While she was gone I was looking up on google how to make this thing stand up and it just kept saying that it depends on the color of foam. So when my mom came back we cut all of the foam into diffrent shapes and we tried every pisce of foam pink, green, yellow ect. and the anwser was blue foam.
no comma errors
Today, we got a class pet. His name is Kibble the hamster. We got him a very nice pet cage, with a soft floor on the bottom. He's very choosy about what he eats, though. He wouldn't eat anything we gave him, and we were starting to get worried. A week later, though, we noticed that the flooring had holes in it. We then realized; the answer was the blue foam. The comfortable flooring was made of it. We then replaced the cage and started feeding Kibble the blue foam that he loves.
I rolled a 4 and found no spelling errors. GOOD JOB!#@!#@!#@!#@
Rolled a 2, No comma errors !!! GOOD JOB !!!!!
Okay so I went to Walmart because I wanted to get food. So I got there and when I went inside nobody was there besides this one person I asked him what was going on and he mummble something that i couldnt understand. I couldn't hear him so I asked what he said and he just ran away in the outher direction so I followed him he went all the way to the back of the store. He went into the back and I asked what he said earlier he said that he said "the answer is blue foam". And then I left because I was hungry.
You miss spelled other and you need to capitalize one of you I's so yeah, Other than that love you story Good Job!!
You misspelled your Leah.
Capitalize T in "The answer was blue foam."
A man had been searching for some answers and had ask everyone in the village if they new someone who was wise enough to answer his questions. Until one day he was walking by some kids and heard them talking saying the they got lost but an old man was there to help them. He quickly asked the kids where he was and the man set off. He found a hut where the kids said it would be and he knocked on the door. He went in and asked his questions and the old wise man said the answer was blue foam and at that moment all of his questions were answered.
rolled a six didn't see anything bad but good job.
Help! Help! I'm trapped! I was walking through the forest, when I saw a house on the top of a hill.I wanted to see what was up there. So i started walking up there. When I finally got to the top, I knocked, and the door opened. I walked in, and the door slammed shut! I tried to open it, but it didn't budge. Then I found a keypad. The letters where all blue, but I didn't know the password. I tried many passwords, but nothing worked. Finally I tried the most stupid answer, Blue Foam. I heard a click and the door opened! I was so shocked it actually worked! I ran out of the house, and all the way back to my home. The password was blue foam the whole time.
No spelling errors.
I rolled a 2 and found no comma errors!
You need to capitalize i in the second line.
I sat in the dark, overcrowded room with my pencil in hand, sweat dripping down my face. This was the hardest test that I had ever taken, and the results would determine what career path I would be taking, and probably the rest of my life. I finished the last question, but realized that I had skipped the most difficult one on the test. I had figured that the answer would just pop into my mind. The question was this: What is the blue substance that can be either solid or foam. I thought with all my might, and the answer finally came to me. Polystyrene! I had learned this in one of my extra classes that I had taken last year. I scribbled it down quickly and ran my paper up to one of the many supervisors. I sat back down with relief just as the timer went off.
The next day, the tests were handed back out, already graded. I received mine and was astonished to see the big "minus one" at the top. I flipped through the many pages until I saw the big red check mark, marking the question that I had thought so hard about. I was suddenly very confused. I knew that was the right answer. I walked up to the front of the classroom to ask the teacher. She looked at me and said slowly, "The answer was blue foam."
Nice job! I found no errors.
I rolled a three and found no sentence structure errors!
I sat there crumpled in the corner rocking back and forth why? Oh no reason just the some biological horror experiment that went wrong no big deal right (laughs sarcastically)! The... thing is freaking creepy it's like all my nightmares mashed int to one living being. Wait where did it go Crap it in the door way. I searched all around the room for something anything to protect myself. Then I found a box decided to go metal gear solid and hide in the box there was one blue foam peanut I decided to mess with it so i threw the blue foam peanut at it and it died. I got up saying " The answer was blue foam?!"
Once upon a time there was a queen and her name was kimmie. The name of her dress was "the answer is blue foam!
No capitilization errors.
I was sitting at home and I heard Bobby Shmurda asking where da at doe and I said blue foam!
I was in a dark room and the walls started oozing out a smelly thing. I walked up to it, I was scared. I thought maybe it was blood and the lights turned on. The answer was blue foam.,
In science class one day we were seeing what will explode if we add it to milk. We tried everything! Finally, we found the answer was blue foam.
Great job no errors.
When the math teacher asked me what the answer was and I said blue foam.
Wow this food smells good. WHAT!? I ran outside and saw my masters in the pool. I jumped in the pool and I fetched the blue foam spaghetti thing. I saved the smallest boy that was drowning. I got hold of him and pushed him on top of the spaghetti thing. I paddle all the way with my little legs. I finally made it. The boy had died.
I rolled a 4 no spelling errors FOR ME!!!
One day I was told to look in the toilet and say what color foam it was I said " the answer was blue foam, but now it's yellow". My brother asked "why is it yellow?" and I said "cause I just used it".
rolled 3 no errors
Rolled a two.
The answer is blue foam screamed the teacher, It makes no since yelled a student. But then the blue foam turned into a bomb and flew to the moon and blew it up. So the government banes all blue foam from human contact, and the kids and teacher got punished for their crimes against humanity. They now lock up every blue foam in the history ever with snipers guarding every movement of anything in contact.
banes should be bans
One time when I was five I went to this science thing. They asked me a bunch of questions like whats nine plus ten since I was only five I guessed twenty-one. They called me stupid but I know I'm not. They also asked me a weird question about something flying around my room I guessed a potato flew around my room. They said no it didn't I was like how would you know it was before you came here. The last question was what is blue and foamy and I said the answer is blue foam.
"You have to include this line in your story,'The answer is blue foam.'" Mrs Snodgrass explained our assignment. We were to use that line but someone didn't hear. "What is the answer?" a kid said. "Blue foam" Mrs. Snodgrass whispered in a mysterious voice.
I was at my house and I accident made a whole through the wall because i was walking through the living room and out of nowhere i tripped over my brothers feet and i made a whole. I ask my dad what is that and the answer was blue foam
I for got to capitalized the I and put a period.
When I was at the collage with my dad there was a man who was selling cookies. I said if he could guess what I was thinking I would buy 10 cookies. I looked around and I saw a blue pop fizzing over. My thought would be blue foam. I guess he saw what I was looking at because he said "The answer is blue foam."
I rolled a 1. You got no errors. Great Job! :)
Once upon a time there was a sick old grandpa and his wife and 2 kids. The old guys was Grunkle Stan and his wife was Mable and the two kids were Dipper and Ed they were loud and obnoxious. So the old guy, Grunkle Stan stood up and started walking to the kitchen he fell the wife and kids came and ran to him he said "The answer was Blue Foam"
I got spelling errors and you have none sooooo.....
Lets make a cake brother OK lets go. First we need eggs and the packet with the ingredients in side so all we have to put into it's milk, eggs, and the blue foam. What is blue foam ooh its tooth paste. What do you mean well I hate brushing my teeth so this is my solution yep the answer is blue foam.
I spun 1
no spelling errors
It was 2014. We were in the science room doing some liver experiment. Someone said, "I think I'm gonna hurl!" So Mrs. Hirschfield sent them to the bathroom. The boy came back an hour later when we were using the sinks. When I stopped my sink something came up, no one knew what it was, and then finally the boy said, "The answer is blue foam".
I found no errors.
no errors. Great job.
I was walking down the street and some kids were following me. They were going to beat me up. They caught up to me and decided to punch me in the face and I couldn't stand it. So I went home and thought and thought and thought until I couldn't think anymore. Thats when I started hallucinating. I started seeing blue and foam peanuts. I thought to my self ¨ the answer is blue foam¨.
I was sitting class. I was bored because we had to make something out of play-doh. I made a snake, but this girl took it wrong. So I made something else. Everyone tried to guess. They could not. The answer was blue foam. They thought I was stupid. I told them that stupid is 9+10= 21.
Um no capitalization errors
One day I went up to the teacher and asked what we were gonna do. She said we are gonna do an experiment with some foam today. So I walked back to my desk and saw that there was 2 bottles of blue ink. That seemed really odd. Then when class started and she told us what to do. I got up went to the back counter where all the foam was and got some for my table. My friend said that this was going to be a really weird experiment. So we put the foam out on a paper plate and got the blue ink ready. As we were putting the blue ink on the foam, she told us that we have to think if the ink would soak through, or if it wouldn't change. Then I started thinking about this weird joke and went up to the teacher after class. I asked her what do you call sad foam and she said, A said Foam. I looked at her like what, you don't get the joke. And then I said it is a blue foam. We both started to laugh.
It was my 13th birthday party I told my mom. "No you are not having a birthday party this year" my mom told me. "Fine" I said. I walked off later at dinner I asked my dad he said " Ya that is fine with me". My mom wasn't happy about it but my dad talked her into it. Later that night I was laying in bed thinking of things we could do then it came to me we could have a pool party then I thought that was lame. I woke up the next morning and went to school I saw Sally as I was walking into school. Sally said " So did you talk your parents in letting you have a birthday party?" "Yes" I said. " Do you have any ideas on what you are gonna do yet. "No, I was thinking a pool party but I don't know" I said. Then Sally said " You should do something with blue foam". That is it "The answer is blue foam."
I rolled a 1. No errors good job :)
I was in a game. They took me up 50 feet in the air and told me to look down and and guess what I see. At first I thought water. Then they said it is not water and as I thought for a moment. I felt someone push me and there I was falling from 50 foot up. I don't know what to do. Then when I hit the bottom I landed on blue foam. Then I knew the answer to there question. BLUE FOAM!
So we're travelling through space, being chased by the fuzz. They are hot on our trail, shooting their laser guns. Pu Pu! We see a planet called Euphemmese and we enter the atmosphere. Then out of nowhere a hole pops up. Jimmy says '' There in the hole!'' So we enter the hole and escape the fuzz. In the hole there was a door with a little hole, We walk up to it and and peeked through the hole. We see lots of people all lined up in a circle. Right when Jimmy was about to speak, a small fuzzy creature looked in the hole in the door and said "Hey, what are you doing here?" Jimmy replies" We need a place to crash, fine if we come in?" The creature replies" Only If you can answer this question, What do the Galdorians like to eat? We all stare at him clueless. We sit down, helplessly, then I remember We had a Galdorian come over once at our house.The Galdorian asked us if we had blue foam and I asked"Why do you need blue foam?and the Galdorian said '' Because it is our favorite food to eat."The answer was blue foam.
we r mixing blue food coloring and Styrofoam and we got blue foam....
So many errors *Face-Palm* Rolled a 1 you need to capitalize the first letter... the first litter.. I mean letter. Really styrofoam shouldn't be captialized in my opinion but the spell check says other wise.
I was walking around asking people what 9+10 is ans ya know the answer is 21 and i walked up to this old guy and he said the answer is blue foam and im like okay and walked away....
One day I was playing veido games and it was summer. My dad pulled a surprised trip in Kanas city. We hoped into the car and drove all the way there. We also picked up Brandon's kids. They did not what was going. Do you know where we were are going.
WORLDS OF FUN AND OCEANS OF FUN
You don't knowthe point of this
One day I was doing laundry just like my mom does it. As I put in the load in to the washer I put in a little too much detergent. When I left I was relaxing upstairs when I herd an explosion. I rushed downstairs and there was blue foam and sopping wet clothes every where. Now I know not to do laundry when my mom isn't home.
"The answer was blue foam"
"Oh nothing just something I was thinking of." said my friend
"Wait what question would have the answer of blue foam?" I asked
"Hmm oh no it's not a question remember in English, the prompt?"
"Oh yeah" I answered "While I gotta go this is my stop."
Gotta go, this is my stop. You missed a comma.
The trail is orange but the answer is blue foam.DRR. "Who is DRR and what is or but blue and foamy?" Zeb said. They still couldn't figure out the clue but Zib had an idea. "What if it's talking about Zurek." They were on their way to Siberia to find Zurek.....
I've spent the last three days trying to get this blue marker off my arm. I tried everything. Soap, water, all the stuff. Suddenly I realized the answer was blue foam. The marker was blue so we needed blue foam. I got the foam, and put it on my arm. After I washed it off there was no marker it worked.
Welcome to the stupid answer game show, and here's your host Mr.obvious. Question one what is the answer to question 0?yes it is folks the answer was blue foam, and that's all the time we have tonight tune in next year for question 2.
Rolled a 1 Capitalize Obvious
WHAT THE HAMSTERS
I was at a hockey game and we were all sitting there and on the big screen there was a question was what is the favorite goalies favor foam color and after somebody said a random color the big screen should the answer and it was BLUE FOAM!!
Rolled a 3 make it into 2 sentences.
One day, I was sitting with my grandpa on a cold December day. We were telling jokes to each other and just talking about the weather and normal stuff. I had started to get really hot,so I took of the hoodie I was wearing. But then I got even hotter. I told my grandpa, and he said he knew what was wrong. I asked him what was it, and he said "The answer is blue foam." At first I thought he was crazy, but then I remembered I had read this book a while back about a normal teenage girl, who just realized she was a witch. She asked her mom why she was experiencing weird things, and her mother said "The answer is blue foam."......
I rolled a 4, no errors for that but there should be a space after a comma.
There was only 3 letters left of completing the sentence and It was my turn so I told the guy that I can solve the answer so I said "Blue Foam'
And there was tons and tons of balloons and confetti falling down from the celiling and I won 1 million dollars!
Rolled a 2, no errors.
one day bob ask me why did the sky is blue i said it was magic and he said no then we fut about it for an hours and it was lunch now so we took a brake then got back to it i said that all the pones had to help it but he said that there is no such thing as Maj then Santa came in he lafh and said yes there was so bob told me the anchor it was blue foam
rolled one nothing i think XD
So I was in canada some guy asked whats in case a toy. The anser was blue foam
In the class room there was something that was under the floor and i kept stepping on it . I wondered what it was so she stepped on it we thought it was foam. So now we asked the teacher and she said. The answer is blue foam
I was in school today and I was in the English and Mrs. Snodgrass asked me whats blue and foamy. I said let me think about that. We all had to write it on a piece of paper. I wrote my answer on the paper and gave it to her. She was reading everybodys off and all there were was blue foam. I said "I for sure go this in the bag." When she read mine off. She said Zayden thats not correct its blue foam. So if your teacher asked you whats blue and foamy don't say green foam!
We were in science class and everything was making perfectly good until the teacher said "the answer was blue foam." We all sat there thinking to our self what does that mean? When we tried to ask the teacher she said what are you talking about? We were all like "You just said the answer was blue foam." She said "you guys are crazy!" So we just said "Okay" and we went on with our day. Then the end of the day we had the same teacher that had said "The answer was blue foam." She was in the middle of teaching and she said it again! We all thought she was going nuts.....
Once upon a time, there was a girl named Bre. She was a very odd girl. Every time someone asked her a question she always replied "The answer is blue foam."
My forehead was dripping with sweat. My mind was running through all of the things I had learned in science. I have no idea. I really needed to pass this test, I determined all of my future. I had no idea what it could possibly be. Then out of nowhere the bell rang that told us we needed to go to the next class. I thought it would be fine and I could just do it tomorrow when all of a sudden I heard the teacher tell us that he hopes we finished because we had only today to finish it. I was so disappointed in myself.
The next day when I went back to class and I looked at my test and saw that the correct answer was "blue foam"
I was walking around in the zoo, when I saw the parrots! I got so excited that I ran over and started jumping around. I decided to ask the parrot a random question to see what it would say. I said, "What is the new science experiment that everyone is talking about?"
The parrot replied, "The answer is blue foam! The answer is blue foam!"
I was very confused, because I thought it was the amazing owl pellet experiment.
( thumbs up)
Great job. I found no errors.
Mehhhh. Today was the first day of school, Which was terrible of course. Everyone was tired and cranky because the had to get up from there "beauty sleep" to get up and come to school. Me and my friend walked into first period. It was math, the subject we both hate, and we had a test on the first day! This was terrible. So we all sat down to take our seats and they handed out the test. We went through the test easly and we finished. We were checking and they said that all the answers were wrong. Then we asked what the Answers were and they said, "The answer is blue foam."
rolled a 4 no errors
I rolled a four no errors
This past summer I was flying into Ecuador, when we had a patch of the plane come off! What were we going to do? The pilot immediately landed the plane, so that we didn't crash. In the mean time everyone was instructed to find something that could possibly patch the chip in the plane. I had been walking for a while, when a saw something blue! I went up to it only to find that it was foam. Blue foam in the middle of nowhere! To my convenience it was very sticky. So I put some in a bucket, and took it back to the plane. It stuck! The answer was blue foam!
I was going into my attic, no big deal, becuase im allergic it the instalation. any way. My dad came home with 10 chocalate bars. I couldnt have any because chocalate gives me headaches. but i crave chocalte. So i toke a bar and thought , where could i go that no one would find me, ( Ding | light balb) The attic. Being the go with out thinking girl I am. I went on up. I walked into the attic. Started coughing. And I remembered. OH CRAP! I ran down the ladder to the attic and fell on my face. Before I came down I saw this Big black bag. And the curious girl i was. I asked my dad. When I asked him his face got bright white, and he yelled " THE ANSWER YOU WANT IS BLUE FOAM" and ran out of the house...
One day at school we were supposed to make a practice of our project of whatever we wanted in shop. So I went to the craft store and was looking for foam. I asked for help and the guy said blue foam is the answer. So I got the foam, made the project, went to school the next day, and I got an A.
I rolled a 4 I didn't find any errors.
I rolled a 4 no errors
BOOM POW CRASH ZING GRRRRRRRR WAPOW DING DONG GIGIDI GIGDI GOO . The answer was the blue foam.
I rolled a 4 no errors
When I was in class we were assigned to make a volcano. He said "You can not make red foam. The answer to this assignment is blue foam. If you do not make blue foam for the volcano, you'll be in detention." When I went home, I made my volcano. I brought it to school the next day, and the guess what happened. It exploded all over the place. It make the whole classroom a blue foamy ocean. It went through the door and flooded other classroom. Science experiment gone wrong.
rolled a 2, found no errors, good job!
I rolled a 2 No errors.
So, I got a call saying "what do you think is inside my house walls?" said my friend, i said " green foam", He said "no the answer is blue foam."
The answer to 2+2= fish, 3+3=8, 7+7= triangle, and 4+6= blue foam, mind blown... Just kidding...
So one day someone asked me a dumb question, it was like "What's purple plus pancakes?" "I don't know, what?" " The answer was blue foam, because aliens don't wear hats.
One Bob was sitting on something, the answer was blue foam.
I was at a game show and they had a box that had something in it. I was supposed to guess what was in that box to win one million dollars. They gave me five hints that I can use. They said it was blue and it was foamy. I finally came to a final answer, I guessed blue foam. I was right and right away they gave me a one million dollar check.
Rolled a 1 no errors
Once upon a time there was a unicorn. This certain unicorn had an assignment due tomorrow. This unicorn's assignment was he had to make something for science class. The unicorns father told him that the answer is blue foam. So he started experimenting with the stuff he had around his house. So he used some dish soap that was blue and water. Which made it look like blue foam.
I rolled a 1. I saw no mistakes. Good Job!
I rolled a four and no mistakes.
So my PE teacher told us if we got hit point blank range by Railley Bobinson, got elbowed in the throat by Palik Matterson and got hit in the no-no zone by anonymous we would be able to answer a question. The answer was blue foam.
We were playing dodge ball.
Yesterday, was like any other day, except for a little experiment. You see, I really like the color blue. Coolest color ever! I thought that blue bubbles would be cool. I put some blue food coloring in a container of dish soap, put them both in my bathtub and what a sight it was! Guess what it looked like? The answer is blue foam!
Everything was correct.
So it was just a normal day here in tranvill town. Until this weird wacko wizard guy came and said "Sinster is coming." I was like "What you mean." He just shook his head and the nI saw this weird slimy noodle monster. I was all like "Man now I really regret not buying that wet noodle gun from the president of Fergus Republic. Well no matter I'll get my 55 Thomas Ager. It's a machine gun... it came out last year, no matter. Well I got it and started shooting the beast. Then the wizard came back and said "You want to beat this beast is that true well you'll have to find something blue." Well I just grabbed some blue foam from my attic. I just threw it at the thing and it just disintegrated. Then I said "The answer was blue foam. And then everyone cheered and then gave me a feast of wet noodles. I wasn't hungry.
Rolled 4, Third sentence, nI = I*
Well I was on a quiz and one of the answers was blue foam. So I clicked the blue foam and I got it right yaaaahhhh.
Rolled 1, nothing.
I chose to go on the jepordy show and play and it said if you chose anything purple in the room and I would be in and it was a mouse or purple foam and I chose this "the answer is purple foam" and I was right and I won jepordy with a $10,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000 check.
No purple foam
I had a prodjckt to get done and the answer was blue foam. I had to make a snowman for art.
I sigh sadly as I get the answer wrong to the question, again.
"Sorry, Lyra. The answer was blue foam."
I hear Catherine snicker at me. I glare at her and her entourage. The bell rings and I sprint to the door. I grab my bag and start walking home across the frozen area.
I walk across the frozen river and hear a deafening crack. I freeze and start to run as the ice cracks around me. I grip the edge of the bank as the river tries to pull me away. I pull myself up and start coughing.
I hear a shriek and turn just seeing Catherine fall under the water.
"Catherine!" I scream. I dive into the river and swim towards her. Her head goes under and I dive for her. I pull her up sputtering out water. We swim towards the shore and I pull her out.
"Catherine?" I ask as I catch my breath. She lays still.
" Oh, lord, no." I press my hands on her chest and hit hard. She coughs out water just as something grabs my leg and pulls me into the water.
Rolled a 1, no errors.
Anne, I rolled a one, and found no errors in that catigory. However, I did think that you could have used the word "I" a lot less than you did. Besides the fact that you started most of your sentences with that word I thought that it was great.
one day I was trying to figure out how to sneak some stuff over the Mexican border and so I had an Idea to make a boat out of blue foam so they cant see me on the water.The day came that me and Dora to sneak the stuff in to the U.S and we got over with no problems.THE ANSWER WAS BLUE FOAM!
I rolled a one and one should be capitalized. Other wise it was very funny. XD
I rolled a 4.
That is one long sentence. I think you could have shortened it up a bit.
The group test was hard. I had to get into the field of study that I wanted. The pressure was on.
We were doing group tests today, and I my group just got a question wrong. We had to wait for who knows how long. I think about the question a little bit more. "There is a crack in the bottom of your resident house, because of a recent tornado. It is predicted that more are to come. How do you seal up that crack to prevent it from getting bigger during the other storms?"
"Blue foam," I said. The answer was blue foam.
"What?" said my teammate, Annie.
"It doesn't sound much like science, but when it dries, the minerals make it harder than stone. It would seal the crack up perfectly, and the other storms wouldn't be able to penetrate it, so the crack wouldn't widen.
The answer was blue foam. This may confuse you, but I can't explain. Okay, I can, but it's weird. There was a bit of a skirmish in FR, and it was getting out of hand. The reason for it? I may have cut off the supply of Twinkies and kept them to myself. But in my defense, I didn't know how 'Murican the people in my country were. It got out of hand. The wet noodle cleanup was just plain hard. The casualties were low, and there were no deaths. So, there I was. In my house. I was trying to order more Twinkies for the people but they wouldn't accept it. I told T-Rub to hold them off some more (By now he was pretty angry because of how many bullets he had to soak in with his rubber-ness) while I figured out how to clone the Twinkies. When I put my special "concoction" on the Twinkies, they kinda turned into blue foam. I thought, "Yea, I can work with this" and I shoved into a cannon and shot it out to the people. They actually liked it. Though, many died (I lied about the no deaths...) but they were the malnourished and their death was inevitable. Two kinds of genocide there. Twinkies and the dying people. But they, again, were dying, and don't really count as people anymore. That's kind of mean. But I'm president and it's okay. Besides, how do people die from blue foam? What T-Rub? It was poisonous? What do you mean I made a new from of cyanide! T-RUB! You should've warned me! Ugh... well, time to get to work on creating more plant people.
Meant to put form, not from in one of the sentences.
no errors and JAKE DIDN'T I TELL YOU NOT TO CLONE TWINKIES
Oh, and to clear things up most of Illumination is of plant people. And it doesn't rain much. So they were malnourished because of that. And since they are plants, that means they weren't really people. That makes it a lot less mean. Now I feel satisfied.
rolled two no errors that I saw and Jake why! Do you put me in these things acting like I'm your minion.
Because you are.