First of all i would sue them cuz pieceings arnt right well thats how i feel about them and them i would never go to that hospital ever agian
Capitalize your I's bruh!!
It's bad, terrible grammar. You spell "again" wrong. And you need to capitalize your "I's." Also, you need to put a " ' " in your aren't.
Capitalize your eyes, comma between right and well, and add a period on the end.
I would be kinda freaked out because they would be looking like a doctor they would look like a hipster/gangster. I would just leave the room and just hop into another room and do whatever they were going to do.
If my doctor looked like that I would run for my life.I would be scared to death and probably punch them in the face and if my doctor looked like that I would follow her and burn her place down in the middle of the night.If she looked like that I would walk away and never comeback to the doctors because she looked like that.
If my doctor looked like that I would run out of the hospital faster than them. The hospital is supposed to be a germ free kingdom, and here they are with all of these holes in their body prone to infection. Which could in turn be passed on to the patient killing them. Think about that. My question is how did they get the job in the first place. Unless their boss is really working under cover with someone else and nobody knows. What is their nose ring fell out of their nose and went down a patients throat chocking them to death. What about that. I'm sure they are a nice person but hey accidents happen.
I would never let someone that looks like this be my doctor. People who have lip piercings, nose piercings and any others beside ears look trashy and are unqualified. There is no reason to get them anyway they don't look attractive or nice so there is no reason to get them! I would never hire a person like this anywhere else but a fast food place!
They dont need to look attractive to you youre like 12...
Yeah, no body even wants to impress you!!
I would react how I normally would. BUT I find unlikely that a doctor would have piercings, but if they do that's there choice . And their choice shouldn't be judged. If they want the pain of having their nose pierced , good for them.
If my doctor looked like this I would think I was in a forien country and i don't think that this person should of never been a doctor because its just on normal. Also maybe if you went into a surgery and you woke up with all this metal in your face and your doctor did it. So in the end I would get a new doctor.
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If my doctor looked like this I would probably make sure that they were certified to be a doctor. I would think that they knew what effects the piercings had on their body. I'm sure that the piercings get infected. And if I was a doctor I would probably want my patients to like me. If my doctor looked like this I would switch doctors. I would also make sure not to recommend him to anybody.
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I would straight up find a therapist and a new doctor. Dean tried to steal my idea but I told him not to. He obeyed, like he should. I own Dean's soul, granted its just his breath in a jar... I should reevaluate my life choices, and this story. I need a cold shower.
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If my doctor looked like that I would be afraid that she would poison me. And I would leave the building and never go to that doctor again. And I would think that She would be in the piercing department.
You can't start a sentence with ''And" .... ''she'' shouldn't be capitalized
She doesn't need to be capitalized.
If my doctor looked like this, I would leave very quickly. I would not trust a doctor who had piercings such as these. This look is very scary and definitely not professional-looking. Doctors should not look like this, as it would scare many, many patients away.
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I found no errors, great job!!
I agree. I found no errors. Great job!
I found no errors, great job!!!
I found no errors, great job!
I'm here to persuade you not to visit this lady as your doctor. If she or someone has this many piercings and she/he is a doctor they probably don't know what they're doing and it's just not sanitary!! I personally wouldn't one them as a doctor because 1. They look pretty scary and 2. I'd rather have a doctor who looks professional. I'm not the type to judge, but I think most people can agree that a person like that they might not want them as their doctor.
If my doctor looked like this I would move to a new city, in a new county, in a new state, in a new country, that is also in a new continent, and also on a different, world with completely new people. OK maybe I wouldn't do that but I definitely would seek therapeutic help for what I just saw on a doctors face. What no doctor should have a nose ring that belongs in a bull's face. Or lip piercings that look like they belong in Africa. Well anyway for any doctor that wants to never have any patients and be living on the streets I would say go for this look. Unless you're a doctor in the hood. Then you'd be rich.
If my Doctor looked like that when just about a year ago is the last time I saw him and I mean why would Lindsey's dad really get piercings all over his face? I would ask him if he has been to any party's lately and when the last time he went to the bar or something. But the last thing I would ask him is have you been on any drugs lately because I don't really see Lindsey's dad doing that.
I honestly wouldn't care because if other people wan't to get piercings in the lip and nose then let them because who are you to tell the rest of the world whether they can do something or not. I mean i'm not saying that you have to go out and get one i'm just saying that if you doctor looked like that you should still treat them like any other doctor because the still went to medical school and the are still certified to be a doctor, So it doesn't matter matter what they look like because still have the know how to keep you healthy just like all the other doctors.
A doctor should be fired if they looked like that. Anyone that looks like that should belong in Apple Head's circus. My reason... the Bible. Read it. There, that's my proof. It tells right from wrong. The Bible even says that you SHOULD'NT have piercings! In your face Apple Head!
If doctor look like this I will freek out.It will not be a good sine I will leave and kick him in the face and then run.I will never go to that doctor again . The I will kill him until he gets all of thoes things off
In your story you need to put an "a" in between the first if and doctor, and freek out should be freak out, and sine should be sign, And the should be then and thoes should be those.
If my doctor looked like that I would be weirded out. I woulden't do anything about it like run out of the hospital because I woulden't want to hurt their fellings but I think that I would not go back to that hospital.
Nice job! The only errors I found were woulden't should be wouldn't and fellings should be feelings.
I wouldnt care. Actually I think that would be cool.
If my doctor looked like that I wouldn't be mean and be like your ugly. I would just flat out walk away, go to the front office, grab the mic and say "Lady with all the weird piercings your fired!!" Then i'd go back to the waiting room and wait for my name to be called again.
I will kick him sand then make a run for it. and if he leaves. I will excaped out of the air vent. If that does not work I will rip the off his face. GOOD NITE LADY AND GENTLMEN. DON"T DO WHAT THE DOCTER DID OR I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN TO THE END OF THE EARTH AND RIP THEM OFF!!!!!!!
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If my doctor looked like that I would seriously scream my head off!! My scream could probably hurt somebody's ears. I mean what kind of a doctor would like to get piercings and scare little kids! Really. But I would request for another doctor to see instead of that one. And I would literally scream and run out of the doctors office. That's what I would do if my doctor looked like that. But I know that my doctor would never ever get piercings ever. That is really ture. I hate it when people get piercings.
I wold not one like that beaus dockers are pose to be healthy and those are not first you punting mete or whatever it is right thew your ear and second you can a hole bunch of infections winch can get your clients sick and the wold be the opposite of what they do plus have you ever saw one with a lip ring not that cool.
I always stick up with people, but if my doctor looked like that i would be kinda wierded out because the hospital is supposed to be germ free, but also they are a doctor so they would take good care of it. wash it good. Everything too deflect diseases. Im kinda in the middle. i wont hate it but i wont love it either....
Capitalize the I's. Otherwise great job!!!! :)
If my doctor looked like that I would run away and if my mom tried to stop me.I would dodge her run for the car and lock the doors in till she said we will get a different doctor. because who knows what she might do if the doctor is that stupid to get all those piercings. I would stay away from that doctor till the end of the earth.
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If my doctor look like that I would be freaking out. But I wouldn't run because it would probably hurt there feelings so I would just close my eyes while they are doing what ever they are doing. She would probably think I am crazy if I am closing my eyes, but oh well. But I would probably never go back to that hospital again.
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No errors lil guy.
if my doctor looked like that i would be freak out and want to leave the hospital and ...
If had to go to a doctor that looked like this I would probably walk out. Doctors shouldn't have piercings because it makes them look unprofessional and patients might have hesitations about going to them. Also doctors are supposed to persuade you not to get piercings on your face because it could be potentially dangerous! Those are just a few of the reasons doctors should not get face piercings.
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If my doctor looked like that I would be a little worried. But I wouldn't run out because I wouldn't want to hurt them or make them feel bad. But I definitely know that I would probably not go back to that doctor.......
If my doctor looked like that I probably would not want them to be my doctor. First of all they don't look like a doctor they look unqualified. If my doctor looked like that I wold leave that hospital and go to a new one where the doctors don't have piercings and actually look like the doctor they say that they are. I think that doctors should not be able to have piercings that people can see because they might get freaked out.
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bbbvIf my doctor looked like that, I would be very careful. I would see how she talks to me and stuff. I also might want to look at their degree. If she REALLY is terrifying than i would pretend that I'm all better and go to another hospital. People with piercings look very disgusting in my opinion. They also don't get my respect and/or service if they work somewhere.
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If my doctor had those piercings I would be a little weird-ed out like I wouldn't care if he or she did because its their choice but I wouldn't go that far with that many piercing because it just looks dumb. Personally I will have my lip pierced but I wont go that far with all of them.
If I were to walk into a doctors office, and I saw that my doctor was looking like that, I don't know what i'd do. I think that doctors should be professional when at their jobs. If I had an appointment and I saw that my doctor had a bunch of piercings, I don't know if i'd trust them to continue to do procedures om me.
I think that it's ok for a doctor to have piercings.....just not when they are on their job. I think that it looks un-professional and very unattractive or appealing. Take teachers for example. If they have tattoos, or piercings, they have to have them covered up when they are at their job. When they get home, the can show their tattoos, or piercings!
This generation is changing, and I don't know if I like the direction it's going. I do not think that doctors should be able to show their piercings.
If my doctor looked like that.I would run out of the hospital as fast as possible I would not look back I would just keep on running forward.You can never trust somebody who looks like that he should get fired.
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I wouldn't go to him or her because in my opinion that would be unsanitary to have all those piercing in his or her lip because they can lead and can have a high risk of infection
If my doctor looked like that I would get a new doctor. Here are some reasons why. It would be distracting. You wouldn't pay attention to what they are saying and just look at the piercings. It would be hard to understand them with the mouth jewelry. They might not even be a real doctor. Think of all the doctors you've ever had, did any of them have that many piercings. Thank you and if you're doctor looks like that, get another one.
If I had a doctor that had piercings. I would get a new doctor. They should know that piercings are bad for you. They also make you look bad. I would be scared because I would not trust them. They would also creep me out. So I would just get a new doctor.
If I had a doctor who looked like that I would not trust them. If they were good then maybe but I don't judge books by there cover so I would give them a chance. They may look that way but they might be an talented doctor. Just because they are different from the perfice picture of a doctor.
you really need to make sure you add your commas after your "maybes"
If my doctor looked like this picture....I would'nt be going to this doctor anymore. Mostly because you would not know if you could trust them or not. I, myself probably wouldn't trust them.. Probably cause the way they look..But as they say, You cant judge a book by its cover.. i would refer to that quote.. You cant judge a person just by the way they look....Like their skin color or anything like that... But back to the point.. If i went to this doctor,,,I would ask them what the point would be by having so many piercings in their lips and nose. I honestly think that having this doctor would be cool.
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Well I think this is fine because I only care if she/he can help me with my problem. So ya that's all I can say because that's all I have to say.
I don't care what they look like I just care if they are qualified.
If my doctor looked like this, I would still go. I mean, I plan to have piercings someday. Also, it's their body, so it's their choice. Why should you get to judge? I mean most of the people who judge this aren't the best decision-makers in the world. I know a few people who would be quick to judge (Not saying names), but they make terrible decisions. If you don't like that someone does have many piercings, that's your problem. Personally, I plan to get piercings and tattoos. Judge me all you want, I don't care.
I would honestly freak out and say get me the other doctors. I mean I don't wanna judge but thats ugly! Peicings are okay if there on like the ear but I mean all these other places!! I just I would be kinda sketchy about it! TOOO RISSKY!!!! But honestly I would wanna ashually see proof shes a doctor. But honestly if your a doctor you're probably very smart and nice. So peircings? Ushually people with all those are kinda bad people. Or as Savanah would say thug. But just think about all this how would you let this chick be your doctor. I honestly would say get me a new doctor. By the way I'm not judging her beacuase of this it was just a blog.
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2: No. Just no.
Living the thug life I don't have time to spell right.
If my doctor looked like that I would feel a little bit uncomfortable. I also wouldn't trust what they say as much, because they already made a bunch of mistakes in life (all the piercings) and I wouldn't want them to make any mistakes in my life.
Well I would probably be a little scared but I think it would be okay. It would probably be okay because at least they know how the needles feel. They also would have had to go to college to be a doctor so they know what they are doing so they are a doctor or else they probably wouldn't have been hired. So I honestly think I would be okay with my doctor looking like this.
If my doctor looked like that I would quickly call a new doctor, and get out of that place. I mean that's not the best first impression, why would I trust someone who looks like they stapled their face with my health. I think I would be much healthier if I just stay away from her.
I would go to a different doctor if mine looked like that. People with piercings all over their body I would never trust. Especially if you are a doctor, you should never do that. It does not look good at all. I would definitely ditch that doctor and go to someone else.
If I had a doctor that looked like this, I would walk out immediately. That is definitely not a professional way to show yourself. That would scare many people away from that hospital and they may not even come back.
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I do not think that it is okay to have all those piercings around your mouth. If your a doctor you should not were them when you are evaluating a person, but I think it is okay to wear them when you are out of the doctors office. I think you should be on my side with this because it is kind of freaky because what if they give you this look like what do you think of this. Seriously that is kind of scary to tell you the truth .
If my doctor looked like that I would say no way huzzah and run out of that hospital. I mean if its just me but i would not want a doctor even looking at me with all those piercings, and they have all of my medical records so they know what could kill me no way not for a million dollars would i let some one with all that jewelry operate on my body. Also the last thing i see before I go into surgery i don't want to be a person with so much lip jewelry.
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My lord what have you done I thought doctors were against stuff like this I mean seriously. That looks like it hurt how much pain and money did that cost you god. All those piercings scare me and they look really unnatural. I thinking of asking for a new doctor because you scare me and I if i have a surgery I wouldn't want one of those things come off and getting inside of me *shudder*. I don't trust you sorry but I just don't
If this was my doctor I would be very concerned. I would go along with it because I would want to be nice but I would make sure she was legit first. If she was real I would be okay with it but I wouldn't be excited. I think that a doctor shouldn't dress that way because they should be presentable to their patients.
I don't even understand why you would do this. If you stop and think about it, what's the point? If my doctor had piercings on his or her face, I would probably switch doctors. It makes you look like a thug and very sketchy. If I ever become a boss, I probably will not hire them.
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If I saw that my doctor has those earrings I would kinda freak out. I think it's OK if they have piercings but not on their job because it looks un-professional. Why would a doctor even get piercings though? If they wear piercings like that then their patients would hesitate why there having this doctor look at them when they have all these weird piercings on them. When their at home they could show their piercings but when their doing there job they should take those out.
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If my doctor looked like that I would run screaming out the door and and move on the other side of the world. Piercings are creepy and gross and if I had any I would wear a paper sack..................
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I would not trust this person to be my doctor. Not unless they were a certified. This person looks scary. I personally wouldn't pick this person to be my doctor based on looks. Piercings and tattoos look unprofessional in a work place.
With that said I wouldn't trust this person with my life. If they can't take care of themselves, how are they going to take care of me?
If they're not taking care of themselves, then why are they a doctor? They're obviously doing something right. Health care places and hospitals only hire CERTIFIED employees. They do background searches and check their records. So again, please tell me how they aren't taking care of themselves?
If my doctor looked like this I would never be going back to the doctor ever again. That many piercings freaks me out, and it would make me second guess who my hospital is hiring to work for them. Especially if she was a surgeon. I don't know about you, but I would not like this woman performing surgery on me. Don't you agree that piercings all over someones face is a little strange, and makes you not want to trust them?
If I walked in to the doctor's office and I had a doctor with two nose piercings , that also has 3 lip rings I would probably be a little freaked out but I wouldn't leave or anything as long as they have a medical degree they are just as good as as doctor. They went through the same college and everything so they are ok to be my doctor. If I saw someone on the street like that I would probably be a little freaked out but it is their choice on how they want to look.
If my doctor looked like that, my reaction or response would be to tell the doctor to take the piercings off. That they would look better without them and that they wouldn't have to deal with other people who could have worse judgments.
If I had a doctor that looked like that I would leave and go to another doctor for the rest of my life!
I would be a little freaked out but I think that piercings should be allowed in the work force it may not look appropriate or professional but people need to express themselves however they want.
As long As they Know what the they are doing I'm with what your face looks like.
If that was my doctor i would jump off the bed double back flip 360 kick him/her in the face rip out all the rings and throw them at her face and then get all the supplies for doctors and throw them out the window and scream over and over KOBE JAMES! then i would tell my mum if you ever take me there again I will jump out of the moving car! :)
If my doctor looked like this I would say I feel way better for some reason I dont need your help anymore and then walk out.
If my doctor looked like that I be scared. No, doctor should look like that because they wouldn't look professional. I am possitve that I wouldn't be the only one who would say this either. I mean if your reading this opinion wouldn't you agree. You would be scared and you can tell that he would not look professional.
I think pearsings are gross. They are very unhealthy and cause infections easily. They also are bad because if your a doctor you have to be very clean and not sick to help others. If you ask me pearsings are a very bad choice. Especialy for doctors.
I would trust the doctor because you always trust someone with scars, piercings, and you always trust a man in a big white van. That is why I would trust him you should to.
If that was my doctor I would walk out the door and never look back.
What kind of professional doctor looks like that, it is a bad and scary example for children. I would never ever like to see a doctor like that again.
If a doctor came up to me like that I would say " Please take out your piercings." I am not against face piercings like if I saw someone on the street I would not be like eww take those out. But in a work place like a doctor or food its discusting. I mean imagaine going to a fast food resturant and seeing someone with piercings all over. I think its good ediquette to take out your piercings at work.
I would walk our the door. One, that's nothing I think of when I think of a doctor. Two, that's like disgusting. Three, it look's really cheesy. Another things is, I would take them off if I could have the chance, because there could be someone that can have a terrible judgement.
I would would trust that doctor because he is just being his normal self.
There is nothing really wrong with people that has piercings all over.
Maybe they just like the way it looks on them.
I don't really know. Depends on how old they are. Like an old man with those would be pretty cool. But then he'd have old man hands and that'd be weird. But if he was middle-aged that would be awesome 'cuz then he'd probably be metal and then you could, like, headbang to SlipKnot for the entirety of whatever you're getting. And then you could do it so hard you get whiplash and then have to stay in the hospital and listen to even more while slowly rocking in your bed! But if he/she was young I would walk out. And sit on the curb wondering how they even got into doctoring school. Then go back in and headbang to SlipKnot. But if they don't have SlipKnot I would walk back out. Just because. Seriously, though, how would a person like that keep a job as a doctor? It's like me being a lawyer, impossibru.
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If my doctor looked like that I would not be seeing that doctor anymore. I mean yeah sure people have the right to do whatever they want to do, it's just a doctor is supposed to be somebody you trust (a lot) and it's kind of hard to trust somebody that has a bunch of piercing all over their face. I'm not saying that it's wrong to get those piercings but think about it would you have a doctor that looked like they are supposed to do tattoos at a tattoo shop? Well I'm just going to say that if my doctor looked like that I would not have a doctor.
Okay, I just found out that my doctor has been replaced by one with 44 FACIAL PIERCINGS!!!!! What is up with that? I mean if I were in Dauntless that would be completely different, but i'm not! I mean this is America and why would someone let a person do that then become a doctor?! This is totally scary!!! This shouldn't be happening doctors are supposed to be all official and stuff!! Think of children who have them as a doctor they just see the back of their head then, hello! I'm your scary doctor coming at you with syringe so that you won't get sick. They'd make an adult scream. Then in the middle of surgery they might wake up and the first face they saw was covered with shiny hooks! They would scare the living daylights out of everyone! So no I do not think that doctors should have face piercings.
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Great job! I totally agree with you.
It looks a little bit unprofessional this kind of thing isn't allowed at a lot of business places but I encourage her for expressing herself and being who she really is. No one needs to judge if you don't believe in that kind of thing you can always ask for a different doctor. People all need to make a living that doesn't matter if you have piercings or not you still have to eat! People have their own ways of expressing themselves and no one should be the person to tell them they look wrong that's like saying eww you can't wear that shirt because I don't like the color green. Get out of my sight.
No spelling errors, but make sure that you put quotation marks around parts of your story that you are speaking, or that are supposed to be quoted. :) Other than that, you did a great job!
I would run from him because that would be freaking scary
I wouldn't do anything but I wouldn't like it! That is awful like why would you even do that it would be weird and hard to eat! It would hurt really bad to. I would tell her to take them off!!
I would go in the doctors offices and do what I had to do but I would go to another place just to be sure that that doctor was correct. The only reason I would do this is that most doctors advise you not to get piercings and so if the doctor had piercings, I wouldn't trust that person.
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If my doctor looked like that I would think she would put one in my skin. I would ask for a new doctor no matter if it is a guy or a girl just not someone with peircings.
If my doctor looked like that I would freak out. I strongly agree that if a doctor looked like that they should be fired. Doctors need to look professional. You never know you could scare a kid so bad she would never want to come back. You never know they could change into a doctor when you are a prisoner.
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If my doctor had piercings such as these, I would leave immediately. Doctors shouldn't have piercings, as they are intimidating and very creepy. Doctors are supposed to be trustworthy and professional, but piercings like those are an example of the opposite of that.
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If my doctor looked like that I would run screaming out the door and do a back flip and get injured.
If I went into the doctors office and saw that I'd be like no. If someone was a doctor and looked like that I don't think they would be a very good doctor. If you're a doctor you not have earrings in the way. A doctor should be a formal looking person that doesn't have earrings. I would leave immediately and I would tell the owner of the hospital to fire her because she is probably not good at her job.
If my doctor looked like that I would freak out. I would tell my dad to not let them touch me and leave. I would also run out of the building and hide. It would remind me of the punk rap we did. If my doctor looked like that I would definitely freak out.