I would not judge them. Looks are not everything about a person. She could be the smartest doctor but you won't go see her because of a few piercings. Do not judge people by the way they look but you can only judge their personality.
Good job. No errors!
Good Job !! No Errors !!
I wouldn't care... Never judge a book by their cover. As long as they have a degree.
Good work Halli
You need five sentences other wise you're ok .
You are suppose to have five sentences not two other wise you are good to go.
You did a good job. There are no errors.
I like it, no errors. Except for not having five sentences.
If my doctor looked like that I think I would freak out a little bit before she start talking to me or give me a shot I would ask her if she was a real doctor. If she said yes I would let her do what she needs to do. Hopefully she would have a degree to give me a check up or what I needed done.
You did a good job except that you were supposed to have five sentences.
How would I react if my doctor looked like this? Well first I would be standing there frozen in shock! I would NEVER go to my doctors again. I would run out of the room and never go to that doctor's again. I don't even see how or why people would get them they would hurt like heck. I think some people might think its ok but in my own opinion i think no. It doesn't even look good. I also think it would feel very uncomfortable.
You need to remember to capitalize the I before think no it should be"I think no".
I would never go to them again. I would not show up to that clinch again.
I would not show up at that clinic again.
You were supposed to have 5 sentences not 2.
You spelled clinic wrong.
If my doctor looked that I would ask my mom for a different doctor. I would be scared that they don't know what to do. I would not want her doing anything to me because, usually people who pierce their face are the ones who smoke or have tattoos sometimes. At the same time though, they wouldn't let her in if she didn't have a doctor degree. I would trust her if she talked professional and acted professional.
The only thing you need to change is, you need the word like after looked, but other than that good job.
Good work Addison! I didn´t find any errors.
Good Job, no errors!
If she were my doctor I would let her be. She's a doctor so she must have a degree. It would not bother me at all. I would just let her do her work. I usually don't go to the doctor anyway.
No errors, but maybe include a little more detail next time.
If my doctor looked like that,I would flip out and run out the door and scream, "I need a real doctor"!!I just need some Dr.Dre as my doctor.I would need a dog and my mommy in there with the check-up.I've really never liked pierced people like my sista.
There needs to be a space in between the , and I. Another space between the exclamation point and I. You don't have to have some after need. Sister not sista.
You need to have spaces after your punctuation.
I would say get AWAY FROM ME YOU FREAK GET A REAL DOCTOR. You need to straighten up your act. Doctors don't have piercings everywhere. I like doctors that look not like a freak.
Good job Spencer. You forgot to put parentheses around you words in all capitals. Try to write at least five sentences.
:| Um... why? Why did you wright that?
You spelled ¨wright" wrong, it´s write.
*"get AWAY FROM ME YOU FREAK" and get a real doctor.*
You are supposed to have 5 sentences. You need to have quotation marks as well.
If that person was my doctor I would not trust her. She might be nice and good at her job but I mean she should at least take them out for work. I mean what one of those fell out into someone during a surgery? I wouldn't let her poke and prod into me, degree or not. A doctor should be someone you are comfortable with and looks like a normal person.
If that person was my doctor i would say, you are not worthy to be a doctor you ugly freak go get a real doctor so i dont have to look at you anymore Ps. It depends on how nice he/she is.
Why didn't you capitalize I.
I would be kinda weirded out but then again if she is a doctor she proably went to college and got a degree so if she was nice i wouldnt care but if she was mean i would leave.
I would ask some people how she is for a doctor. Doctors have important jobs so they should look good on appearance. If the doctor is nice I would not mind, but if weird I would change hospitals or doctors. If the doctor touches you and the metal is close I would not like that and say stop. I would make sure my parents are there. If she says what's wrong I would say why do you have so many rings. I would not do that to hurt her feelings but to wonder why like some other patients. Having one ring isn't bad but she has so many!
I would be fine if they show me their degree from med school. I would be a little scared even if they have got a degree and a back up doctor. On the outside I would act cool but on the inside I would be scared so scared that I would lock the door from the outside and lock her in the room. That is how scared I would be. And that would hurt to have the gum ring by their teeth.
Lane you look as if you are in the clear.
Nice job Lane.
It looks good great job.
If she was a doctor, she must have graduated college. So she will still be like any other doctor, maybe even better. I wouldn't say anything mean to her, but I might be surprised when I see her. She would have a degree and might be a good doctor. I would just let her do my flu shot or whatever I'm getting at the hospital.
No errors, good job Jesus.
Great job jesus no errors love your story
If my doctor looked like that I wouldn't judge badly. I actually want a doctor that has all those piercings, I think they're cool. I don't like judging people by their appearance because when I end up getting to know them they are the best people on Earth. When people look at me I want to know what they think of me. When I got my lip pierced, I got judged a lot, so when it fell out I never put it back in because I was tired of all the people staring at me. Before I judge someone I put myself in their shoes and think of what it would be like to be them.
Good job no errors. :)
I would want a new doctor. She just doesn't look like she knows what she is doing. When you go to the doctor you don't see people with piercings on their face. If she didn't have the piercings I wouldn't care if she was my doctor.
I didn't find any spelling, capitalization, or punctuation errors. Nice job and I totally agree with you!
I probably wouldn't be that scared just by the looks. People could be nice and smart even with piercings on their face. If they knew what they were talking about and what they were saying. Also if they were super nice and not weird I would be fine. I wouldn't be scared.
Good job I didn't find any errors!
I agree completely, great job! :)
I wouldn't judge her, but wouldn't want her to be my doctor.
You need to say but I wouldn't.
You need to have five sentences.
honestly I would be a little freaked out. But im shore after a while I would be OK with it. I definite wouldn't make fun of her or be rude because of her pearsing,it was her dishion and she is probably really nice. just becouse someone dosent have brand new clothes dosent mean she or he isn't nice. You CANT juge a book by its cover and if you do hew gives you the permition to juge someone.
You need to use proper punctuation.
I would be kind of weird to see someone like.I would ask if she even is a doctor.She looks weird to be a doctor.
I should be it and there shouldn't be a period after like, but you probably just forgot a word after like.
You need to say it would be kind of weird.
You need five sentences.
I Would be scared because those rings look scary. I try not to judge but there so scary. I don't know if i would want this doctor. I would ask them to take them out.
thats soo scary.
No errors Kaleb good job!
There is a spelling error would should be lower cased
You need capitalization, and would doesn't need to be capitalized. Other than that good job.
You need to put I and put when instead of When.
You need proper capitals.
I would say that "if you were a real doctor . You probably wouldn't have so many peircings."And I would run out of the room.And yell that there is a fake doctor. And I would find a rweal doctor ,and call the police.
I did a good Job. Except for the mistake I hade made when I spelled real
had,and don't reply to your own.
Piercing is spelled wrong and so is real. Also sentences do not start with the word and. There should not be a period after doctor in the first sentence.
If my doctor looked like this I would be a little scared. I wouldn't ask for a new doctor right away though. Looks are not everything on a person. I would get to know the doctor and see if they were nice. If they were nice and were a good doctor then I probably wouldn't mind. On the other hand, if the doctor was not very friendly I would probably ask to get a different doctor.
Good job! I did not see any errors.
I would not care. I would still go to them because if I was in serious condition I would want to get better. You cant really judge people by their cover. Its about whats on the inside. To me nothing matters, they could be green and I would still go to them because I don't care about how people dress or how they look.
Cool beans! Awesome sauce, no mistakes! You did a good job!
Good job, but you forgot to add something in the word can't.
If I was in the waiting room and a doctor came out looking like that and they called my name I wouldn't come. I would sit there looking around like I've never meet the person. Then I will "go to the bathroom" and run. I would probably never come back there again and go to a different hospital for the rest of my life
All you need is a period at the and, otherwise your alright.
If my doctor looked liked that I would ask my mom for a different doctor. Most doctors act professional and they don't pierce there face everywhere. Maybe I am wrong and she is professional but I wouldn't risk having her do something that a doctor wouldn't do. I don't think you should judge people based on how they look but this one makes me think that shes not a professional doctor or will do something not good. When I see people with piercing like these these just walking around it kinda scares me.
To be completely honest I would judge them. I would freak out. Until I got to know the person. Once I found out who they are then I don't judge them. I know I need to change.
Good job TJ, no errors!
I would feel a little weirded out, but I would understand that that looks don't always link directly to the personality. I would let them do what they need to do. Unless it's shots. I HATE shots. But anyway, I think that they are perfectly fine. As they say, ¨don't judge a book by it's cover¨.
I hate shots too they are so scary when I get a shot I think of the scary thing were they go this won't hurt a bit not for me anyway.
I would be surprised that they would choose to do that as a doctor. If it's what she or he really intended then it might be kinda cool to hear the story why. I would probably keep seeing that doctor if he really was a good one. I guess it all depends if he or she was a good doctor and or if you liked him as your doctor.
Good job Aleyah I didn't find any mistakes great job!
No error!! Good job Aleyah.
I would not trust her because she would at least take them out before work.I would also ask around if she is a good doctor.If she was good at her job and nice I would go.But just by what she has done to her face.That was such a stupid move to do that so I wouldn't trust her.
If she was my doctor I don't think I would trust her. I would have to ask people about her. I would ask them how she is like and if she is very good with children or even probably how she became a doctor. Some people that look like her don't look very friendly or safe. I would think if I got to know her, if she isn't a bad person, I would think she would be very nice and safe. After that, I would think she would be my doctor.
I would freak out and walk out of the room. If that's how they take care of them selves like that I don't want them to take care of me like that. But then again it could have something to do with there belivies or something like that. I wouldn't have a problem with that. I would understand.
The only thing that you spelled wrong is believe otherwise good job.
I would be in a shock a little from how they looked, I would be a little nervous but I wouldn't judge how they looked. I would wonder why their face looked like that. The only way that they could become a doctor is if they went to college and if they did they are probably a nice person and good at their job. That person can choose to have their face look like that, its fine because its what they like and how they want to look like to make an impression on anyone.
No errors, good job Allie!
I wouldn't mind it that much although I think it's not the best choice in the world, But to all their own if she wanted to make that decision than she can but it probably hurt so if she wanted it that bad she can have it. Anyways who am I to judge someone on just their looks but if she had a bad personality than I would judge her but that's just human nature.
You capitalized "but" when it wasn't supposed to be capitalized.
I would sit and stair. Then i would turn to my mom and be like real doctor please. Then I would get in the car go to a real doctor. And on the way to a real doctor I would tell my mom real doctor not a witch doctor from now on ok. She would probably be like say only real doctors.
Fist capitalize your I and your name.
Honestly I would be kind of scared by the looks of it. I mean I wouldn't be to happy with what doctor I got, but she's got to be a doctor for a reason.I mean she could be really nice, she also could be super creepy. I denfinetly wouldn't make fun of her or be rude or anything I would just be kind of scared.
I wouldn't judge her for it. I think that it would show who she is, and I will try to get to know her more. She might turn out to be a really nice girl, but she likes shiny things, I don't know. I haven't gotten to know her yet, so I shouldn't judge just because she has lots of piercings. I don't like to judge people by they way they choose to dress or look. Only by their personality an the way they act.
Just change an to and when you say " Only by their personality and the way they act." Other than that, great job!
Honestly I do not know what I would do if my doctor looked like that. I mean I think I would kind of freak out because they have so many piercings. So I would hop up from that waiting room chair and say " Oops I think that I am in the wrong place". Like seriously, what would you do? What reaction would you have. Seriously! Your parents are always saying to tell the truth! In all honesty.
If my doctor looked like that I would not go to them. First of all because they have a piercing in their mouth and nose, but I would not trust them with my body if they were gonna treat it like they treated theirs. It would be so scary to see that checking if you have a ear infection of prescribing you medicine.
I wouldn't care what my doctor would look like.Besides you cant judge a book by its cover its not whats on the outside its whats inside that counts.
I wouldn't judge them. I wouldn't because even though the piercings are not appropriate, I would say to myself " They went to medical school just like all the other doctors, so they get the same respect." I don't like to judge people. I don't like to because I don't like the feeling of being judged. That's the reason I wouldn't judged them.
I would think I would be nervous and kinda scared! I would think they were probably in a gang. It would really depend on their attitude for the most part. If they acted crazy and didn't know what they were talking about I would probably not come back, but I would still be nice until by appointment was over. But in the other hand if they were kind and knew what they were talking about I wouldn't care, and I would come back. So really to me it would depend on their attitude.
I agree with you, good job I didn't find and mistakes.
I wouldn't judge her my her looks. That is just rude. I wouldn't care if she was my doctor as long as if she is good at her job. She wouldn't be bad to be your doctor even though she has piercings. It is rude to judge someone by their cover. Maybe they look like that on the outside but they are kind on the outside. I think she would be an amazing doctor. As long as she is good at her job I don't really care.
If my doctor looked like that, I wouldn't care. I don't normally judge people by how they look. Just because I doctor has piercings, doesn't mean that they don't know what they're doing. If I doctor looked like that, then it's their choice to do what they want to their body, but that doesn't mean that they don't know how to take care of one. I don't judge people and I hope that I never make it a habit.
Instead of " I " put my and instead " one " put someone. But other than that great job !!!!!!!:)
I would go with it the first time. The it depends on how good they are. If they are terrible then i would never go to them again. If they were good it depends on if they were nice. If they were not nice then I would never go back to them. If they were nice I might go back but probably not.
Capitalize I, other than that, nice job! :)
I have no idea what I would if that lady came in the room. Most likely I would ask if she was a real doctor. I'm guessing she would say she is. If she showed the slight posiblility
In the first sentence you wrote "what i would if" add say in the middle of would and if.
Sorry I didn't finish, here is the rest of it.
of being creepy I would sprint out of there. I would tell my parents to never take me there again.
I reflect to go to the doctor because I don't like their look. I don't mean to judge the doctor in a mean way but I just don't like their looks. I reflect to go to the doctor if they have all those rings I their mouth, nose, and lip. I really would reflect to go to the doctor if the have tattoo all over their body. Like their face, hands and arms. I do have to judge people in some times.
You did a really great job I couldn't find any errors!
I think that I would be judging, maybe I don't even think I'm judging. In the back of my mind my brain would be screaming if that is what my doctor looked like. I think that is is in human nature to judge. It may be only a split second of being judgmental. I think a lot of people would judge to. That is just my opinion, even if we don't realize it, I think we all judge.
I would be super scared if my doctor look like this! I would be a little bit less scared if I could see there degree. I would judge them tho I would be like to my mom are you sure shes a doctor she really scary looking! But if shes super nice I wouldn't care . I would just hope she was kind and just had a few piercings but i would still be a little scared!
Capitalize your I's, Make sure you say looked in the first sentence not look, make sure you're using the right there, their, or they're, and use the correct grammar.
I would be super scared if my doctor looked like this! I would be less scared if I saw her degree. I would judge them though. I would ask my mom "Are you sure she's a doctor? She's really scary looking!" If she was super nice I wouldn't care. I would just hope she was kind and just had a few piercings but I would still be a little scared.
If my doctor looked like this I wouldn't care. To me its not what they look like that counts. The thing that counts is if they know how to do it. You have to admit it would be pretty strange, but when it all works out it doesn't matter. I don't know about you but I don't judge people by how they look.
If my doctor looked like that I would probably run out of the hospital screaming and saying "That's not my doctor." I would also probably never go to that doctor again, but if I would have too I would probably feel very weird. I probably think that she is on drugs and that she says shes my doctor but she really isn't. I think piercings on your face other than on your nose are really kind of gross. To be honest I would probably not go.
I agree with you, great job! :)
I honestly think i would not care. I judge a teens with piercings but not someone respected. I don't judge people by how they look especially respected people. I don't care if the doctor was black,white,asian. Do you judge people by looks.
Nice, but you forgot to capitalize "I" in the first sentence.
I would not care that much. The reason is because I have seen a lot of people that look like that and they are very nice and responsible. When I was smaller my old babysitter looked like that a and she was very nice. She was really fun and mad me happy. Also you should never judge a book by it's cover.
Take out the "a" in between "that" and "and", and correct mad to made. Otherwise good job!
If my doctor looked like that I guess I'd judge them. I would complain every time I went to the doctor. People would probably judge them because they don't have the 'professional' look. After a few times of going to the doctor I'd get used to it. I mean I have a doctor and his mustache is ridiculously HUGE! I mean it was really hard to take him seriously when I first met him.
Awesome! You had no mistakes.
Great job I didn´t see any errors and I feel the same way
I wouldn't take the doctor seriously. Because that's so distracting and that would hurt so bad to get a piercing through there nose. If I knew them pretty well and they did everything right then I would take them seriously. Besides why would doctors even wear piercings, they might fall of while there doing surgery. You never know....
Make sure when you say there, their, or they're it's the right one. Also, off is spelled off. Good job Gracie!
If my doctor looked like that I wouldn't judge. I might be a little scared but if they know what their doing then it will be ok. because they can dress or do what ever with there body. It's not our choice what they want to do with their body. If someone told you something about how you look and you don't like it think about how you judge other people. Everyone is different nobody is exactly the same we maybe have lots of similarities but no one is the same. NEVER judge someone like that.
If my doctor looked like that I would tell my mom that we need to leave now. I would not like it because he or she could be creepy or nice but, still that is creepy. I would hope they are not in a gang or something. I hope that never happens to me.
Good job Kaden, no errors!
I agree, nice job! No errors
No errors here !Good job!
Some people say don´t judge a book by a cover but I think a doctor is supposed to look professional. I would want a doctor that would be dressed appropriate as a doctor should. If my doctor had five piercings in her face I wouldn´t say anything but I would watch what they are doing.
Hey, I pretty much think the same as you! I don't see any errors good job!
I agree Logan. I would be leery of having this person be my medical professional. This person maybe very qualified to be a medical doctor but that does not mean that I have to choose them to give me advice about my health. If someone else thinks that they look fine with five piercings in their face then that is fine. For me, I would want to get to know them more and probably get a second opinion.
I don't exactly know how I would feel. Um, but I might kind of be a bit on the "alert" side. I might feel a bit sketch about it but after a few minutes, I might not really care about it. Yeah, I'm not used to it, but after a while I most likely won't care about it. If they are at least are good at their job, I wouldn't care. But then again, the regulations would probably say that you can't wear piercings, so they MOST likely won't have anything like that. So we wouldn't see a doctor wearing face piercings.
I didn't find errors Lauren.
Good job Kaden you did everything correct!