I caught the football ran and I made a touchdown......
you didnt have any spelling errors
no spelling errors
Put a coma after football and ran.
I rolled a 4. No spelling errors found...
I rolled a one and found no capitalization errors but all the dot are not a punctaution.
I was running I did a triple back flip over the line. Then I did a 360 double front flip then i jumped over 7 Aurora players! BTW my name is Eric Buller. Then i almost got tackled so i dived for the touchdown going to the playoffs!!
I meant dove
dove not dived not dived
You forgot to capitalize your "I's"
You did not have any errors
you forgot to capitilize th i in Is
You forgot to captlize and put a period.
And here comes #4 from Aurora he goes, and boom he totally trips himself up and Eric Buller goes to the endzone for an 49 yard touchdown reception, and the crowd goes crazy and the cannon goes of and every get ready for the kickoff.If it stays like this the York Dukes will obviously go to the playoffs. Boom!
You should fix your compound sentence.
It is supposed to put a 49 yard touchdown instead of an.
No errors from the rool 1
Hello I'm here at the Aurora vs York at home. The tension is in the air the pep squads are in a cheer battle. Oh wait number 24 is almost to the end zone and he gets tackled by number 4 on Aurora Team. Wait wait he made it and the crowd goes wild York Dukes are going to the playoffs. Back to you rita.
Pep Squad should be capitilized. Rita should be capilized.
"Number 24 is going for the touchdown!" "It seems like the smelly Aurora team can't seem to tackle." The score is 26-0. Let's go York dukes!!!!!
I got comma's. You have no corrections.
No punctuation of capitalization erroz good jobz.
Signing on is Jeff buckinstire "hi there folks its a lovely could night at York football field it's York vs Aurora number 34 is half way down the field and he's running he's running oh he's down at the 55 yard line takein down by number 4 right in the rear bet he liked the sight signing off Jeff buckinstire."
For some reason it change cold to could sorry about that.
It was opening kickoff at York vs. Aurora. The kick went all the way to the back off the end zone. As York's returner carried the ball, he started to spin and juke around the defense. He made it all the way to the 50 yard line, until one of Aurora's biggest players tried to tackle our ball carrier. When the defender started to run towards him, he hurdled the player! York ran the ball in to the end zone for the first points of the night. They had a feeling they were going to win the game.
Rolled a 2.
No comma errors.
Rolled a 4, did't see any spelling errors.
It's harder than it looks when your fighting for a burrito. Especially when you JUST got pasted the first line. I can see my friend open for a pass and my other friend being blocked. So naturally I threw it to my friend who is being blocked. Yeah the kinda got the ball and went for a touch down. I charged after the guy who blocked my friend and intercepted my burrito. I mean ball. And as I charged I yelled "TACOS!" Then I could hear my friend yelling "Dude we're fighting for a burrito not a taco!" I stopped where I was. "Well then i'm out . Peace!" And I walked off the field.
I meant "Yeah they kinda got the ball and went for a touchdown."
rolled 3 Perfect
here comes numbner 24 in the end zone BANG! number 4 smackes him in and he made the touch down!!!!!!
The Dukes were celebrating all night after the incredible game against Aurora.
The stands were completely full with parents, teachers, and students as they were cheering for their team last night while the Dukes were battling in a close game. You could hear music all around you. Cheers were crazily chanted in the stands. The cannon was heard many times as well. The final score was 35-34 for the Dukes.
I rolled a two and did not find any errors. ~GOOD JOB~
no errors rolled a six
I rolled a one and didn't find anything wrong! Good job!
I rolled a two and didn"t find any errors.
Here comes Eric Buller with the ball, but Aurora is catching up. Eric jumps over the tackler right before he was about to be tackled, he kept sprinting dogging here and there almost to the in-zone but then tripped in a hole and landed on the one yard line. Its fourth down the crowd is cheering its the fourth quarter and the games is tied they have to got for it they only have 1:oo on the clock. They give the ball to buller again but this time he made it, the dukes are going to the playoffs WHAP!!!!
rolled a four,dogging to dodging
On Friday night, one of the biggest rivalries of the year, the Aurora Huskies, and the York Dukes play each other in football. On the kickoff, Jackson Coffin and JJ Schultz will be returning the ball and heading for the end zone. The York Dukes will hopefully come home with the "W" and we will be headed to the Playoffs. There is another reason that we can come back with the victory, Damon Kaliff will hopefully have a great game with five touchdowns either passing or running the ball. We Are... York Dukes!!! We Are... Here To Stay!!!
YORK- Yesterday was a very important game for the York Dukes. They played Aurora for a spot in the playoffs. As you can see in the picture above, number four from the opposing team took a nap in the soft grass. Players from all over the field rush over to him in fear that he had passed out. The concern was quickly demolished when we learned that he fell asleep from the lack of sleep. Number twenty-five from the Dukes took advantage of this and ran forward to get a touchdown. The crowd erupted from the excitement of this play. The York Duke football team has once again defeated Aurora.
I rolled a 2 and there were no comma errors.
The score is 3 - 6 Dukes against Aurora. It's the most important game of the season. The is crowd roaring with 10 seconds left the Dukes make the touchdown. The Dukes win!
I rolled a 4 and uhm you have no spelling errors.....
Put a comma between 6 and dukes
Put a comma between left and the
Here you see Eric Buller Breaking a tackle, I'm gonna take you through this play from the start. The QB Breaks the huddle the line man run up to the line of scrimmage and get set. The QB goes under center takes the snap its a 26 sweep Buller hits the outside! He jukes a tackler and breaks the tackle that you see right now. He runs 30 more yards for the game winning touchdown! Dukes win! The cannon sounds and the Aurora players can believe it..... The student section starts singing " nananana hey hey hey hey good bye" At the Aurora players. Its a great night to be a duke!
Great job, no errors!
Twenty,ten,touchdown!! As I get to the ten I feel this helmet hitting my legs,I get this adrenaline rush and I sprint to the end zone. I thought I was on the ground. I am hearing this roar coming from the stands and a huge cannon goes off. I had to ask the couch what happened. I can not believe this but In intercepted it and ran from the fifty lard line and there I was on my knees then getting up for a little victory dance. I can't even believe that I had no clue what was going on because it was the end of the fourth quarter and we were down six points. We won, I scored the winning touchdown!!!!
My name is Eric Buller And I am here playing football and this is what happend. So I was running with the ball and this Aroua player #4 to be exact was running and almost tackled me but he missed and all I can here is him groaning on the ground because he didn't get me! I wish i could have some water but all I taste is the sweat running down my face. Yuck!! I got the touchdown!! We WON!!
I rolled a 1 and you need to put a period because you have a run on sentence.Your i needs to be capital. Other then that it is good.
This is Eugene Richard reporting at the york vs. aurora. It is a beautiful Friday night about 70 degrees outside clear skies. Kickoff in 3 minutes dukes will receive the ball. Kickoff they run it he is at the 90 yard line and the tackle is missed by aurora touchdown york dukes. The york dukes get the lead 7-0. In the first quarter. The dukes come to win the game 21-7. Another win for the dukes. The dukes are now 5-2.
I rolled a one (Capitalization and punctuation)
-york to York (3)
-aurora to Aurora (2)
-dukes to Dukes (6)
Were in the 2nd half of the game. It's 14-6 the York Dukes are in a there huddle and "BREAK" there out of the huddle and lining up. "GO" the QB drops back for a pass and there's someone wide open he chucks it down field and it's up in the air it's, it's, it's CAUGHT and he breaks a tackle and another and another and he's at the 30, 20, 10 and he's in it for the touchdown! Everybody is yelling and screaming! But the game isn't over yet. The kicker is back for the point coversion and it's good!
I rolled a 2
Eric Buller had 100 yard kick return for a touchdown. The oppenets kicker can pooch the ball into the endzone!! Coach Snodgrass put Eric back there to return it all the way. There kicker was setting up and kicked it over everybodys head but mine and when I got the ball I was gone I spun out all 11 guys, And when I scored everybody was extatic!!
"We are here today to see #34 of the York Dukes who just crossed the first line in all of history how do you feel" the reporter said in excitement. " I feel great though I Don't get whats so special about it" said #34 in confusion. It isn't this is a........ trolololololo ha ha you fell for it this going on YouTube!
Its 4th and 15 at there own 5 yard line. The clock is winding down with 10 seconds left in the game. York is down by six and there best quarterback is out with a ankle injury, the suspense is high at the York football field. one last play would end it all. The back up QB lines up on the line.The QB hikes the ball and presser is on right away, and just like that hes scrambling out of the pocket. one last look at 24 and he fires. The ball is flying it seems like forever. and its CAUGHT at the 50 and hes struggling to stay up but he breaks the tackle and he is gone for the touchdown!
Rolled a 2 noyhing...
Pop the aurora linebacker slammed me into the touch down zone . It was a great play .the QB Michel poul through a 43 yard pass to me it was fourth down .final seconds of the game I am running and running
juking the defense in tell out of nowhere the linebacker poped me into the touch down that won the finals
You forgot the period.
Nice commas no errors there
rolled a 1 you should of capitalize seconded sentence and the third and you need a period. You also have to space after the fist sentence period.
Its the last game of the season. I catch the ball, run down the field. Almost there, almost there. Out of the corner of my eye I see number 4 heading right toward me. He slightly misses me. I keep running. The cheering gets louder as I get closer to the touch down. Then 'boom!' We won the game!
I rolled a 1 and I did not find any errors.
I rolled a 2. I didn't find any errors.
Well This is the York Dukes football game. I assume the Dukes are gonna win. Go York Dukes. Its gonna be a big KABOOMER. what do you think? They are so gonna WIN!!
I am getting chased by this dude help me. JK I finna get this touch down!! #cathmeifyoucan
I am getting chased by this dude help me! JK I'm going to get this touchdown! #CatchMeIfYouCan
put more effort into to it shrqushia. And DONT DO THAT JIMMY NO DIMMY DONT DO THAT
The dukes seem to be a few yards away from a touchdown. He's holding on that ball like its his life. He's only 4 yards away from a touchdown. There was an attempt tackle that failed. That kid took a bunt to the head like a horse kicking a child. He's going,going, and hes gone!
The score is 24 - 24 Dukes against Aurora. It's the first game of the season. The is crowd roaring with 1 minute left the Dukes make the touchdown. The Dukes win!
I caught the ball and i ran for the touchdown and my name Eric booth.When i caught the ball two of the Aurora and juked both of them and made a touchdown.
i Meant two of the players of Aurora came behind and trying to tackle me but i juked them
I can hear the crowd cheering as i'm running down the field to make the touchdown. Out of the corner of my eye I can see #4 coming up to tackle me. He grabs my side and then he slips. I make the touchdown and we win the game!
I rolled a 2. There were no errors!
Wow i'm trying to tackle this really smelly guy. I can't he smells like peanut butter. Ew I just licked his arm pit. It actully did taste pretty good. I might have to taste a little bit more.
LOL WHAT!?!?!?! That's gross and funny!
no mistakes and i just thourgh up in my mouth
My name is Eric Buller. I play for the York Dukes. In this pic I got a hand off strait down the hole. I blew through the line and I was off then a Aroura Huskies player come out of know were and he tried to tackling me and I juked his little tough butt out and broke his ankels and I did a front flip into the endzone and the crowd went wild.
It is 2nd half of the game. The York Dukes are winning against Aroura, a guy from the York Dukes catches the ball and scores a touchdown.
There are no mistakes! :)
There is only 30 seconds left in the 4th quarter. The predictors before the game are going crazy! Most people thought that the Huskies would win, because they have a better record for the year. The high school and middle school Dukes are going crazy in the crowd! Our best receiver has just caught the ball, and we are down by 3 points. An Aurora player is coming for him and goes for the tackle, but the smart football player is only a yard away from the touchdown line. He dives for the hard, cold, wet ground in the in-zone. He gets the touchdown! The crowd goes crazy!! On this cold October night, the Dukes are going to the playoffs!
I rolled a six you don't have any simple sentences.
No errors, great job!
We are on the first down line. My team and I are ready to run. I am going to get a pass. My quarterback says hut. I run to the 30 yard line, turn my head and see the ball flying toward my stomach. I catch it and run. There is a guy right literally on my tail. He could be smelling my butt. There is no way he is tackling me. I pull off of him and run. I run until I see the ref throw his hands in the air, indicating that I just ran into the enzone. I hear the screaming of the frantically cheering crowd. I look at our sideline. Coach Snodgrass is jumping up and down saying something. I look at Aurora's sideline their coach shaking his head in disapproval. I can't help but start to feel bad for the dude that missed me.
I just caught a pass. I am running for a touchdown! Now this guy who smells terrible because of his sweat is running at me! I yell, "get out of my way, boy!" I truck him and yell back at him, "I move with easy with my super speed!" as I run for the touchdown. The crowd sounds like thunder.
easy does not make sense.
other wise it is good
I just caught this pass and now all I can hear is little girls cheering. When suddenly a sweaty guy that smelled of rotten eggs which made me want to run faster and my only thoughts were run fast, keep a hold of the ball. I can almost taste a touchdown. 10 yards out. Then 5, touchdown! The crowd roared I was very proud of myself.
I just got a pick and I was running, running all the way for a touch down and the mini cheerleaders were cheering me on I was sprinting for a touchdown but the sweatiest smelling person in the world we all passed out in was so smelling. They pulled me down at the 2 yard line the fans were going crazy and throwing popcorn and screaming the heads of it 107 degrees hot it is burning.
II catched the ball and ran to the in zone to make a touchdown but the number 4 tried to tackle but he mised and he mised and i made a touchdown.
Last game of the season, we are going good in this season. We are exited about the last game and last quarter. QBs play that he made, its a double reverse. I get the ball and we all start running after the play. We are at the 20 yard line. I get the ball and start running 15, 10, 5,jump and its a TD for the York Dukes. We won by 30 points and they weren't happy. After the game we went to pizza hut and I could smell the pizza running through the air and the bread sticks with light cheese.
I was so nervous when the game started then they kicked off and I heard the crowd scream when he kicked it. Then I caught it and ran I started juking like crazy nobody could touch me. I did a front flip over the Aurora guy and it smelled like he pooped his pants. That's nasty. Some guy tried to tackle me and I said no Jimmy don't do that and broke the tackle and scored a touchdown. The crowd screamed CREEP ON THE LOUSE. That was the best day of my life.
My perspective is a player.
Hey I'm a player for the York Dukes. I'm in the game right now and I'm sweating like a pig. Man football is hard and tiring . All the fans out on the bleachers make my spirit rise. I'm going to ask for a time out because I feel like I'm going to throw up or go unconscious. I'm in the bench right now and then I passout I can hear the crowd cheering so loud that it sounds like a lion's roar.
Dude just caught the ball and no time to talk. This kid is coming up behind me like a cheetah and he's about to catch up. He smells like a donkey and He looks like a gorilla about to pound me into the ground. Am about to make it in the in zone when WHAM he slams right in to me. My eyes were closed but I could here the crowd like a lions roar. I opened my eyes, and saw that I was in the in-zone we had just won the game.
The York Dukes play against the Aurora Huskies the crowed was like a lion roaring and the York Dukes got the winning touch down.
I rolled a 2, after Huskies there should be a comma, otherwise you did a good job.
Last night the York Dukes played against Aurora. That is literally all i know about this game. I cant come up with anything else to say so...GO DUKES!!!!!!!!!
You need to capitalize I in your sentence and put more thought into it.
We were against the Aurora Huskies,the score was 33-34,you could see a wave of peeps cheering and chanting(some people peed there pants from all the ecxitement) and you could feel the soft,smooth breeze and taste the juicy,salty hot dog.It was as loud as a One Direction concert.But it went even louder when the tackle happened.Colby Robinson was the quarter back,we were all ready,he said the chant"Ten Hut!"and he throw the ball to a tall,young,tuff man named Billy Tree who was fast as The Flash,he caught the ball and ran the run,but someone was on his tale,the guy pounced on him but he still ran and amde that touch down,
No spelling or grammar errors
Number 24 intercepts the pass form the Aurora. He is running past the 10 yard line, now the 5. Touchdown!!!!! York dukes score on an interception!
Booooooom, the cannon goes off. The cannon is my favorite part because, I love seeing people jump when it goes off and scares them. As I take my seat in my kitchen the radio turns to commercial. As the radio comes back on I can here the crowd still roaring and cheering from the score. The announcer says the score is 21 to 14 and the York Dukes are winning!!!!! Yaaaaahhhhhh!!!!!!!!
It's the last quarter with 5 seconds left and the dukes make the wining tuchdown!yaaaaaaaay!!!!!!!!
well i was running out by the side line for a pass and well i received the ball and i was almost tackled and took-en down to the ground.I actually passed him and ran all the way.GO DUKES.!!!!!!!!!
all the I's are supposed to be capitalized.
OK there is 1 second to go in the game we are down bye 5 so if we score we win. So we put Lindin Kailf in at qb JJ Shulcz is lined up to the right, Linden takes the snap JJ is running down the feild Linden chucks it down feild to JJ in the touchdown JJ jumps up and grabs it for the win!! The crowd is going crazy! BOOM the cannon went of. Everybody ran out on the feild! It looked like a big state fair!
There were no spelling errorssss.
It's a dark gloomy night and the dukes are down 6 to 0 with :43 left on the game clock. Whoever wins this game goes to the playoffs. The dukes stop the huskies and get the ball back. They line up in a pass protection the quarterback drops back he launches one deep and the receiver catches it but he isn't quite into the endzone so he runs he hurdles a defensive player and trucks another. He dives into the endzone touchdown dukes. The cannon blasts and the crowd goes wild the dukes made it to the playoffs!
It was the last minute of the game and this touchdown was the tie braker. It was 21-21 and this touch down meant the game. Sweat was pouring down #24 was running it, and BAM! The huskies ram into #24 but he kept on trucking and finnaly he made it. Everyone could here the cannons blasting and the dukes one the game at the last second. You could here everyone screaming any cheering blocking everything out. Finally after four grueling quarters the dukes won.
Rolled a four nothing spelled wrong. Great job!
nothing spelled wrong
4 you have nothing spelled wrong. XD Nice
The crowd is cheering like mad the cheer leaders are doing there cheer for the Dukes. The number 24 is trying to make a touchdown. He is draging on the the Auron Husky. The bench really cold and it is very loud. But the loudest at the football game is the cannon. That will me some day. GO YORK DUKES!
No errors, but you forgot the "be" in the second to last sentance
It is in the middle of the game and we where down 1 it was first down down.Bob was running into the field but no one was stopping him then it hit me he was running to the other side. The Dukes had to take him down but it was too late now the Dukes lost the world game. THE END!!???
I rolled a 1 and there was nothing
In this picture there is number 34 running, the Aurora player are trying to tackle him.It looks like it was like a little later in the night .It also looks like they are freezing.
YORK - The York Dukes won last night's game against the Aurora Huskies with twenty seconds left. #24 (Eric Buller) from the Dukes caught the ball at the thirty yard line and sprinted to the end zone. #4 from the Huskies comes in for a tackle at the twenty yard line, but Buller is a split second faster. With ten seconds left Buller sprints with all the energy he has left. Three, two, TOUCHDOWN!! Fans go wild with crazed excitement, the cannon blasts in the distance, and the players yell excitedly. The final score was 28-23. Go Dukes!
BTW NEHOW RULES!!!!!!!
I was news reporter telling a story about football.The wind was blowing people where covering them self with a blanket.The game was tide 16 to 16.The dukes where on second down.So when it was turn over the .............
Rolled a 4.
No spelling errors, but many others...
the bleachers are likes blocks of ice . And the cannon is so loud it made my ears pop .and number 34 is going for a touchdown and it is good everyone is yelling and cheering GO DUKES!!! and the canon goes off we have our first touchdown .At the end of the game the score is 19 to 11 and the York dukes will the game !!!!...
It was on this cold Autumn night as we were going up against the legendary York Dukes that I, number 4 for the Aurora Huskies, failed to tackle the player that scored the winning touchdown for the Dukes. It was tragic! I tried so hard to grab him, To do anything that might take him down, but I fell in a lunge to get him. He was just too fast! I watched my hope of winning fade as he slipped through my grip. With 28 seconds left on the clock I heard that horrible sound of the cannon that only goes off when the Dukes score. It was over! We lost and it was all my fault!
No spelling errors, Aislinn.
The crowd was still roaring by the time we got into the locker room. The York Dukes (us) won by 14 points. I still can't believe that we won. I think that we played a good game. We were all still hyped from the game. The crowd was starting to leave. I still think that I might've made that touchdown, before I got tackled. Now the crowd is all gone. Now we're flooding out of the locker room. We played a good game.
No errors. Good job Lauren!
Looks great, Good job!!!!!!!
number 24 of the york dukes is runing and numder 4 of arora is trying to takele 24 but he ant going down but when i was on the blechers I felt like i was on a bloke of ice but when the canen went off and my ears were ringing.
Hi! That's my older brother over there! You know, the one with the blue jersey who plays for the amazing York Dukes!! BOOM! That was the cannon. When ever we have a home game, and we make a touch down, the cannon goes off. It's really loud, it makes you ears ring! I don't like going to the games, I mean I do, but sometimes it's a little too cold for my liking. The bleachers are as cold as ice, and my ears turn as red as a turnip if I don't wear a hat (I usually forget). I do like going to the games for more than to watch the game though. The almighty York Dukes have a student section that is, like, the best ever. I'm usually the one who brings the blankets, and my friends bring the hot chocolate. Most of the time it's mostly girls in the student section all the middle school boys go and play football in the lushish green out field of the base ball field. Oh! Look at that. It's the end of the 4th quarter. Well i'll catch you next game!
As I am running down the field I see the scores, It's 24 to 25. I wanted to win so much but all my energy is drained out of me, I pushed really hard I can now feel the breeze on my face and the sweat dripping off my face. I ran to the other side for a pass but I can feel them closing up on me but all of a sudden I see the ball flying towards as I spread my arms and I cached the ball someone was trying to tackle me but I wasn't going to let them I then noticed that I am now standing in the touched down zone! I made it! The time was also over so we won!
I'm a twelve year-old girl who has no understanding of football. I figured I'd marry a guy who likes football, so I'm going to learn. I went to a York v.s. Aurora game. When I got to the game I was so confused. I didn't understand a thing. I didn't want to look stupid, so I clapped when the people next to me did. I was almost turned deaf it was so loud. I was practically sitting on an ice cube. I decided to leave during the second quarter. This picture is the last thing I saw. I defiantly will leave the football to, well anyone who understands it. It's not every day you go to a football game. If your like me bring some friends, talk the whole time, and eat a lot of popcorn.
Half the time I felt deaf.
I don't really know much about football, but I may end up marrying a guy who likes football so I'll have to at least learn a little something. So all i know is it looks like one of the Aurora players is about to hug one of the Duke's legs!! To be a football player you have to KNOW about football. I guess i have been to a football game before but only because my friends wanted to go,but all i know is that there is loud shouting, the cannon makes my ears ring after it goes off, there are smells of grass and popcorn, and last, the bleachers are extremely cold!!!! Well, to sum it up i guess it's a pretty good sport i just know volleyball way more than football for sure!
You should capitalize your i's,
Yeah you just need to capitalize the i's
I'm just going to correct my one and I agree with the "I's"
Hi my names Ted i'm a 12 year old that was dragged down to this god forsaking place by my friends. Now your asking "Where were you taking?", "Who took you there?", "What's so bad about this place?".Well I was taking down to the York Duke's football stadium, by my friend Colton and my brother Quin to watch the football game.
Now for me football just seems like a bunch of sweating boys running tackling each to grab a ball and run to one side of the field.
Oh and by the way it's almost midnight it's freezing cold and every time someone scores a touchdown my eardrums practically bleed out. I don't understand what's so good about this game. Heres what i'm seeing, York has the ball runs to the side of the Huskies... tackled five minutes later Arua has the ball runs to the side of the Dukes... tackled. I mean who would willing pay to see children get their bones crushed to ashes. This is complete chaos a kid just got tackled hard enough they called an ambulance. I'm just going to go home before the game ends, the only reason I came her is because they have candy at the consetion stand. Bye.
Hi my name is Will,number 24,let me tell you about the time I broke a rib. Here is the story, it was the fourth quarter with two minets left,sweat was pouring down my hot face and the crowed cheering so loud it was ear deafining and I had the ball. Out of the blue number four tackled me and he slammed in to me and snapped one of my ribs. The pain was so bad I couldn't move for a week. Although my team got him back I'll never get back at him but that's life. When I got back on the field it just wasn't the same. Next game I just broke one of his ribs so joke's on him.
the score is 24-6 and we were losing badly and I didn't care who won because I was in the concession stand serving popcorn to a six year old.and all because I thought that I would get paid for it but no I signed up for volunteer work...well there goes my Thursday night...if there's humor in this then I don't think it's funny
#24 going going oh!! almost there he went down at the half yard line.
He was taken down by #4 for the huskies he had an amazing run he went 36 yards for a first down and was just shy of the end zone final score 35-34 DUKES!!!!
almost needs to be capitalized.
Otherwise awesome job.
This here is one of your many York Duke football player's. He is getting ready to score the winning score for the game. He is fitting off the number 4 defense men of the other team. He is poring sweat off of his face, he has been running the ball all night. The smell is probably horrific, like wet dog and a little boy. When we have previously scored 6 times. The cannon has gone off many times when our York Dukes score. I'm eating a pizza a cheese pizza from Valentino's pizza. All of the York Duke fans are screaming there head's off cheering on the York Duke number 34 to keep going to get to the inn zone. There are 12 seconds left on the clock. We are down bye 2 and we need to win to get in to the play-offs. The texture of the grass is slopping wet because it has rained a lot over the past night......
You needed to put a comma like this, "I'm eating a pizza , a cheese pizza, from Valentino's pizza." You have spelling errors too, inn zone - end zone. there- their . bye-by
The football game is here! Im up at the top in the student section and I can see all the fans pouring in for the game Aurora and York. Were all sititng down scouting out all the other peoples football playesr!! Its starting to get loud right when the clock hits 30 secs. Were all screaming a boooshh the kick is off and looks like we have great field postitioning.
As I'm running down the field at the 40 point mark, the other players are helping me by blocking Aurora Huskies so they can't get in my way. I look over and I see that one of my players accidently falls and letting the Aurora player run towards my way. I run as fast I can before he can catch me. He jumps and missing my body so that I can't fall and instead grabs my leg. I feel like I'm falling and rip my foot out of his hands and regain focus towards the field goal. I'm only a few yards away and I run into the goal and I realize that we won! 31-19. Everyone was cheering and roaring and It was the most amazing game all year.
Endzone I mean.
No spelling errors.
Yes!!!!! The Dukes will win!!!! The Aurora Huskies are going down!!! I'm going to sit right at the top where all the middle school kids sit. This might be cold I don't mind, this will be an awesome game.
I am a middle school boy watching the game. The dukes are losing twenty one to fourteen and are ten yards away from the endzone with only seconds left to score. So on the last second they snap the ball and they pitch the ball to Evan Neville. Evan gets the ball and runs for the endzone as fast as he can. But in his path is an Aurora husky waiting to tackle him. So Evan using a spin move on the husky and wins the game.
This game is tied 21 to 21 and if the Dukes can get this touchdown in 5 second then they will win the game. Okay the play is starting, it is thrown and number 134. It is caught and the Dukes win the games!
It's caught and the Dukes win the game* Not Games :D
thrown and=thrown to of thrown at.
Those are the only errors that I saw.
teammate:I caught the football and ran down the field with the football and I looked back and the enemy was on my tail and I jumped for it and ....I opened my eyes and they say "we won!"I couldn't believe it.
So my name is Elizabeth and i'm watching this "Football Game" I have no idea what i'm watching. I'm only here because my brother's playing. He is the "Bench Warmer" also I have no idea what that is. I wish I knew but I don't because 1.I'm a fashion freak, and 2.I'm a total nerd. So I went to go get some chips when I saw a panda... wait it wasn't no ordinary panda it was a EBOLA FILLED PANDA AKA EBANDA. I was freaked bad idea to run away he licked my arm then said... YOU HAVE EBOLA. Then I to was a EBANDA. Then I turned everyone into a EBANDA.
don't you know that ebola is going on right now and dying.
I was watching the last game of season, we are currently 5-0 and have the best winning streak in the history of our school. The ears were buzzing from the loud screams, not normal screams, but boat horn loud screams. I was as excited as a dog getting there bone, and I cheered as we made the winning touchdown with only 2 seconds left on the clock. I was one of the only people able to see this incredible event... from my television screen.
Okay... my friend, Serenity wanted me to come to this game with her to hang out, we both hate football. So we were just talking and occasionally, people on our side of the field would stand and scream, "GO GO GO!!!" So... yeah. That was entertaining. A lot of people, taller than me were piled around us, and since we were packed, I couldn't see any faces. Meaning I didn't really know anyone there. That was oh, so very fun!! Ugh. It was boring. And all I could hear was screaming and the occasional crunching of pop corn from the guy behind me. How I longed for some food! Just kidding... I'm not writing in my diary while I sit in my cottage in England like the girls in every bad book ever! So... I was starving, and I had no money to buy any food. And, to make matters worse, (Again, just kidding) even Serenity had food! And she wouldn't share! So, I was hungry, and it was boiling hot outside, and everyone was all sweaty, so all I could smell was sweat! Ugh. Worst. Experience. Ever.
When I go to a York Duke football game , it is so fun. The fans are as loud as thunder. Whenever we score a touchdown the cannon rings my ears. The players are so exciting to watch, because some of them are really good and try really hard. I love eating food and candy from the snack stand, because it taste and smells so good....
Waffles waffles waffles waffles.
I was walking the stadium my friends are already there in the usual spot. They were about to kick off everyone was yelling OHHHHH! Then BOOM the kicker kicked it to about the 30 yard mark and bounce around. The other team was frantic and the runner was scramling to get it. Until he finally got and BOOM he got trucked by number 57 on our team.Then he fumbled it and we returned it to the inzone...
Rolled a 3.
The grammar made this hard.
I it was a cold night the cold medal bleachers made it even worse. We where down by one touchdown we had the ball. The QB snappded the ball he handed the ball to the running back ,and he ran the ball all the way to the touchdown.
So, last Friday I went to the Dukes football game and as usual, I could feel the bleachers vibrate. It was fourth quarter, and my ears have been ringing since the first York Duke touchdown and we were tied 14, 14. Jorre Luther was kicking the field goal, I could feel the tension in my bones getting bigger, and then he made it. We won the game 15, 14.
rolled a 1
didn't see anything wrong
good job but field goals are worth 3, and extra points are worth one point
I know we just scored.
No comma errors
Forewarning: Jake would actually talk like this to a crowd.
So, today was Fergus Republic Royal football day. No, not that wimpy-shrimpy-soccer! MANS FOOTBALL! No, not rugby. That's too manly and a different,but similar, sport. On to the game. It's pretty late and I can't see a thing. Then they turned the lights on. Wait... this ain't football. This is a dog-fighting ring. Why am I in here? Meh. Convenient that this is right next to the football stadium. Weird how no one finds this. I mean, it even smells illegal. The police really should've known of this a long time ago. Well, I'm not surprised. The FR police force is usually drunk off of doughnuts. Well in the stadium I am! Let's see what happens: The man counts. He throws the ball. Guy catches ball and runs. Guy get tackled. Repeat. Wow. This is a lot more boring then I thought. Wait... the guy not wearing blue and gold is about to catch it! AND A GUY ACTUALLY WEARING BLUE AND GOLD CATCHES IT! AND HE RIPS THAT GUY WEARING REDS HEAD OFF! WAIT NO, THAT'S THE BALL! WOW, I SHOULD PUT ON MY GLASSES! After that they went back to that drab cycle. The end.
I rolled a 2.no errors and please tell me what illegal smells like
MAYBE NOT HAVE SO MUCH CAPITALS.... I'm just kidding it's just fine. So don't change ANYTHING AT ALL.
I rolled a two no errors.
I'm a reporter for this game and the york dukes are winning but the other team is catching up to the dukes really fast. I'm a fan of the dukes and I hope that the win but I now that they are going to win. But there is not a single person in the stand that is cheering on the dukes so I don't think that they have hope in them self.
Rolled a one
York, Dukes, before but should be a comma not a period
Good job no errors!
The football games is the best time of year especily this one games. You may think it is just a game but it is the most important game of the season. If we win we go to the play offs if we don't we our season is over and that means the seinors are going to college football if they get a scolership or a walk on
i was not done
Rolled a 4 no errors good job!!!
The entire crowd holds their breath as we watch our star quarterback run in for a touchdown. We have been down by five the entire game. He's two yards now one. Suddenly a red player clashes into our blue and he is down.
The whole crowd screams in protest and the game is over. My sister gasps running down the bleachers towards her injured boyfriend the quarterback. I sigh. This is not how it was supposed to end.
I found no spelling errors, although I think that there should be comma after "boyfriend." Otherwise I thought that is was great. (Except that we lost.)
Elizebith died the end.
The crowd all around me is going wild, I hear the boom of a canon, and score is now York 14 - Aurora 14. This is the biggest game of the year, if we win the team goes to playoffs. Aurora now has the ball, and our defense isn't so great. Honestly I think the entire crowd's got a bad feeling about this. The Aurora quarterback receives the ball and heads down the field, it doesn't look good.....until our guy tackles him. The whole crowd cheers with joy. Go Dukes! Whoa! O ya! We really do feel bad for the other guy, he's limping of the field like a dog with only three legs. I felt bad.
I rolled a 5 today.
He catches the ball and makes a run for it and gets tackled by the number 4 on the other team