When I am older I want to be very nice and caring and also smart.
I rolled a 3 joob gob.
Rolled 3 :) no errors
Rolled a 4 didnt see any erros
When I grow up I want people to see me as kind and successful. I would like to have a nice family. I would like to have a good job that I like and am good at.
No spelling errors.
No spelling erros
No spelling errors.
I want to start my own archery supply store . with my own brand of bow.
Cap the w in with
Capitalized the w in with.
When I grow up I want to be successful. I want people to see me as a good person. That is how I want people to see me when I grow up.
I rolled a 2 you had no comma errors good job.
I rolled a 4 and found no spelling errors. Nice job!
rolled 4,no spelling errors
I want others to see me as a person that gives back but does not live for other people. I want my life to be like I do things that make me happy. I want to live for myself and other people. I want to be successful at what I do.
No capitalization errors on this paragraph.
I want to be an F.B.I agent when I grow up. I love the though of getting to catch the people who are causing harm in this world. I have grown up around this stuff in my life, knowing why the bad people in this world do what they do. I feel that all the people who go against the law need to put to justice. Sometimes people do harmful things to other people because they feel that their religion is telling them to do that, so they think they are doing God a favor by doing these things.
I see myself going to college, getting a good education. I also see my self having a family. I really hope that I will be able to the job I want to be. I really hope that I will be able to live in a nice house and have a very happy rest of my life.
Rolled a 2. Good Job!
I rolled a 4 and did not find any spelling errors.~ GOOD JOB!!
I rolled a one no erros good job
No capitalization errors.
I rolled a one. You have no ending punctuation errors but I think you mean to say thought instead of though.
I want to go to college, make a living, I don't want to be alone so find a woman get married have kids celebrate Holidays and special events and finally die and go to Heaven.
have kids, special events,
Find a woman, have kids, celebrate holidays, and special events
When I grow up, I want to be an caring person. I want to look at other people's needs other than my own, and show them that I care about them. I also want to be a responsible and trustworthy person, so that others can trust me. I want to be able to complete tasks without others worrying about it. I want to be a good friend too. I want my friends to trust me and know that I'm loyal to them.
When I grow up I want to be a caring person.
I rolled a 1. No errors great job. Future you sounds like a great person.
No capitalization errors. Great job!
What I want people to think of me of is a person that will teach your kids. They come for me for help. I will try to teach them will. I would try to be a good teacher.
Good job Maddie.
I want to teach them well.
When I grow up I want to be a good father to my and a good husband to my wife. I want to raise my children to learn how to praise God. I want to be someone who attends and is involved in the church. When people look at me I want them to say " he sure is a good man".
He needs to be capitalized in the quotations
When I grow up, I want to be a good father to my kids and a good husband to my wife.
When I grow up I want to be the funniest person ever. Being funny makes everybody happy. I don't want to be one of those old grumpy people when I'm older. I hope I will have a job and have a nice house. Being funny makes the world a better place.
NO COMMA ERRORS NAH MAN
When I grow up I would like to be a computer designer so that I can help people out with new technology that is becoming the new world. I would like to be seen as smart in the technology world so that people know me as the person to go to when there are problems. I would also like to have a good loving family that loves everyone.
When I grow up I would be going to college and hopefully being a good student. I would go to vet school and when I get out of school I would get married and have a family. I would be a good christian and go to church every Sunday. I would buy a house in Oklahoma or somewhere where it doesn't get too cold. I would never be late to work every day unless I get sick. I would be a good employee and would hopefully not let anyone down, especially my boss. I would live a happy life with little stress. And when I get old I will be an even better believer in Christ.
You know what I want to be when I grow up? I want to be maybe, a football player, if I even get there. Maybe I will be a teacher, or I could be the kind of person who have a scholarship in college and then after college I would want to have the life that my family would want me to have and no to do drugs. Most important is to be a father that doesn't just give up on my kids and do the things that can hurt them. That's the most important thing that I want to do when I grow up.
I rolled a 1
Great Job! :)
When I grow up I want to get a wife maybe a kid. Want I want people to see me as is a kind loving person who is nice protecting and charming.I also want a good job and live as long as possible.
rolled a 4 no spelling errors.
I got 4 the first want should be what other than that nothing else
When other people see me or talk to me, I want them to see someone truly amazing. Someone that will care about them unconditionally and that will be there for them. Someone that has a friendly personality and a welcoming smile. Someone that is true to themselves. Someone that is honest and trustworthy. I want that lively person to be me when I grow up.
I rolled a 4 and did not find any spelling errors. GOOD JOB!!!!
I rolled a 4 as well and did not find any spelling errors. GREAT JOB !!!!!!!
I can see myself having a family and going to school. I can see myself being successful. I want to go to collage to be a teacher. If I have children I want them to also be successful.
I want to be seen by people as a caring person and someone that doesn't take any thought on how other people are feeling. I want to be a person that stands for the poor and the weak I want to be someone that goes the extra mile. I want people to trust me and give me their problem so I can help solve them.
When I grow up I want to be a farmer and be a good person.
When I grow up I want to be a farmer,and be a good person.
BTW its not soposed to be a job
I want to grow up to be caring and very nice when I do business with people. I want to be lovable to my associates and care for them and maybe ever give them peanut butter cookies when I do business with them.
And maybe even give them milk on the side with those cookies. That would be very kind.
When I grow up I want to be successful. Success is not defined by getting a job or not. Success is your own life goal, I just wanna be successful in life. I also want to be a very caring person, for my family, my friends, and lots of other things. When I grow up I will be a caring, loving, and successful adult.
Nice job! I rolled a six and didn't find any incomplete sentences.
How I see my life... I see it amazing that god put me on this planet and when i'm older I want to build a big place so were all the homeless people can go to have shelter food and i'll make it free cause that's the person i'm gonna when i'm older and wiser and that's how I see my life. The End!!!
i'm gonna *be when im older...
I want to be a good father have my children involved in a lot of activities. I want to be caring to other people. Have people think of me as a good man. Make everybody happy, and not be grumpy when I am old.
I rolled a 4
No spelling errors!
When I grow up I want people to see me as a nice and successful person. I want a nice family. And a job that I like so that I can get payed a good amount.
I rolled a one
Good job no errors
When i grow up i want to be responsible.
Rolled a one. Capitalize your I's.
Capitalize your I's and put more effort into your work.
When I grow up I want to be a wonderful person. I want people to be able to depend on me if they want me to do something for them. I don't want to let my friends down. I hope that I can do something amazing in my life time that I can be remembered for forever.
I rolled a three and I found no errors.
I want to be seen as a nice and respectful person. I want people to see me as someone to look up to. I want to be a honest friend and friendly. I also want to be funny and get people to laugh.
I want to be an honest friend and friendly.
When I grow p I want to be seen as a kind, caring person. When someone hears my name I want them to think, "Oh I know her she's the nice person who works down the street." I want to be thought of as a good person and not some one who has anger toward useless situations.
I rolled a two and I didn't find any comma errors!!!!
I'm a funny,shy,thinking type of person. I like math,reading,art,archery and most of all I love to bake. If I were to pick a job it would be a lawyer because I would have lots of money to make a life out of it. so that's how my life would be like. I wonder what would be your life like.
I have 1 capitalization errors
When I grow up I would like to be a even better follower of Christ than I am now. I hope that I have a nice family with a few kids. I would like to be very generous to all I meet, and also a very nice guy in general. I would like to live close to a park so that I may play with my kids.
Cool story I found no spelling errors GREAT JOB!
when it says I would like to be a even better follower of Christ it should be.
I would like to be an even better follower of Christ.
When I grow I wanna that guy who does something. Something kind for someone, Something that would bring a smile on there face, something that could change a life. I want to be the guy who stands up for what he believes in. The guy who is authentic, has integrity, caring ,trustworthy, and that claims and lives like Jesus.
no spelling errors.
I want to live in lincoln. Where I have a big mansion house. And live with my hot wife. I will turn out famous and be rich. Then I'll make a song like lifesyle.
I want to live in Lincoln, where I will have a big mansion house, and live with my hot wife. I will turn out famous and be rich, then I will make a song like lifestyle.
Malik the only way to make a song like lifestyle...... Is if u live life like a volcano... No spelling errors!
When I grow up I want to be a rich farmer and a hunter/fisherman because that seems awesome! I want to be remembered for who I am, and not someone who isn't myself. I want people to see my as a nice hardworking cowboy that is brave and strong.
I want to be a kind loving husbandmen and fun Dad. I want to be able to support my family. I want to have a great hose with a big yard. I always want to have time for my family.
When I grow up I want to have a wife and kids and be able to provide for them. I also want to be a good father I don't want my kids to see me as the guy that yells at them all the time. I want to have a good job that I like and I still make enough money to give my family big presents on their birthdays or holidays. I also want to be baptized and to be really close to God so I can teach my children all about God. I want to be a good husband to whoever I marry. I want to be in good shape and workout not be one of those guys who lets themselves go when they get married. That's what I want to be like when I grow up.
When I grow up I want people to see me as a caring person. I want to think of people before me. I don't want someone to think of me as selfish. I wan them to see me as nice, caring, and funny person.
Me should be myself, wan should be want, but otherwise great job!
When I grow up I see myself being a person who goes to collage and who has a happy job and always has fun when there either with my family or my friends.
I rolled a five I am supposed to add adjectives and adverbs.
Goes to a *great college*
Good job, I rolled a 1. I don't think that there should be they're. Also, collage should be college. I don't know about that last part though, I don't quite understand it. Good job, though!
When I grow I want to be someone who makes a big difference in the world no matter what it would be. I want to be the kind of person who people trust.The kind of person who everyone likes.Someone who is funny,but also can be serious.Someone that people think they can talk to. I want people to see someone truly amazing.I am going to try my best to reach all of them no matter how long it takes. I want to succeed at all of them,and I hope I will.
I rolled a 1
When I grow up I want to be a caring mother, fun to be with, calm, not so angry. I want to be me. I want to live my life to the fullest, have fun while I can, and then settle down with my children. When I grow oldish and my kids go to college I want to live my life again. The same way I did before I had children.
i want to be someone people can depend on too
When I grow up I want a loving wife and 2 kids, I also want a good paying job and a good carreir. I want to be known for helping people and their pets and being kind. I also want to be an average family, not rich and not poor. When my kids grow up I will retire and live out the rest of my days the fullest I can. I also may start a chess club.
When I grow up I want to be the kind of person that is kind and caring.I also want to get married and have kids. I want to play video games and still take acre of my family. I want to live life to the fullest. I want to go to many fun places with my kids and wife. I want to be able to fulfill my kids expectations. I want my kids to grow up to be great people and for them to get married and gave kids. I want my entire life to be just one big present. I want to grow up and spend time with friends I know now and friends I'll know later. I want to meet up with friends I haven't seen I haven't seen in years. I want to make everyone happy. I want to grow up and still care.
acre - care
gave kids - have kids
2nd I haven't seen out
Rolled a 4... You corrected them already.
When I grow up I want to have one boy named Ryker and a lovely wife (I don't know the name yet). I want a bulldog named Tank and a kitty named Canine. I hopefully will live in medium to high class, and live in a nice neighborhood. I want my kid to have a trampoline and a pool.
Rolled 4, No errors :)
When I grow up I want to be remembered. I want to be that person who makes someone's day by simply waving to them. I want to be that person who helps someone when they fall or drop something to pick them or their stuff back up. The thing I want to be is a nurse. It may involve hard work and hard classes, but I'll try to do what it takes to become a nurse. I like to help people and make them feel good about themselves. Not only in the hospital bed but in the outside world. The only thing I don't like about wanting to be a nurse is when you get attached to a patient and they die or transfer to another hospital. That would be hard to do. :(
I rolled a 4 I don't see any spelling erros
Sorry I meant errors
I want to be a smart. I want to invent things. I want to have a difference on the world someday. I want my kids involved in a ton of sports and activities. I want to be happy and not grumpy when I am older. I want to make other people happy and be kind and not mean.
When I grow up I want to be a caring and responsible mother. I want to be able to provide for my kids, and be able to help them in life. I want to be a funny, caring, responsible, nice, and helpful person in life. And also when I grow up i want to make a difference in the world, perhaps make a change. As a 12 year old now I am going to try my best to succeed and make a change now, so that it will look good on me in the future. And I also want people to be able to trust me and depend on me. Like if I say I'm going to watch their kids, then I'm going to watch their kids. I want to be known as the Woman that is nice, caring, and responsible. And that is what I want to be when I'm older.
When I grow up I want to inspire people. I want to make a true difference in someone's life. I want to have a nice family, and a steady job. I want people to look me in the eye, and say I've made a difference. I want to go to college, and be the best person I can be. I want to stay in touch with the friends I have now, and still be best friends. I don't care if I'm rick or poor, though I would prefer rich, I just want to be a good person.
I rolled a 2, and I didn't see any errors. Good Job!
I what to be some one who goes to a good college has a good job and Mamie have a family to call my one and someone who will be nice and not some one who sits every ware they go that is what i what to be when i grow up___________________________________________
rolled one need to work one the I`s
When I grow up I want others to see me a kinda respectful person that is caring and known for my kindness. Someone that is wanted to be around, Funny, Energetic, Some one that can be trusted when people need help. Someone that cares for other people, willing to help others when they are in trouble.
I rolled a 1 and I see to errors you do not need to capitilize funny and energetic also some.
When I grow up I want to be the kind of person who is helpful respectful. I want to make the right choices in live and choose the right career path for my needs. I also want to make good choices and hopefully minimize and realize my mistakes. I want to support my family with love and devotion, and teach them new things.
I always want to be learning new things. I want to stay fit and healthy so I can minimize health problems. I want to get proper insurances to make sure my family stays safe.
Rolled a 1(Capitalization and ending punctuation)
I can see myself having a family and going to school. I can see myself being successful. I want to go to collage to be a photographer. If I have children I want them to also be successful in life as well. I don't want them to fall behind in their school work. I want other people to see me and think that I have done good in my life.
In my future when I grow up, I want to have a family, get married, find a job. When I grow up, as a person, I want to make some kind of good impact on the world, I don't want to leave the world without changing something for the greater good. I also want to live life to it's fullest, with friends and family and others. Another thing is that, I want to cherish that's all around me and be thankful for it, forever.
What I want to be when I grow up is a snowboarder. I am really good when it snows I go and shred some snow. Once we went to a ski mountain and I brought my snow board. My mom said do you really want to snow board yes. I went off the ski lift and I was snow boarding. I know how to do a flip. My mom said you are going to crack my head. I have not yet. That is what I won't to do when I grow up.
No spelling errors in
When I grow up, I don't want to go to college right after high school. I want to go all over the world, and see more than I would spending 4 or more years in the same place. I want to have fun, and meet awesome people, and have amazing experiences. I will probably go to college after that. Honestly who knows what will happen?
When I am older i want to be a Mother, married with 3 kids. I want to be bringing in good income, and be able to buy a house, food, and stuff that my family needs. I hope that I have a good family, income, house, and any thing that we need to survive and live out my life. I also want to be someone people can come to me with things and trust me with them. I want to grow up and make a difference in the world. I want to make i huge difference with bulling. Bulling is not right and i want people to suspend it from everybody.
I think that ill be a loving person and i think that i will be a family man and father but most importantly i will be a human being and i will be a person that makes a difference in other peoples lives such as my children's lives and just people in general.
before and add a comma
When I grow up I want to be happy. I want to live life to its fullest. I want to learn about God in all ways. I want to help others in every way possible. I want my life to be full of good people and good friends. My friends and I will have great time together and always be there for each other. In ups and in downs friends will always be there for me, and I will always be there for friends. I want to meet new people everywhere. I want to see the world.
When I grow up, I want to be a successful person. Not the kind that's rich, and owns a bunch of businesses, but the kind that is happy in life. To be successful in life, to me at least, is to be happy with what you hove. I would like to have a good college degree, be a committed christian by worshiping God, meet the perfect person ( for me, because no one is perfect) and have a good job and maybe kids. I think that this kind of successful is more fulfilling. I think this, because I would rather be poor, and have happiness than to be rich and have a lonely life with no one to spend it with. I think that also, if I was poor, I would appreciate things more, not because i need them, but because they have good in their heart. I hope I might have made you think about what successfulness means to you.
Hove needs to be have. i needs to be capitalized, and maybe try to shorten up your sentences to make more smaller ones and not one big sentence. Otherwise Great job, sounds like a great life to live.
When I grow up I want to be the best person that I can be. I hope to grow up kind, patient, and caring. I want to be the person who will put a smile on people's faces. I hope to have a family that is kind, loving, and believers of God. I hope to be more involved in my community and church. I want to be the person God wants me to be.
When I get older I have a feeling i'm going to turn out like my dad which doesn't sound bad but let me explain why it is...My dad is a great guy but he's irresponsible and gets in trouble with the court a lot and he's never been the best with kids but in my opinion he's fine...but my mom thinks otherwise. but enough about my dad. Here's what everyone thinks I will be the exact opposite of my dad which is going to be hard to do.
I want my life to very happy. I want to have a great family . I want to have a very nice house and very nice cars. I also want many good freinds that are fun to be around.
What I want to be when I grow up is someone who dose stuff for fun all the time and not have to be restricted by a job all the time.
I want to be a kind person, someone you want to be around. When people think of me I want them to think of a happy, joyful person. I want to be energetic for everything.
When I grow up, I hope to become a tattoo artist for two reasons:
1. I like to draw so I think it's something I'd be good at.
2. I enjoy hurting people. Just imagine a needle piercing through your skin!
But I also want a great family. I want two kids, a girl and a boy. But the boy has to be older so he can hurt anyone who hurts his little sister. It would be the perfect family! And I wanna live in a house that's just the right size for us. Not too big, not too small. I think this life would be the most perfect life ever.
I see there is nothing wrong so good job girly
I want to live in either Vermont, here, or Chicago. I want to have 2 children 1 boy and 1 girl but I want to have the boy first so he can look out for his little sister. I want to have and awesome marriage and have a dog too and maybe even a cat. That's really all I want for my life.
Your paragraph has very few mistakes. Though, there should be an "an" before awesome. That's all that I found.
When I grow up I want to be a loving mother, and have a husband. I want to be kind, caring for my family. I want to care for my family where ever we go. I want to make a lot of new friends, and get a good job. I want to worship God, and go to church every week. I want to see new places when I travel. I always want to be happy. If I'm never happy then life wouldn't be so great for me. I also want to be successful and make great decisions in life. I would rather be poor and happy, than rich, and poor. I want to make sure my life is great , and not bad.
I rolled a 5 and there was no errors
Aww Jett and Tea together again
What I want to be when I grow up is a very trustworthy, respectful, helpful, and caring. I want everyone around me to know that they can trust me to do something and get it done or have them trust me to tell the truth. I want my family, friends and co-workers to treat me with respect and I will give them my respect in return leading me to be a respectful person. Also I will be helpful to anyone in need including homeless, people that are seriously sick or injured, and family and friends when they are going through something tough like a loved one died, going through divorce, and financial issues. Last of all I want people to think of me as very caring of others and their opinions. I don't want them to look at me and think that I don't have a care for anyone around me, I want them to see me as caring for all of their problems and everyone that I know that I care for their problems to.
Rolled a one, no errors. I think. I honestly just skimmed.
Oh, and if you want to be like that, you have a long way to go.
When I grow up I want people to see me as joyful, kind,and responsible . I want to be hard working and cheerful. And think of others not just myself.
I see no capital errors good job.
I rolled a four and didn't see any spelling errors.
Great job no errors.
When I get older I want a mansion to live in I don't know how I'll get it. I want a limo and nice cars and some people to visit me. :)
I think my life might be like me ending up being a really tall and helpful person. I won't make fun of others for what they do or how they talk. I also want to be the person who is remembered for being nice like that. That is really all I want to be. But if I had to choose something else I would choose being a professional baseball player. I would choose that because it is just a sport and I wouldn't play it to become famous or make it into a job for money. l would just play the game with my team and have fun.
When I grow up I want to be seen as a nice trustworthy person. I want to be seen as a person that people look up to. I want to be known as a respectful person. I want to be a person that makes people laugh every once in a while. I want to be known as a person with good character.
no comma errors
No spelling errors
I want to be a good dad. I want to the best person I can be and be a better christian than I am now. I also want to be a really good teammate.
rolled a 5 didn't see anything wrong but good job.
Rolled a 2 NO ERRORS
Rolled a 4, no spelling errors.
When I grow up I want to be a .... fashion designer helper, pet babysitter,kid babysitter and game designer and art teacher. All have good qualities.
When I grow up I want to go to college, get a job, and start a family, but that's not all I want to do. I don't want to be just your average citizen someday. I want to be strong, yet compassionate. Fun, but have rules set for myself. I want to be that person that stands up for what is right. I want to be a leader.
Rolled a 1, no errors
When I grow up hopefully I will have a good paying job and a good house. It is important to me because you need money to bough food, water, electricity, and or heating/ac. The house will need to be sterility and protective. That is important because you will need a house that can protect you and your family. It may seem that I don't care about anything ells because if I need it I would have it and if I wanted it I would not have a need down the road.
I rolled a 4. Bough should be buy. Sterility should be sterile. Ells should be else.
I'm already living the high life as president. But later on, I would like to settle. After a raid on Bill Gate's house, at least. Then I'll live there. He probably has some money stashed there, but if not I'll just raise the Illumination taxes. I never said I would stop being president. Just in a more devil-may-care way. It's not like I'm not living like that now. Lax is the way to go. Not like the stuff for the constipated, that's a weird way to live. You'd be living half your life in your bathroom. That's no way to live. Unless you have like an Xbox in there, then it's a life. But that's no life I would like. As I said before, in a dilapidated Bill Gate's House with money and entertainment (I just added the entertainment part) is the life I would like. With a large military at my side, it will someday be possible. Just gotta fix the issue of how half of them are untrained and unarmed.
jake you spelled them wrong
I rolled a 4 no errors. And what the heck about the bathroom life.
rolled 2 no errors
I want to be a very nice President. I wanted the title to be changed to Dictator. I hear the FR has a bad beaver monster problem. Witch is good for our badminton team for several reasons. Most of them are inappropriate and gross. So I'll talk about our residents trying to tear me limb from limb. But not today.
The Dictator of PR