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Bailey Robinson
2/18/2015 11:18:18 pm
Hello I am Bailey. I am a fashion police officer. I mainly specialize in unmatching colors, pants that have holes in them, and gaudy clothes. Woah, woah, woah, we have got a code three in the school hallway!This girl is wearing a blue shirt, black pants, and green and red shoes. Not okay. "What do you have to say about your choice of outfit, young girl?" "I would say I'm starting a new trend. You should try it instead of wearing those bags that you call stylish. I will take that." She says taking my badge. "What! You can't Do that!!!" I just did." The next day she came back to take my outfit and sprayed new clothes on top of the old ones. She had tons of gadgets. I decided that I had too much new competition. I was also fired...
Natalia
2/19/2015 11:17:54 pm
I found no comma errors.
Maddie
2/19/2015 11:18:09 pm
Rolled a 4. No errors!!
katelynn
2/19/2015 11:18:28 pm
no spelling errors
Anne Thomas
2/19/2015 11:19:35 pm
I rolled a five, you're all good.
jesse
2/20/2015 12:44:04 am
rolled a four no errors
Quinlan
2/20/2015 04:32:43 am
Rolled four, no errors
ALycia
2/18/2015 11:18:28 pm
Hello my name Fashion detective Alycia Gage. Today i am undercover at a Walmart.I am looking for a mom to correct her fashion. I see three posible offenders to the fashion world. One is wearing socks and sandals. That should be a federal offense. I also see one whose wearing ripped pants and the rip is from her knee down and last of all a woman wearing bell bottoms. When I saw those I almost past out. Now going for bell bottoms . Ok what I am going to do is approach the mom then pulling out the Outfit-O-Matic. I shoot her with it she will be in a whole new outfit and my job is complete.
Kaleigh Homan
2/19/2015 11:17:48 pm
I rolled a 1 (capitalize)
Kaitlyn Martin
2/19/2015 11:18:27 pm
I rolled a 4.
Hailey
2/20/2015 03:49:06 am
I rolled a 1. I needs to be capitalized. Good job!
ethan
2/18/2015 11:19:05 pm
I am the fashion police and my job is to go after fashion crimes. Like socks with sandles and long sleeve shirts with shorts. I get a flamethrower to burn their ugly clothes.
Jett Spencer
2/19/2015 11:17:19 pm
I rolled a 4 And there are no Spelling errors. It needs to be longer though
Noah B
2/19/2015 11:17:31 pm
No capitalization errors!
Jake Korn
2/19/2015 11:18:37 pm
I rolled a two there are no comma errors. Good job.
Alex lopez
2/20/2015 12:45:29 am
Hey I rolled a 4 there is no spelling errors.
Jasmine Kuester
2/20/2015 12:46:29 am
No errors! I rolled a one.
Hayden
2/20/2015 04:32:10 am
I rolled a 1 and there are no errors.
katelynn
2/18/2015 11:19:58 pm
I am fashion police officer I go after people that don't have a great fashion style. I can't believe the people in this city don't they know that you should look your best ever day. Come on pink with brown that is so not a good fashion choice I will have to give you a ticket. I have nothing other to say to you. LOST SIGNA! (hit camera with clothes)bbbbbbbbbbbbbeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeepppppppppppp.
shiv
2/20/2015 12:45:48 am
no commas
Anne Thomas
2/18/2015 11:20:03 pm
Howdy, I'm Anne Thomas. I'm a sheriff. No not the kind that ride white horses and yell out 'Hi, ho, Silver away!'. I'm the kind of sheriff that finds people with socks and sandals, black with navy, and skirts with tee shirts.
Bailey RObinson
2/19/2015 11:18:52 pm
I rolled a 4. There are no spelling errors.
Hayden
2/20/2015 04:33:19 am
Thats a WAC bailey
Jett Spencer
2/18/2015 11:20:08 pm
OH MY GOSH! That dress with those shoes. No. That's not exceptable. oh sorry i forgot to introduce my self, my name is fashion, Detective fashion. Im on case to stop the sock sandler and I'm going to fix his fashion. oh no he is running away! I jumped in my car and we were on the chase. finaly I caught him! and i took his sandles off, took off his socks and then i put on his sandles and sent him on his way. just another day of work.
ethan
2/19/2015 11:16:53 pm
No spelling errors.
kyle yates
2/19/2015 11:18:46 pm
Rolled 4: Forgot to cape I's
Kaleb Ortiz
2/20/2015 12:51:37 am
Rolled a 1.
Kaleigh Homan
2/18/2015 11:20:13 pm
My name is Officer Jam and I am a Fashion Police officer. I always run into a case of Fashion mishap every day. I can't help myself when I see someone wear socks with sandals, I just have to stop and give them some advice on to not wear socks with sandals. When im out with family they always get mad at me with I stop and try to help someone with their lack of fashionable clothing.
alycia
2/19/2015 11:17:37 pm
the I in I am needs to be capitilized thats all good job
Lauren
2/20/2015 03:48:02 am
I rolled a 2 and I didn't see any comma errors. Good Job !!!! 2/18/2015 11:20:18 pm
I'm apparently a fashion police. I don't know why. I guess I'll just do what I'm being payed for. If I'm even being payed. I don't know. I'm very misinformed when it comes to this stuff. Whoa! Crocs! Better chase him down or something. Stop! In the name of the fashionably fabulous law! He's still running. Somehow. I don't even see any socks. I just diverted him into an ally! Perfect! Now what do I do? I don't have any cuffs or anything... just a fashionable hat really... I guess I'll just take the Crocs... but wait! He pulls a gun! I hear people gasp and I turn around to see people standing in the ally entrance watching. And a camera guy? Never mind back to the gun. And he's already shot me. Now I'm wearing Crocs. With socks. That sucks. I'm guessing I would be fired or something because of this... so I think I'll just go home or something. Today was a weird day.
Nick A.
2/20/2015 12:45:34 am
I rolled a four. No errors.
Travis
2/20/2015 12:46:12 am
I rolled a 2 and I saw no errors
Ross Fraser
2/18/2015 11:20:24 pm
I am a fashion police officer. I when people have non-fashion stuff on like socks with sandal's and shorts under pant's, I just hate all of that stuff, period. So one day I was wandering though the town when I see a guy with shorty shorts on over some ugly sweat pant's, but I decided to let him go. Then I saw a someone with shorts, and you already know I absolutely hate that, so I went over and shoved him into a bag then took him out and he had an outstanding outfit on it was just amazing. This was the fashion police reporting for fashion problems.
Sam W
2/19/2015 11:17:04 pm
Rolled a one. Looks good except "I When People have non-fashion stuff on like socks with sandals and shorts under pants.
Sam W
2/18/2015 11:20:49 pm
Since I am the fashion police for the day, I will tell you your guide lines
Ross Fraser
2/19/2015 11:18:19 pm
I rolled a four and i saw n spelling errors.
malik patterson
2/20/2015 03:50:44 am
Rolled 1 No errors but the first sentence has a grammer error
Jake Korn
2/18/2015 11:21:07 pm
Hello there I am a fashionista( Fashion Police). If you are wearing something I do not approve of you will go to jail. Here are a few things I think you should wear and what you should not wear. A few things I am okay with you wearing is sweat pants and jeans as long as you are wearing a short sleeve or long sleeve t-shirt, another thing you can wear is jeans or sweat pants with a sweatshirt. Now time for things you cant wear, you can not wear crocks with socks, you also cant heavy winter coats inside a heated building. That is all I really care about.
Kaitlyn M
2/18/2015 11:21:14 pm
Hi my name is fashion officer Sally. My job is too go around giving people notes/ tickets for bad fashion ideas. One of the girls at school wear jeans that are too big for her. Her name is Christen I been giving her tickets throughout the day. But she still doesn't listen. Finally she listen when the next day she wore clothes that fit her just right.
Callie
2/20/2015 03:48:56 am
Rolled a 1 and no errors
Ellijah Rose
2/18/2015 11:21:15 pm
Hello my name is Berry I am A fashion cop. I absolutely hate orange and yellow. If i could i would kill orange and yellow. Like there so gaudy like come on if you were those two together your just no i cant even explain what u are! And come on with those white sweet shirts i mean come on people. If you really like cloth's don't ware yellow and orange together or white sweet shirt's. And if you really want to get arrested i will get you if you ware any shade of brown. I cant stand brown at all just no. I meant who wares brown it isn't even cool. And my car has a built in the back when i arrest people I say get in the back! am a fashion expert like Bruh. I have a gun that shoot's out stripes i love stripes!!!!! I wish i could tell you more but i just saw someone with a turtle neck Hey get back here!
michael heinrich
2/20/2015 04:35:49 am
a should be lower cased I in multiply places should be capitalized
creighton h.
2/18/2015 11:21:22 pm
Hi, my name is Bob and I am a fashion police! I only arrest people that tuck their sweatpants in their socks. I just can't stand it. So for your information don't tuck your sweatpants in your socks or I will arrest you for your crime that you committed. In my days of being a fashion police I have only arrested around 1 million people. So when I go to arrest them they usualy run so I pull out the famous taser and tased the crap out of people, no literaly one time I did tased the crap out of someone!
Tyler
2/20/2015 04:32:50 am
Great job! no errors
Morgan Conner
2/20/2015 04:34:08 am
I rolled a 6, the second to last sentence should be a compound sentence with the last sentence
Natalia
2/18/2015 11:21:27 pm
I'm the head fashion police, and it's very stressful. Do you know how many people break my laws? When I see people have on a nice outfit on a day when they have p.e. that day, that just makes me crazy! As I walk down the halls on a normal day looking to make sure nobody is breaking my rules, I see this kid's outfit. I walked past it but I had to do a double take. He was wearing striped rainbow tights, and tights are just one rule for the boy's but having them striped and rainbow is a major crime. I asked him what he was thinking this morning, and you will never guess what he said. He said that is what rainbow day, and I almost died there is no such thing as rainbow day, and even if there was tights are still a huge no-no. I gave him the ticket and he waled away smiling. How could he possible be smiling at a time like this? So I blew a gasket and hit him with my redo outfit day, as hard as I could, and his clothes looked perfectly fine, and I did my job for the day.
Andrea
2/19/2015 11:18:46 pm
I rolled a 4 for spelling errors, and the only error I found is walked instead of waled. Nice job!
Aislinn Luther
2/20/2015 04:33:54 am
I rolled a one..."even if there was, tights are still..." That's all I found.
dezmond
2/18/2015 11:21:36 pm
bad fashion guy :Whats the problem Mr.officer .
dezmond
2/19/2015 11:19:23 pm
I rolled a 4 no spelling errors.
Beau Woods
2/20/2015 12:45:35 am
I rolled a four and you misspelled what's, jeans, and your.
Kyle Yates
2/18/2015 11:21:55 pm
Hello I am billy, Don't you just hate when people just wear the most stupidest clothes? well to day I am going to be a fashion police officer,that wears dress clothes with just a badge on it.
Andrea
2/18/2015 11:22:01 pm
Every day, I see all kinds of problems with the world. People wear all of the wrong colors and styles, and it's totally uncool. My name is Lucy, and I have a very strict clothing policy. Many have joined my stance in improving the world.
Emma
2/20/2015 12:44:04 am
I rolled a 1 and you had no errors.
Elliot
2/18/2015 11:22:19 pm
Ha ha another one caught texting and walking. I mean like who texts and walks right by a police officer. So I approach the culprit and ask for her name. After she tells me her name, I tell her to turn around and put her hands behind her back, but she refuses. So I tell her that I caught her texting and walking but she said it wasn't the law that she couldn't. But I told her that I'm a police officer and I can do anything I want, but she just walked away.
Makayla Schade
2/18/2015 11:24:06 pm
My name is Camile. I am a fashion police officer. I was walking down the hall when i saw a person with nike socks all the way up to their knees. I couldn't stand it. Then i looked over and i saw someone wearing socks and sandals. It was a mess. So I went to the office and asked if i could make some rules. Like always they let me. So the next morning I made an announcement. Good morning 7th grade. There will be some new fashion rules here. 1 you can not wear nike socks all the way up to yours knees. Also you can not wear socks and sandals or anything like that. Thanks everyone and have a good day. The next day no one wore anything like that. My job is done.
Laura Eckhart
2/20/2015 12:45:42 am
No comma errors. But capitalize your "I"s
Tatum Rasmussen
2/20/2015 03:50:36 am
No errors good job!
Tatum
2/20/2015 03:55:16 am
Capitalize your I's.
Noah Burke
2/18/2015 11:32:10 pm
Hello I am a fashion police officer! I stop kids in the middle school of York Nebraska form wearing green shoes or anything green! Green shirts I hate them so don't even bother asking me if you can wear it. I also hate when kids wear sandals to school, cause they always half to go down to the office to get a pair of actual shoes for recess! If you are wearing any of these items you will get tased! I am serious and if you try to run away run you over and then tase you! If you wear crocks I will just kick you out of this school and then tase you!
Creighton H.
2/19/2015 11:16:38 pm
No capitalization errors.
Ryan Nelson
2/20/2015 12:46:53 am
I rolled a 4.
Ryan Nelson
2/19/2015 12:44:11 am
Why am I wearing that? Okay, I don't know but i'm Jack, i'm a fa
Dean Erdkamp
2/19/2015 12:49:31 am
Oh my god! We oh we oh!!! Pull over now. Oh no it's the fashion police. We better run for it. But wait they can give you a brand new outfit. No i'm running. He's pulling out his gun. BAM! Oh no your ruffles. Well here he comes. OK for one that brown ruffled dress literally looks like the last load I took in the toilet. Now let me grab my Fashionizer gun. BOOM! Now look your dress no longer looks like a big pile of fresh buffalo chips. Thank you officer. Well see ya I got to go try to find Miley Cyrus because she is bound to look like a hyena that just got all it's guts got eaten from the inside out.
Dean
2/19/2015 12:52:29 am
I forgot to put at he beginning what kind of violations I'm after. So here they are anything brown, or ruffled, especially if they are combined because then they look like a pile of turds. 2/19/2015 11:18:04 pm
Rolled a 1.
Darin Ellis
2/20/2015 12:46:07 am
Well Dean, I rolled a 6, and instead of "let me grab my Fashionizer gun gun" it should be " let me grab my super ultra fashionizer gun"
Reed Malleck
2/19/2015 12:50:48 am
So it was a normal day and I was driving down bad fashion avenue where all the badly dressed people go. I was riding in my souped up yellow Bugatti with black Oakley shades over its beautiful headlights. So anyway i was driving down the street when i saw a girl in a disastrous outfit. Black with Navy hmm mm no you don't I turned on my sirens and pulled her over. I jumped out of my car with my passion for fashion taser out I hit the girl and changed her shirt from navy blue to baby blue.No big deal but the fashion cop saves the day..... again.
Dalton
2/20/2015 12:44:52 am
All the I's need to be capitalized and spaces after periods.
Dean
2/20/2015 12:47:13 am
I rolled a four no spelling errors but you need to capitialize one of your I's.
Dalton
2/19/2015 12:50:54 am
I am a the fashion police and I am out to catch criminals with ugly clothes. I see a man on the other side of the fence with some ugly clothes. I'll go catch him. "Sir, Sir" " Come here" I had to turn on my sirens. I caught up to this boy and I told him to put his hands on the ground. He did. I asked him why he was wearing the ugly pants, he said " Because I like them". "I am taking you to jail". 2 years later he was let out but then we had to get him again for hanging on the street with a ti dye t-shirt on, and skinny jeans, and a hat. So for that 10 more years in jail.
Riley Allison
2/19/2015 12:50:54 am
Hey I'm the Fashion Police. I'm here to take care of all the hideous and disgusting clothes and destroy all of them from York Middle School. The weapons I have are a lipstick tazer, a gun that shoots out make-up products, and the back of my cop car is a designer closet. I'm most certainly not afraid to use these items. I really wish I didn't have to use them but I have to everyday!!!!! I hope this will show people not to do these horrible things and wear fabulous clothes then the town will be safe from harm of blindness and death. Thank you for your time and I hope to see you all again soon without shooting you with make-up or tazing you with lipstick.
Zoe Collingham
2/20/2015 04:32:32 am
I rolled a 1, and found no errors...
Darin Ellis
2/19/2015 12:52:11 am
Hello! This is is fashion cop. Do you want to learn how to be stylish! Of course you do! Rule number one, no kahkies with running show that's a no no. 2, never ever where a jacket over some nice and fancy. 3, no bright socks, you must ware plain black or white socks. 4 if you were jeans don't have red, green, purple, white, or pink jeans. If you follow these step you WILL become fabulous.
Emma
2/19/2015 12:52:17 am
Hello. This is Fashion Police Officer Ashley, and I am working today at the Gretna Outlet mall. As I walk around I know for sure I am going to do some major busting today. I'm walking and all of a sudden I see this teenage girl wearing a trench coat and a horrid hat. The hat doesn't match at all! I take out my tazer and shoot a bird that just happened to be flying by. It lands on the woman, and I walk over to her. I take off her hat, put the bird in it, and throw it into the garbage. I replace her other hat with a way more fashionable headband and walk away, as though this fashion emergency didn't even happen. Time for some more busting.
Bladen
2/19/2015 12:53:05 am
Hello I am a fashion police officer I mainly arrest people that clothes don't match. In my last case I arrested a little girl that clothes didn't match she was sentenced for 10 years. She attacked me with a clothes hanger so I had to tase her and throw her in prison
Alejandro
2/19/2015 12:53:53 am
I am a fashion police officer and my job it to stop criminals.One day I in my fashion police car and suddenly I saw a guy wearing an ugly shirt with shoes.It was a fashion emergence so I went to the back of my car and it was a closet.In front of my car has makeup and ect.My gun shoots lips stick and some times some nice clothes.My job is amazing.
Anthonie Gomez
2/20/2015 04:43:11 am
Rolled a 1
Shiv Patel
2/19/2015 12:54:50 am
Hello I am a fashion police officer.I stop people form ware stupid clothes,and other stuff my police car is like fashion every where i go.When kid see me they all was run away.They think I am a stocker They don't know what they are talking about.come to still my stuff I will find you and taze you.
Kaleb Ortiz
2/19/2015 12:54:55 am
What's up? I am Officer Joenut. I'm with the fashion police... sadly. The only good thing about this job is that I get paid donuts! Anyways, I am on the Case... of the Swag Clothing Thief! This criminal has been stealing some of the most swaggish clothing in the city, and I have a few suspects. Number one, Dan Derpkamp. He has terrible clothing styles, and is a poor shoplifter. Number dos, Nathan Smit. He is also a shoplifter. There is a big coincidence between the crimes, actually. Every time a crime the thief strikes, I'm at the store! Oh well, time to go use my cop gun discount...
AJ
2/20/2015 03:49:24 am
I was looking for captizalize errors. I found no errors. :)
Laura Eckhart
2/19/2015 12:54:56 am
Mrs. Gorgeous was sitting in her beauty car one day painting her nails when the ugliest person walked by her. She coulden't even think properly because this person was as hiddious as a rat. She jumped out of her pink car and held out her curling-iron gun while yelling ¨hey ugly, put your hands up.¨ The lady put up her hands and Mrs. Gorgeous took out her headband handcuffs and slapped them on her wrists. She led her back to the car and put her in the adorable backseat. Then Mrs. Gorgeous said ¨Your going to be in fashion jail for a long time.¨
Travis Robinson
2/19/2015 12:55:03 am
Today is the that the I start my new job as a policeman. But not just any policeman a fashion policeman! I'm going to catch all the people wearing. Just hideous clothes and rid the community ugly people With my hair dryer and my patrol car equipped with a wardrobe for twenty people. So from this day forward I will protect the people and serve the people from hideous people. THE END
jesse munoz
2/19/2015 12:55:03 am
Hi im police joe i love my outfit but your mmm gurl you need a new hair dow any ways let me tell you a story.I pulled over this one dude on a monday morning he was rushing to work guess what he was wearing he was wearing a suit and tie i pulled him over and i said yo guy what the heck are you wearing son thats distusting so i said follow me to the nearst clothes shop and he came out with skinny jeans a scarf a hipster t shirt purple converse and some hipster shades i took him to work and well they fired him,jumped him and burned his clothes he still was pretty fabulous.
Lindsey
2/19/2015 12:55:16 am
Today I woke up with a badge clipped to my shirt. I looked at it carefully, and saw that it said "Fashion Police." I hopped out of bed to find a glittery pink uniform waiting for me to try on. In the mirror, I saw that it made me look like a fairy princess. I reached in the pocket and found bright red lipstick. I was about to put it on when it started buzzing. After closer examination, I saw that it had a secret message engraved in the case. It said that my mission was to capture the criminals on the loose. It walked outside and got into my brand new horse-drawn carriage. It had police lights on top and tons of mysterious buttons for me to push. The horses started moving and I soon came across a fashion disaster. She had bright gold, super tight leggings and knee-high go go boots, bedazzled in gems. She also had the most horrific fuzzy pink sweater that I had ever seen. She topped this outfit off with bright blue lipstick and matching eye shadow. I instantly knew that this case needed back-up. I pulled out my walkie talkie and pushed the emergency button. In a flash, helicopters, squad cars, and I think an entire swat team came zooming up to the sight. I knew that these people were much more advanced in the field than I, so I went back home. I knew that it was a job well done.
Lilly Holthus
2/20/2015 03:48:51 am
No capitalization or punctuation errors! Great job!
Abbey S.
2/20/2015 04:32:26 am
I rolled a 1. No errors. Great job!
Alexis Linder
2/20/2015 04:33:59 am
No errors, great job!
Beau Woods
2/19/2015 12:55:22 am
Hello, I am the weapons specialist at the IFP (Institute for Fashion Police). My first ever weapon was the lipstick taser that is only used by the women. One of my personal favorites though is the credit card that folds into a knife. One of my colleagues favorites is a car that I built. The car has built in scanners that scan for fashion disasters, a gun that shoot amazing clothes onto people, and turbo tank full of glitter. I'm working on a weapon of mass fashion to equip to the car but, it's top secret.
Ryan Nelson
2/19/2015 12:55:42 am
Why am I wearing that? Okay, I don't know why, sorry i'm Jack and i'm a fashion police officer! I hate when people don't match there clothes, that's when lets say you wear blue shorts and a lets say um, a pink shirt with it. Another thing is that when people wear like dress up and they look all nice and then there wearing like normal shoes. My biggest pet peeve is when people wear crocks, like why, just why do you have to wear crocks, is that like the only type of "shoes" you have?
My Name's Jeff (HF)
2/19/2015 12:55:57 am
I'd arrest every person who wears blue socks with purple pants. EWWWWWW! Why all the nike!? Some of the people who wear nike don't even play sports!!!!!!7
jasmine kuester
2/19/2015 12:56:17 am
Okay so i'm going to be the fashion in police for Miley Cyrus. Okay so first off that foam finger you had was hideous with the out fit you were wearing. You should have been whacked up side the head with it instead. For two I don't find that hair that bad but it should be ripped out if I see it in pig tails like that again. I mean lets get serious I think you terrorized little children being that ugly. Now for your third flaw and just hear me out please. Okay , put some clothes on! Nobody wants to see you on stage twerking with parts hanging out nobody wants to see. Common sense and if you don't think so go to church because apparently you need Jesus. 2/19/2015 03:52:33 am
Ok so I am going to be a fashion police. Ok so to start off you would might not want to have like a lipstick taser. 1. That is against the law to have. And the second reason: It could seriously kill somebody. Like you wouldnt want to wear mix-match stuff. A purple shirt with a pair of grey leggings.
Nate
2/20/2015 03:51:40 am
Rolled 1
Nathan Sutton
2/19/2015 03:53:40 am
One day in the town of Potato there was a boy walking by the potato fields. This boy was wearing muddy boats, brown cargo pants, and a tie-die shirt. When the boy got to the road a police car drove up to him and handed him a ticket that said clothes don't match properly. The boy looked up with a confused face and asked why the officer had giving him the ticket. The officer looked at him and said he was the fashion police and that he needed his clothes to match or he would be back. The boy quickly ran the rest of the way home to change his shirt. Feeling good about helping that boy out the fashion police went to go get some doughnuts, he loved doughnuts.
House of Glassy Crota (HF)
2/20/2015 12:46:19 am
Spelled donuts wrong
Jessica F. <3
2/20/2015 03:47:22 am
Rolled a 1.
Breonna lammert
2/19/2015 03:53:47 am
I am a fashion police officer, and I go after the not so great outfit choices.
Jessica Fuehrer
2/20/2015 03:48:30 am
Rolled a 1.
Tea
2/20/2015 04:32:57 am
I rolled a 1 and saw no errors. Good job! :)
zave
2/19/2015 03:56:03 am
I was driving in Colardo wear there was a guy not wearing no shirt. He was fatter than som wresler. He would not fit in the car so I had to get a trailer and some straps. The straps where to short so I had to the them together. Final he was strap down. Then I saw a women who was wearing jacket and pants. and a big hat. When I took off the hat she was as beatiful as nikki monge. So I did not arest her. But she got a ride on my motorcycle.
xzavior
2/20/2015 03:49:49 am
No spelling.
Zayden Loreman
2/19/2015 03:56:09 am
Hi I am Chef Curry, I am the fashion police. I arrest people that tuck there sweatpants into there socks it looks dumb. One person I already arrested for is Morgan Kendrick Conner for tucking in his sweatpants into his socks. If you don't want to get arrested you better keep your sweatpants out of your socks. Another thing I arrested people for is wearing Duke Blue Devil stuff. I hate Duke they are hideous. Don't wear Duke stuff or you will all so get arrested. Chef Curry signing of see you next time on Chef Currys Fashion Tips BYE!!!
Jacob
2/20/2015 04:34:27 am
No spelling errors in your story.
Lily S
2/19/2015 03:56:22 am
Hello, I'm Brooklynn Misu, fashion police officer. One day I was on patrol at the local Shopko. I specialize in color matching and patterns. It was a normal day I'd only given 3 tickets so far that matched brown and black. Then the woman with fashion disaster written all over them, walked out of the store. She was wearing a brown polka dot shirt, and black stripped pants. The worst combination ever! I got out my pattern-changer, and toke away the dots and strips. After that, I got my color-changer, and made her top blue. That was much better. Now I should probably call Crystal to help me with her shoes.
landon
2/19/2015 03:56:27 am
So I was driving down my block and sow some girls driving with a not prity sweet shirt or shirt so I pulled them over for not wereing prity clothes and arestied them then they got out of the car and sow there hityes pants so I said on other year in jail. And put them in the back of my fashion police car.
Tatum
2/19/2015 03:56:28 am
Hello I am a fashion police officer. When I am out on the streets I look for fashion disasters. That reminds me of a story. One day I was out on the job and I saw one lady with socks and sandals. That is one of the worst things you can ever wear. So I gave her a makeover. When I was done with her makeover she was as beautiful and glowing as the sun. She thanked me and went on with her life. I love being able to help the people of my community get their outfit together.
Cole
2/19/2015 03:56:34 am
Hi I'm with the fashion police.One day I was driving in my fashion car with a dressing room in the back.I saw to boys wearing a state farm t-shirts and khakis. I yelled hey that is illegal to wear plain clothes here hop in I will get you every thing you need. 5 minuets later they came out fabulous. They where now wearing tuxedos.
Aaron,T
2/19/2015 03:56:34 am
one day i was walking down the street and two men where wearing some ugly socks with saddles and long sleeve shirts with shorts. so I gave them a new tote dress I got a flamethrower to burn their ugly clothes. Now the close are hot as my fables car.
ellijah :)
2/19/2015 11:18:37 pm
I rolled a 5 there is no miss used objectives
Aaron
2/20/2015 03:49:12 am
rolled one One I where the ones I found
Callie
2/19/2015 03:56:34 am
Hi, I was driving my fashion police car. Cause im a fashion police. Then out of the a boy wearing red and purple shirt and a silver and yellow/gold pants. But his pants were barely up to his knees! UGH I HATE THIS JOB!!!! It messes with my mind!!!
Lauren
2/19/2015 03:56:34 am
Hello my name is James, Officer James. I am a fashion police. I am looking for the cases of brown with black. I am now looking at the Middle School for these cases. So far I have found 9 of these cases. I am against black with brown because it just looks weird. I think that if people can match the rest of their outfit then they can manage to stop with the black and brown. I just got done interviewing a girl named Maggie and she was wearing black with brown and I asked her "excuse me what made you put on that color combination today?" and she said "well because I like these colors together." I almost died when I heard those words!
Hailey
2/19/2015 03:56:40 am
Hello I am part of the most important police officer role ever. My name is Officer Bond and I am a fashion police officer. On a normal day I arrest about 20 people because of breaking the fashion laws like having a black shirt and brown legging. That is the worst choice ever and it drives the word crazy. You are suppose to coordinate you close so they mach and not that hideous outfit I mentioned earlier. I help protect the world from that horrible sight. Also so they don't get picked on in school because of there outfit. My motto is to serve and fashion.
Lily S
2/20/2015 03:47:51 am
rolled a 1, no errors.
Lily S
2/20/2015 03:49:57 am
suppose-supposed, close-clothes, are spelling errors.
Desiree Pinneo
2/20/2015 04:33:10 am
I rolled a 1 and found no errors.
Lilly Holthus
2/19/2015 03:56:49 am
My name is Officer Lilly and I am the "Fashion Police." My job is mainly to find teens who wear outrageous, unfashionable clothes. I love this job because I get the chance to give teens a makeover! There was this one time I made a girl as beautiful as Cinderella at a ball! Here's her story.
Lindsey
2/20/2015 12:44:46 am
Nice job! I rolled a four and found no spelling errors.
Hunter Royal
2/20/2015 04:33:42 am
Nice Job. I rolled a one and there are no errors.
Lauren Peters
2/19/2015 03:56:49 am
Hello, I am Macy, I'm a big part of the fashion police. Today I'm out in New York City and I'm bound to help people with their horrid fashion mistakes. As I sit here in my pink (pink is the new black) cop car (with flashing purple lights) I see a woman. She's probably about 45 - 50 years old. All that I can say is wow. She's wearing a red shirt with, what she thinks, a matching scarf. Her pants were blue, bright blue! I don't even want to look at those orange boots. She was wearing purple hat too. Wow. I hop out of my car and run over and say "Would you like a word of fashion advice?" I show her my fashion police badge. " Alright, I thought i looked just fine but-" "Yep, yep they all think that, until they see the real them." She looked curious and hurt at the same time. She'll thank me later. "Follow me." I take her to the back of my car and pull out the trunk and show her three outfits. She takes her time to pick but she picks the perfect outfit. My job is done.
malik
2/19/2015 03:56:59 am
Hello, my name is Steff. I'm a fashion addict and I love cloths, but some people don't seem to to care as much. So I help them. I'm the fashion police. I saw this really ugly and horrific outfit. I had to help them so I kidnapped them. I don't know if it was the right thing to do, but I did. I took of the mask I put on them. I told them it will be okay. It's just there outfit did not work. It was these bright peach shorts with a gray tank top and a green vest it was just a fashion No No. So I gave them a tip and it changed there life. She had friends and a boyfriend and now were friends. She what fashion does. Fashion helps in every single way.
brayan
2/19/2015 03:57:15 am
Hello I am a fashion police .I ride in my fashion car . My day starts out with a cup of coffee in the morning. In the afternoon I am on look out .There are all ways some people that hang out in the ally way with really bad clothes. At 3:30 I saw a man with ........
Emily Biel
2/19/2015 03:57:28 am
Hi! I'm a decorated police officer. No, not the kinds that arrests criminals. Well...not the common criminal. I arrest people who violate the fashion law!
Cam
2/19/2015 03:57:35 am
Nanananananananaananannanananannanananananananananananana FASHION!
Nate
2/20/2015 03:49:49 am
Uhhhh.... Rolled a one. No errors....I guess
Jessica F
2/20/2015 03:50:06 am
I rolled a 1.
Nichol :)
2/19/2015 03:58:40 am
Hi my name is Nichol. I am a sub fashion police for York. As I was driving down the street in my fashion police car, I saw a girl wearing Khakis and a polo shirt. Er. We've got a code red on 10th and Iowa avenue. So I sped up and stopped right next to her and said "Ma'am what are you wearing?" Then in a tone that ehr mama wouldnt appreciate she said "Uhm.. My clothes.... What's wrong with what I'm wearing? What are you? A fashion police?" Then I said "Why as a matter o' fact I am. Now please get in, I'm taking you to the station. Without hesitation she got in. When we got there, we got out of the car and walked inside. Then she said woah! Are you gonna buy me new clothes?" Then I said yes ma'am I am. So I picked some clothes out then she went into the dressing room and changed. When she got out she looked amazing! She was as preety as cinderella. The End!
Nichol
2/20/2015 03:47:28 am
Her**
Serenity
2/20/2015 03:50:22 am
I rolled a 1 and you have no capitalization and ending punctuation errors.
Sevanna
2/20/2015 04:31:33 am
I rolled a 4 and I found no errors. Good job, bruh.
Colton r
2/19/2015 04:06:37 am
Hi there my name is john and i'm a fashion police my disagreemeants are if you look like you don't like you would be able to go to a school and pick up a kid then your not getting by me any was oh here is an example of a person who doesn't meet the standards she is wearing a cut off tee shirt with sweat pants a crocs in my book that is a violation and she needs a makeover my team and I will give her a brand name and new look starting with that shirt of hers i'm going not even get started with how much i revoke those type of shirts and pants i also hate sweat pants
Colton.
2/20/2015 03:49:37 am
Capitalize John and put a period at the end.
Hayden
2/19/2015 04:39:46 am
Hey you stop there and put you clothes away. No I am not so you can do whatever you want to me and I still won't put them away. Ok So he put the girl in a cradle and tied her hands behind her back with hair ties.Once she got to jail she was put in a cell and died there because she did not put her clothes away. After that the cop arrested many more people for not putting their clothes away and for wearing yoga pants that have kissy faces on them because why would a girl want to get kissed by a girl on the legs. That is weird.
Tyler
2/19/2015 04:39:46 am
I am a fashion police officer. I usually look for for people wearing ugly outfits at the mall. If they are I use my weapons to put something better on them. I always make sure that all the clothes that the stores sell are approved by me. If I see someone wearing something really ugly, I either put them in jail for life or give them the death penalty.
Matt Mittman
2/19/2015 04:39:51 am
So I guess I am fashion police officer for a day at York Middle School. When I get to school I see something bad. Some people aren't wearing what I want them to wear! I think the school dress code should be that you have to wear shorts as long as your knees go down. There! That person is wearing a cutoff in school! What! So that is how the day went. Some people didn't like me but I don't care. So what!
Bladen
2/20/2015 12:45:57 am
Rolled a five no Errors
Tea
2/19/2015 04:39:58 am
One day there was a fashion police officer getting ready to do her duty by pulling people over for wearing bad clothes. It was a nice day outside when she was cruising around and decided that she was going to Walmart to find people who have very bad clothes on. When the officer got out of her car her eyes landed on the most hideous outfit in the world. A girl wearing a black shirt with brown leggings and socks with sandals. She almost barfed when she saw her wearing that outfit. She walked straight up to her and pushed her over to her car like a rocket. She pulled up her trunk that had a whole bunch of amazing clothes that actually matched. She gave her a scarf, black leggings, a white shirt, and really cute sandals without socks. She changed into them and her friends loved that outfit so much they weren't on their phones anymore. The fashion police finished her duty by saving that young girl from a catastrophe. Her work here was finished.
Abbey S
2/19/2015 04:40:19 am
Hi. My name is Hilda. I am a fashion police officer. One time I was walking down the street when I saw a women wearing a 1630's dress. I almost puked. All of the fashion police know everything about fashion and I am sure that none of us would let this one by. When I pulled over she was so surprised. She thought that she was up to date on her fashion. I laughed so hard that people started to stare. Finally when I got her to realize that she was so very wrong she followed me to the back of my police care. I opened the back and picked out a beautiful dress. She wen into the dressing room and came out looking amazing. My job was done., and I think I did great.
Hunter Royal
2/19/2015 04:40:32 am
Hello there, my name is Officer Jon. We are going to be working at the Walmart. There has been a lot of fashion violations these past few days. They say her name is Teresa and she is hideous. When we walk in, there she is, and oh my gosh is she hideous. She is a chunky lady wearing yoga pants and high heals. Her shirt is a blue tank top with too much upper body showing. I HATE it when people mix black and blue together. I walk up to her and she says that this is her best outfit that fits. She tells me that she hates matching black and blue but she cant help it. She says it just looks too sexy and she wants to show herself off. Honey, it is NOT working. She tells me that she will look at some new options so she does not offend anyone that is already scarred for life.
Major eiland
2/20/2015 04:34:59 am
Rolled a 1 no errors, or is there * maniacal laugh* no no there isn't
Zoe Collingham
2/19/2015 04:40:38 am
I am the fashion police person. I am at the local Walmart. Gosh look at all these crazy outfits. Most people are wearing pajamas, this is terrible. They need to dress correctly when going out. I hope they do realize that it is 2:30 in the afternoon. Good grief. There is like 4 out of 15 people wearing regular clothes. This is a disgrace. I'm so done... THE END 2/19/2015 04:41:48 am
One day I was walking in Walmart. I saw the most hideous sight ever. There was this girl that was wearing pajama pants while shopping. It was like 1:00p.m in the afternoon. That is not the worst thing the worst thing is that she had a beard that made her look like a big hairy sloth. So when I saw her I could not help but go up to her and get my big shaving gun out and point it at her chin. I also could not help but get my jumbo size gun filled with pants. So I shot it at her and the problem was fixed once and for all.
Emily Biel
2/20/2015 03:49:43 am
I rolled a one and you have no spelling errors....but, "That is not the worst thing*.* (period or a comma or an exclamation point) The worst thing is that she had a beard that made her look like a big hairy sloth.
Sevanna
2/19/2015 04:42:25 am
Okay, so before I tell you about the HUGE crime that happened today, I should tell you a few things about who I am and what I do. My name is Willow and I am a fashion police officer. Before you go off thinking that we're all mean and force you to dress like us, let me just say that we have really laid-back rules, but you need to dress decently. Which means that you can't wear socks with sandals, you can't wear ankle-length pants that are too short and you can'y wear see-through clothes. I mean unless you have something under it. Anyways, what I saw today will scar me forever. I saw a girl, maybe 21-ish wearing pants that were ankle-length, a see-through top with something under it (It was just a hideous shade of puke green), and... SOCKS WITH SANDALS. She was violating every rule in our book! So when I saw her, I turned the sirens on my squad car on and stopped her. She was all like, "Um, what's going on? Did I do something illegal?" and I said, "Yes! Your outfit is TERRIBLE!" So after much negotiation, I told her to get a new wardrobe and I would be checking in on her in a few days. When I finally stopped by to check out her progress, she looked flawless! She was wearing these shorts that weren't too long and they weren't too short, and she had a pink tank-top under a white pull-over short-sleeved jacket thingy. She looked perfect for the summer! Now that she looks better, we hang out every weekend and she's actually really cool! I think we're gonna be really great friends. 2/19/2015 04:43:02 am
As he woke up that morning, Mr. berjanglez ate his cereal with sparkles. As a professional fashion police officer he ate this every morning. He needed to find, turn in, and change someones hideous clothes by the end of the day or he was fried so he had to start looking. He got in his car and went to Walmart, Petco, and KFC. He can't believe he found nothing. He sat down to eat some lunch and thought of what to do. He flipped throught the newspapper for some ideas and found one. There was a fashion show today and three o'clock and he had an hour to get ready. He put on his under cover clothes and combed his hair. He headed out the door and went to the fashion show. He watched for an hour the the last contestant steeped out wearing a rainbow wig and a unicorn horn with stripped pjs. Everone knows thats now what you wear with a unicorn horn and a wig. So he went up on stage and did what he does best. Tassed him. He put a portable cubicle around him and changed his pjs with sparkly vests and pants. His mission had been acomplished.
Jason Franklin
2/19/2015 04:43:10 am
My name is Jason and I am a fashion police officer. I'm on a crime where a woman is wearing a very ugly dress. That dress was as ugly as the dirtiest dump. So I pulled over and put her in my car and took her to a fashion studio. Where I got her a beautiful dress and a perfect pair of shoes. After that I redid her hair and changed her makeup and put on the finest jewelry that I bedazzled with my taser and and put on her make up with makeup gun. Once I was done I set her off and I left in search of another case. Another case solved, Jason out!
Quinaln
2/19/2015 04:43:17 am
Hello my name is Sargent o' Cow and I am the fashion police. I have spotted a fashion law that has been broken, I have spotted a man wearing socks with sandals. This time I don't confront him just yet, I call for backup. I say on the phone " I need as many men down here with as many bedazzled guns as possible A.S.A.P.!". As the rest of the fashion police get here I stalk the man to his house and wait tell backup arrives. When every one gets here I inform them and we head to the perpetrator's and we break down the door, FASHIONABLY and shoot down the prep. We take of the sock and sandals and get rid of them, then we give him the right footwear and a free trip to the hospital. Mission Complete!
Aislinn Luther
2/19/2015 04:43:23 am
Hello citizens on York, Nebraska. I am Officer Luther, and I am a fashion police officer. There are major fashion violations going on, and I am here to address them. There will be no socks with flip-flops, unless they are toe socks. Dress shoes with sweatpants will not be allowed either. Neither will tall socks with short boots, or vertically striped pants or shirts. The stripes will make you look taller than a sky scraper, and more ridiculous than a lama in pajamas. About the tall socks with short boots problem, choosing this style makes you look like a clown with an even sense of style than it usually does. If you violate any of these rules, you will be arrested immediately, and taken to get a makeover. So think before you dress.
Michael heinrich
2/19/2015 04:43:31 am
I'm George and I'm a fashion police officer. Saturday June 18 2001 was the day I found the worst case I've ever seen. There was this man named Vinchi and man he looked like he had just gotten beet up by gorillas. His shorts were to short, and his shirt looked like it was from the 1950's and it looked stupid. I had to help him I gave him shorts that actually fit, and a plane blue shirt he looked like a star.
Alexis Linder
2/19/2015 04:43:40 am
Hey, I'm Alexis, the best fashion police woman ever to live. One day, I was walking through JcPenny's looking for clothes to update my wardrobe when suddenly I saw a girl wearing something all wrong. I approached the girl and found out her name was Matilda. Matilda needs a fashion makeover fast. I can do it I think to myself, although there's no way to fix her ugly face, unless I use my bedazzler. This girl is gonna be a piece of work, ¨Alright Matilda, you carry on, with whatever you're doing and I'll go find some presentable clothes for you to wear.¨............
Lauren Peters
2/20/2015 03:48:43 am
Good job, no spelling errors. You know, if you really need a good outfit, you should try Lauren's Boutique.( It's an inside joke.)
Anthonie Gomez
2/19/2015 04:43:47 am
Ok, so, I went to the mall one day and there was this guy I saw, he was a police officer, but I unique one, they call him The Fashion Officer, and they don't call him that for nothing. So I was at the mall and I saw that he was looking at me....
Cam
2/20/2015 03:47:44 am
Rolled a 1. No errors found.
Jacob
2/19/2015 04:43:54 am
My name is Cleveland Brown and I'm proud to be right back in my home town with my new family as a fashion police officer some people call me gay. Especially my son Rolo. Rolo is so mean. Any way one day I was walking through town and saw this terrible suit and I mean terrible. He had neon yellow sock and a pink or salmon that's what he called so I tased him and arrested him right there. THE END.
maria
2/19/2015 04:44:00 am
Hey you! you can't wear that. why not? Because I'm the fashion police officer. What is that about? Today is Fashion day. you can only use blue clothes. So I don't care. Girl that outfit is ugly. Excuse you. Sorry couldn't hear you. And with that grenade launcher I made here ugly outfit that looked like a dog pooped on it and a train ran over it . But now it is as beautiful a angel dresses in an blue dress. Wow! thanks. No problem. Then a few hours later a girl had the uglest dress on. It's like a yellow dress with a PINK HEART. NO PINK ALLOWED. So I threw a grenade at her and she had a blue lighting dress on. The End.
maria
2/20/2015 04:32:15 am
rolled one. No Errors for ME.
Morgan Conner
2/19/2015 04:44:43 am
Hello, my name is officer Fashion. I serve the community by fixing the people that violate the fashion laws. I have been an officer for a few years, so I know what I'm doing. I was on duty at the local mall one day. When I was walking around to find some violators I saw a guy that looked completely hideous and goth. I took him out to my car and gave him an extreme makeover. I gave him clothes that were not all black, like jeans, a t-shirt, and a sweatshirt. Now he almost looks as good as me! I am proud to serve my town as Officer Fashion.
Zayden
2/20/2015 03:47:45 am
I rolled a a 2 no comma errors good job Morgan Keith Conner!!!!
major eiland
2/19/2015 04:46:40 am
What did I just see? Anyway my name's C.J It stands for Cave Johnson I was at Walmart and I saw a police officer with a................... pink suit? Well then this day got interesting, anyway we arrested someone for wearing a pretty bad suit though. The guy I don't know him I swear I would tell you if I did back to the subject he put him in a police car that is a rainbow *hysterical laugh*. Ah that was hilarious they drove off in to the sunlight the end.
Jason Franklin
2/20/2015 04:34:36 am
Rolled a 4, errors but you did not capitalize your name. Leave a Reply. |
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