The ultimate tree house for me would have a huge ladder on a huge tree to get up there. Then there would be a little platform and a bridge going across from the platform to the tree house. This tree house would be very big it would have electricity, WIFI, a television. I would have a bed and windows and a door. It would also have a couple other bridges leading to plat forms that have zip lines to use. You can also just clime the huge tree.
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This is what my ultimate tree-house would look like, and feel like. My tree house would have stairs going up, it would be huge it would have a bunch of room to hangout and do stuff. It would have furniture in it...... very comfortable. When you walk in you feel like you walked into another world. The smell is amazing it smells like fresh wood. You never want to leave this amazing tree house. It would have a kitchen with a food bar.... I would be in the kitchen the most. Then there is a game room , with every game imaginable. This is what my ultimate tree-house would be like.
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I guess it is kinda okay.
The perfect tree house to me is like a mansion a big oak tree right though the middle with litter vines of leaves on them. A nice big spot to sleep with a king bed and a kitchen with all of the newest appliances. The cupboards stocked with the fattest snack a man could want with for any thing you want. Oh the bridge to the other tree were we have all the newest video games and crib that is the size of a house. It is like a city in the trees. Now somehow I have to find the money to build this. :(
No mistakes good job.
Cara you need to capitalize and use a period.
In my ultimate tree house I would be talking with my friends. I probably wouldn't let my brother up. I would be eating a Popsicle, Listening to music, and relaxing. I would have my friends up there with me. I would have a zip line attach from tree to tree. If I could I would stay the night up in my tree house. That's what I would be doing up in my tree house.
I would have a zip line attached from tree to tree.
Good job McKenzie. No mistakes!
nice job the the story
Listening isn't capitalize listen.
My treehouse would be the most amazing thing in the world. I would make it three story's tall and the only way you can get into it is a trampoline that you bounce onto the magnificent balcony where you can see all the wildlife of the world. I would have a zip line connected to my other three story treehouse five miles down the rainforest. It would have my own Jamaican style music and theme to it. This would be the best treehouse ever. Oh yeah and it would be in Jamaica.
Good job Ty Bart!
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If I had a tree house it would be made all out of barn wood. It would have a bunch of antiquity kind of things in it. I would place in in the woods where no one has been before, but easy to get there. It would have five bedrooms, three bathrooms, a great big deck for parties, and a ginormous kitchen. I would have friends and family over all the time. I would wake up to hear the birds chirping and the great smell of the fresh out doors. My tree house would have a big, bouncy trampoline under it and two really comfy swings attached under the deck for reading or relaxing.
Good job, your home sounds really cozy. I would love to visit it sometime.
Just one mistake that I found is that you put the word "in" twice in the second sentence. I'm pretty sure you meant "it" the first time. Nice job on your story!
when I walk into a treehouse,I can smell a big smell of of oak wood shavings off of the tree.I I will bring up some food up there to snack on.I would bring friends up into my tree house and maybe work on homework..I sometimes will make brownies and bring them up there ,but that is kinda rare for me to do that.
You forgot to capitalize the word 'When" in the first sentence, two I's in the second sentence, and also in the second sentence, it doesn't make sense. You also have two periods after the word homework.
The perfect tree house smells like the fresh ceder wood that it made out of . It looks like a huge house lifted thirty feet is the air.But it would be camouflaged into the forest It would have every thing you would need a living room with a TV that is a a window outside. A kitchen to eat food.A bed to sleep on.
You stand at the trunk of my tree house. You look up to see a large house high in the sky. In front of you is a ladder, made with twig and twine. When you climb it and reach the top, you are faced with a door. The top of the door is window, and the bottom is wood, with an engraved bear. When you open the door you are welcomed with the aroma of Mint, and cookies. Two calming smells. There is a brown fluffy couch on the left side of the room, and a projector on the right side. On the couch there is a few pillows and blankets. Theres a book shelve in front of you, and a lamp beside the couch. Theres windows surrounding the walls. This is my perfect tree house.
Wow great job. You used great disruption. No mistakes. :D
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My tree house would be so huge it would scratch the sky. In it would be enormous wooden rooms and wooden elevators. It would smell like freshly cut wood and new paper. There would be a big kitchen,a hot tub, a library, and a guitar room. I would have a zip-line and reggae music would always play. It would be on a tropical island and near the ocean.
If I could have the ultimate tree house I would make it in Cuba so I could be alone in a quiet place. My ultimate tree house would be decorated like a Florida State head out of wood that is painted Garnet and Gold. I would also have a yacht near a lake so I could go to America quiet often. Being in Cuba and in my tree house I would have my own room with a PS4, a computer and a TV so I could be updated about sports and the news. I would also have a ton of luxuries like cars and signed footballs and helmets from players. Most of all I would love to have a jet so I can store my tree house on my jet so I can fly and be in the US for FSU and family. After I didn't like the environment on Cuba I would go to the US and live in Mobile, Alabama because I've always wanted to live there and having the greatest tree house ever would top my life off.
The perfect tree house would be a 20 foot tree with a teleporter so i could go up in my tree house cause im lazy. In my tree house there would be 2 windows with mini-guns mounted on them. Then there would be a nice bed and a kitchen. I would buy candles that smell like fruit punch. There would also be a hot tub and a Olympic sized swimming pool. There also would be a pizza hut and a captain red beards in my tree house. The last thing in it would be my really hot supermodel wife and a 100 inch plasma screen tv.
I needs to be a capitol, cause should be because, im needs to be i'm,Pizza Hut and Captain Red-beard's need to be capitols.
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If I could have the ultimate tree house it would have a hot tub with a flat screen t.v. next to the hot tub so then I could sit in the tub and watch t.v.. Then upstairs would be a pool table so then since I have a pool table I need some darts so then it would be a game room because a game room needs a pool table and darts. Under the hot tub I would have a man cave with a massive flat screen t.v. with a big stuffed bear right to my chair make out of and albino grizzly bear. Then the kitchen would smell like steak and taste like meat when ever you eat in the tree house. Then your feet wold be so comfortable because the carpet would be the softest you can find.
My perfect tree house would be by the ocean, it have a huge tree and at night I could see a beautiful view of the sunset. In my perfect tree house I would have a huge kitchen that has wonderful granite counter tops and white cabinets. I would have five bedrooms all with a bathroom in all of them. Under my perfect tree house I would have a cozy fire place with chairs all around it. My tree house would be fun, cozy and inviting.
Nice Job Natalie! I would love to visit your dream house sometime!
Sounds like fun! No errors .
My perfect tree house would have three stories. It has 3 different bath rooms. In the living room there's a huge curved TV.It would have an elevator to get to the top. It would have 1 kitchen, 7 bedroom,and 1 pool. And that's my perfect tree house.
I cant find any errors good job
It should be 7 bedrooms not bedroom.
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The ultimate tree house would be very enormous and it would be very sturdy so it would not break. You would need to go up to the tree house by going up a ladder which leads to the rick oak wood stairs. You then would climb up the stairs to get to the top. There you would find a beautiful birch tree house. Go inside and you will find a 32" flat screen TV, and the best, most comfortable couch in the market. If you turn left you will find the kitchen with my most beloved foods I eat. I got pancakes, bacon, and some soda, what else would you need? Next to the right of the living room, the dining area. I got the shiniest granite counter tops and a spinning stool chair... with wheels! The table top is only the finest spruce wood, and it can't give you splinters. That's pretty much the ultimate tree house.
My tree house would be 3 trees long and look like a house.It would very big. It would have great support to keep it up for a long time.Lots of people would be able to go up there.It would have a flat TV and a couch.It would have a bathroom 1 bedroom and windows.It would be the best tree house ever.
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My tree house would be a massive house with in trees that you would have to climb a latter to get than there would be other house connected to the main house .The main house would be the living room with a tv. and then there would be another on attached to it by a bridge that would be a video game room. than there would be another one connected by that would be a bedroom with a tv and two bunk bed so my friends could be there. Than there would be another one connected to that and it would be a bathroom. and then there would be another one connected to that that would be the kitchen. and all the houses would be in really tall trees and they all would be connected by bridges. and they would all have WI FI and and water and electricity.
The perfect tree house would be a giant tree with branches yo can climb on. On the out side it looks bright fun. It would have a balcony. The whole tree would be 12 feet high. In the inside there would be bean bag chairs. And the walls would be an ocean blue with pictures of my family and Olaf. There wound also me a desk so I can do my home work in there, If I could there would be a TV in there just in case my friends stay the night in there and we want to watch TV. There would be plugs so i can plug in my phone. And there would be a minni kitchen so i can bake with friends there would be a Minnie fridge. All together this would be the best tree house ever.
You,would,I, is spelled wrong great job!
My tree house would be totally amazing. It would be so high up in the air it touched the clouds. The would be a huge deck that could be used for big parties or having friends over. Inside there would be a bedroom where the huge bed literally takes up the whole room. You can climb up to the rainbow colored roof and if your lucky you will be able to sit on the softest clouds. At night, you will be able to look outside the window and see the stars twinkle in the pitch black darkness.
Great Job! I found nothing wrong, I would love to visit your house sometime!
At the base you see nothing until you hit a button and a door appears in the stump, when you get in, it's an elevator that takes you up to a landing that has chairs and wifi. Logs building up to form a house structure at the very top of the giant tree. A wooden bridge with ropes as railings swooping to another tree with the same type of building. I'd have 5 of those with wooden rooftops covered with branches and leaves to make it blend in. A bedroom, a kitchen, a bathroom, a living room, and the landing. All of the rooms filled with furniture. I have everything I need, of course I will live in this forever.
Great job Cara. You used great word choice. :b
If I had a tree house it would be made of wood. When you walk in, it would smell like fall candles because they are my favorite. There would be a box of candy sitting by the door so you can grab one when you walk in. You can feel the scratchy wood on the walls and see that you should not touch them. There would be a hot tub, pool, 3 bedrooms, and a slide that goes down the stairs.
The ultimate tree house for me would be up tall and there would be steps so i could get up easier. I would like to have a bedroom, living room, bathroom and most of all, a kitchen. I would want my tree house to have so much food in it that it would take me a year to eat. This would be the ultimate tree house.
you had a lowercase '' I '' in the first sentence >:)
A perfect tree house would be on that I can live in, it would have a big kitchen one bathroom one master bedroom a game room and a living room.It would smell like pine trees and always be warm it would have a massive skylight and huge windows that open by a button , it would be amazing!
Good job trenton
Make sure you put commas and read over your paragraph because it doesn't exactly make sense. Good job!
If I had a tree house I would have a flat screen TV, food for eating, a bed for sleeping, and a shower for cleansing. The food I would have is steak, fruits and vegetables that I like, and of course lemons, oh wait that´s a fruit never mind that last one. That would be pretty much everything that I would have in my tree house.
This ginormous thing you've been asking about is my tree house it's got everything in it. The smell in my tree house is the fresh smell of strawberry pie and peaches.My tree house is a beautiful thing. There is this huge tree that it sits on with four huge branches coming out the side. My tree house is made out of metal unlike the normal tree house which is wood. The door is about 10 feet wide and 20 feet tall. Up in my tree house is a kitchen and I make really good apple pies and delicious steak and mashed potatoes. The metal feels rough instead of smooth so it gives it kind of a rusty feel to it.
Need one space after a period, otherwise good job!
My tree house would be two stories high. It would have a couch and kitchen on the first floor and a bathroom. When you went up to the second floor it would be a round room with a balcony. Up there would be a fridge for food and drinks. There would also be a pool. On the top floor is also a loft so in the loft I would have my bed and TV. Also up there would be a hot tub. Out on the balcony I would have a grill and a table and chairs to sit at. To get up to my tree house you would walk into the trunk of the tree and go up a spiral staircase to the first floor. To the second floor it would be another staircase, and to get to the loft you would climb a ladder and go down a slide.
I would have a giant tree house that smells like fresh wood.It would look like a giant modern house on the inside.But stupid on the outside.I would put a generator in there to have electricity. and a bedroom with sound proof walls.And the ladder up to the tree house would be an escalator.I would have a mini fridge to put all my favorite snacks in and drinks.I would put an hd tv to watch movies and an xbox to play games so I can live up there for days.I would have a marble bathroom.And a water fountain that the water comes out of a statue and there would be hidden pipes for the water to get up to the tree house.That is just a little bit of my dream tree house I could go on and on but I will stop here.
My tree house would have stairs leading to the top where you would have a beautiful view of the town, but you would still be able to smell the wonderful roses that are planted right at the bottom of it all. Also you would have plenty of things to do in the tree house like read a book for once in your life or maybe you just want to feel the beautiful roses that you will probably take for granted in a few minutes. There is also a little fridge to so you can eat and drink, but one of the best things is there are always birds flying by so you can hear them chirp. Hopefully you love this piece of art tree house.
Nice job damian
My tree house would look small just for me and a few others. Also I guess I would have a table in there and a mini fridge some how. I would also need at least a bed in there just to go there when there was no peace in my house. No matter what people would say I would have a corner full of bags of chips that would taste really good. I guess I would all so need a bathroom there some how I really don't know how though.The feeling would have to be soft because there would be a carpet. It would smell fresh.
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Great job Nahomi!
The ultimate tree house for me would be probably starting with spiral stairs leading up to my tree house. When I get up there, there's sliding doors and a big high sealing colored in white. There has to be 7 rooms. Kitchen, bedroom, living room, my own game room, pool room, my own room that i'll design in my own way, and of course my own snack room that only I can go in. It's gonna smell like maple syrup because we'll be by maple trees. It'll have a lot of junk food in it, so it'll taste salty. It'll feel cozy and warm. It'll sound like birds chirping and loud music blasting out the windows. When people walk in their jaws will drop and they'll want one themselves. That's my dream tree house.
My tree house you start up the stairs that creek with every step. You look up and you see nothing but stairs, but then you get to the top you see a brown door the door opens and you are amazed. Look around it is beautiful with a flat screen television with couches and beanbags up on the loft there is a bed with Case international sheets you look out of the window and see a zip line going somewhere far in the distance, so you go on the zip line which goes over a hot spring and a waterfall it leads to a tree house lower to the ground with a new ladder you fall on the deck outside of the tree house and you open the screen door and walk inside this one is just a couch and you climb the ladder down to a new car.
The ultimate treehouse... How about 50 feet in the air, with entire ROOMS for recording. Also a pet room, full electricity, a mini fridge in every room, and water balloon cannons protecting all entrances by my melee weapons for protecting it. My knife and swords. Also I have a my own oven. That would be awesome! You know it is. So, that would be my ultimate treehouse, with a few more things here and there. But still, my treehouse would (and hopefully will) be awesome.
The perfect tree house for me would be a huge tree house. It would have a hot tub and a swimming pool built into the tree. The tree would have television wifi and a bunch of other things. There would be a ladder to get up into it or you could climb it. It would have a zip line to get down from it, and a slide to get down also. I would put a shooting stand in it also so I could shoot deer, and rabbits out of it. I would have a flat platform on the top of the tree house so then I could put a telescope on top of that so I could look up at the stars. I would put a little bed and blankets in the tree house also. At the far east corner of the tree house I would have a picture of my dog that just past away so that whenever I went over there I would know that she is in my heart. I would also have a giant coach, and a chair. The coach would be able to hold 30 people. That would be my perfect tree house.
I see wood, windows, a bed, posters on the wall, a couch, and obviously a book shelf. I hear the chirping of birds, and leaves in the wind. I feel the wind whipping through my hair. I taste excitement and happiness. There is no place that I would rather be, and I want to stay here forever. This home is compared to no other, just right. Well, just right for me.
The perfect tree house in my opinion is one that ever time in the morning I hear the birds and squirrels moving around. The smell of oak trees in the distance overpowering your tree house. The base is low to the ground with wooded sides. One big widow to show the front. And small windows to get fresh fruit from your tree.
My ultimate tree house would be the most amazing thing ever. It would have an upstairs and a downstairs. Also it would have an escalator that takes you all the way to the bottom or top. It would have a huge living room with a big couch. It would also have cable so you could watch TV or wifi so you could play on your phone or iPod. I would also have big party room for friends or anybody, and a huge pool. I think it would be the most amazing thing ever.
Good job the only thing you forgot was the word "a" after the word have. Other than that you did a really good job and I would love to come over for a party.
If I had a tree house it would be perfect. I would have it be huge. It would have a wooden elevator so it would match the siding of my tree house. It would have 5 slides going down the 5 stories of my tree house. I would have a rock wall so I could climb up it anytime I wanted to! I would have 7 outlets to charge anything I needed at multiple times. There would be 3 medium sized bedrooms, one living room, and 2 bathrooms. It would be so fun. There would also be a ladder to the underground tornado shelter just so we would be safe. My tree house would be all wood and would have wifi. It would be amazing.
You see nothing but but a normal tree right?, well that's only because you haven't went around back where you open a door that leads to an elevator and you go about 50 stories up. When you first walk into my tree house you see a nice fireplace, a sectional couch and a huge flat screen tv on the wall. It smells like apple crisp and burning wood. There is a ginormous fridge holding almost everything that your heart desires. There are also rooms with huge king size beds and more flat screen tv's there is also mini fridges and bear rugs and leading back to the elevator there is a grand staircase.
In my ultimate tree house you would be able to see over all the houses in the neighbor hood. When you first step into my tree house you would smell the fresh air breezing along and the smell of sweet candy. You could feel the smooth wood and the bark of the tree. The roof would come to a tall point where the birds would land on. I would have a lights wrapped around the tree so it filled the room with light. There would fuzzy blue chairs so people could sit in them. I would have my own little kitchen so when it gets cold I could make hot chocolate. There would be a fan blowing down from the top in the summer but a heater in the winter. In the corner there would be a huge basket with blankets. Connected to the tree would be a t.v so no one would get bored.
As you walk towards the tree house you see a beautiful wooden staircase. As you walk up the stairs you can hear the happy birds chirping and the squirrels running up and down the branches. When you get to the top there is a beautiful door painted red. As soon as you enter the sweet smell of pine hits you like a blast of fresh air. There are 4 rooms. One is the kitchen and dining room. There is a table with ever flower you could imagine in a bright blue vase. The kitchen is a pale beige, with beautiful but simple paintings. The living room is a pale blue room, with furniture as soft as clouds made of silk. The other two rooms are bedrooms. One is mine and one is for when I have guests. They are both painted pale blue with white stripes. They have big, queen size beds that smell of lavender. There is a bathroom in each that are full size.This tree house is a dream, that will hopefully come true!
My ideal tree house will be 10 feet 16 inches high.It is made out of the finest walnut you could ever imagine.There is an elevator that will take you up to the tree house because there is no other way up.My tree house has have free wifi and other amazing things the other things I have in my tree house is a big fat screen t.v with big speakers by it.In the middle of the room is a cute medium sized rug with kittens and puppies.On the ceiling is a disco ball and black lights you could say that my tree house is a party/hang out place.It will probably take forever to build,but if it was built I would live in it forever.
My ideal tree house will include these details. It will smell like oak from the oak tree it is built on. It will look like a barn on the outside, and on the inside it will look like a log cabin. I will have a radio, so it will sound like 106.3 radio station. And finally it will consist of oranges and bananas.
For my tree house I would have it in the middle of the jungle so no one can find it but me. It would be made out of the strongest wood out there, so it will never break or even crack. The only people I will invite out there will be my friends. Some of the sounds you will hear out there are crickets and birds and some wild animals. It will probably be like a zoo out there. Some smells you might smell will be cookies cooking in the oven and some dinner cooked. Some stuff you might touch is the smooth wood and the comfy furniture. Now, that is what I would want my tree house to be like.
My ideal tree house would have a giant tree holding it into the sky. It would have a tan brown wood outside. You need to get into the tree house with either the rope or the elevator inside the trunk. It would have dark brown mahogany furniture. Everything in the room was polished to perfection. The tables gleam so much you can see you reflection in them. There are T.Vs in every room with thick couches you sink into. Everything inside is perfect.
My tree house would be so high i would have an elevator to get up to the top! It would have a dance studio and a trampoline next to it ! It would have a living room with a flat screen t.v.It also would have a super soft blanket it would be as soft as a kitten.And I would want a kitchen with so much food! And last but not least bedrooms and a bathroom.
The best tree house would obviously be mine. My tree house would be hidden by a forest. You would have to cross a river; just like in Narnia. There would be a ten foot ladder to get into the tree house. When you enter you'll be amazed when you see the first room. You'd think it would be so cool by how I described it, but actually its a simple tree house. It probably won't be as big as yours, but my tree house was made with memories not money. To my friends and I our tree house is the world. Antique or not we love it!
Good job I didn´t see any mistakes.
In your second to last sentence you need to add a comma, and nothing else. Good job Frinkydink!
If I could choose to make my dream tree house it would be to have a mini basketball court. I would also have a kitchen and a loft in the tree house so that I can practically live in the tree house. I would always have the tree house smell like the best sent of the season. It would also sometimes smell like someone baked a pie. You could hear the sounds of the birds chirping and the sound of the wild life. There would also be a TV in the house so then you can watch the football games on TV and also enough room to have a Superbowl party. You might also hear the sound of laughter in the tree house. It would be somewhere in Washington state, because they have a lot of trees there and a lot of snow. So then your could have snowball fights outside of the tree house. I think this tree house would be an amazing tree house and it sounds very fun.
I really like your story! One thing I found was that you used the wrong "scent" in the 3rd sentence.
Everything but scent.
If i had a tree house it would have apples growing from the tree and it would be made of redwood and i would have a mini fridge in it and a tv and it would be two stories big. to get up there you would have to climb a hanging ladder. the floor would have a black carpet i would have a big radio and an xbox and there would also be a hatch at the top of the ladder where you needed to know the combo it would be a five number password. Thats what my treehouse would look like.
You need to capitalize your I's.
You need to capitalize your I's and your name.
My tree house would be like a haunted house. The only was you could get up by a set of old creaky stairs. It would be white and look all old. It will look really scary from the outside but, when you get inside it will be really nice and two stories tall. There would be a kitchen in it and two bedrooms and two bathrooms. It would be the best ever made. One thing that would be a feature is there would be a slide into like a garage by it. In that garage there would be a secret tunnel to get inside the house. This is my dream tree house.
In the second sentence the only was made no scene.
My ultimate tree house would be exactly like my dream house but in a tree instead of on the ground. Anyway the first thing I would put in my ultimate tree house is a water bed. I have always wanted a water bed in my room and most of all I wonder what would happen if it popped. I would have a fried chicken vending machine right next to the put put golf coarse in my living room where I also would have a complete collection of all thirty-two NFL football teams. The floors would be black and the walls would be blue. I would have two huskies in basement and I would have two stuffed huskies for them to play with. There would be a bridge leading over to another tree house the exact same in every way. This would be my ultimate tree house.
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If I had a n ultimate tree house it would be made of soft oak wood and painted a silver color with turquoise shutters. My tree house would have an up stairs, down stairs and a main level. The main level would have a big kitchen that has one oven, one microwave, two fridges, a pantry and many, many cabinets. Also on the main level there will be a enormous living room with a big leather couch and a 80 inch flat screen TV. There will always be cookies laying on the kitchen table so my tree house will smell like cookies. Up stairs there will be 5 bedrooms, The first and second bedrooms will have king beds, a TV and a jumbo dresser. The second and third bedroom will have queen beds, a TV and two dressers. And family the 5th bedroom will have two sets of bunk beds one on each side of the room. The down stairs will be just one big family room with a big couch and a movie theater. That will be my perfect tree house!
Hello folks we are going to talk about my awesome tree house. My tree house is the best in the state of Nebraska. I placed my tree house in a big old Cotton Wood tree. My tree house in made out of oak wood. All my neighbor complain about is the sound of great music. I have a have a radio in the tree house. You taste the great candy bar named Snicker. That I eat up there. I have a 72 in. t.v in the tree house. You smell of the Cotton Wood tree. You better come see my tree house some time.
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Good Job;) No mistakes!!
My tree house would have a design of a dome with a basketball court design for the floor. I would have a brand new giant screen tv and a huge couch. I would have a kitchen with a huge fridge. It would be great.
You can't count, you only have four sentences.
My tree house would have a rope ladder going up to it and on the inside it would have a bed room with a T.V. there is also a kitchen where I can eat and cook food. It would be made out of oak wood and it would feal really smooth.
As soon as you walk out the back door you can see the beautiful tree house.As you go up the spiral stair case you don´t hear any traffic just the sounds of birds chirping and the leaves blowing through the air. When you walk inside you see a comfortable blue couch facing towards a big window as you look out it seems you can see everything. As you walk out on the balcony you can smell the crisp fall air and there is a small breeze making it a little cool out side. That is my tree house dream.
My tree house would be in the wild. It would be 20 ft high. It would have an elevator and a bedroom, living room, bathroom, kitchen probably anything that you can imagine The top 2 things that I would bring peaches and my friends.
My ideal tree house would look like any normal tree house on the outside, but on the inside it would be so much different. As you climb up the long, sturdy, pine wood ladder, you would find quite the long climb. When you get to the top, you would see a door, push it up, and as soon as you stick your head in, you can already smell the aroma. It would smell like vanilla and roses. The wall would be made of perfectly sanded pine tree wood. As you swipe your hands across the wall, you can feel how smooth it really is. It would be as big as an average bedroom, but slightly bigger. I would have a small desk in the far left corner, and to the right of the desk, would be a beautiful, dark, stained wood, with tons of books of all genres. In the middle of the desk and shelf, would be a great window with tons of natural light. I would have another shelf, towards the middle of the tree house, with foods that don't perish easily. Finally, I would have a small table with board games and more. That would be my ideal tree house. What's yours?
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When I'm up here, I feel like I could fly into the glistening sunrise or sunset. I feel the breeze and it's refreshing. I feel the happiest when I'm in my tree house. It's just the perfect size for anyone who feels welcome, even the squirrels and birds. I feel free up here. I can taste the burst of chilly wind in my mouth. My tree house is the perfect place to read. It has a little beanbag in the corner, and a few cushions on the ground with a little wooden table in the middle of them. I have a whole bunch of posters hanging on the walls. My cute, little tree house was made just for me. I love to read a good book when I'm up in my little nook. I also feel like I can be me. no drama, to upset me, no arguing, no gossiping, no bullying/ teasing, or anything like that. I am me, and that's okay. I feel free and that no one can do anything to destroy that. My tree house is for me, and just me, sometimes my family is able to come, but rarely. I can touch the leaves scrape my skin, and give me goosebumps. I can relax. Nothing can stand in the way of my freedom, and my reading, and my tree house. That's what my tree house would be like, nothing but an escape and a place where everything has liberty.
If i made my dream tree house it would be awesome! It would Have a lot of natural light roughly 20 windows with a sky light. Three bedrooms two bathrooms and a ginormous living room. It will have a stair way onto the porch and a steel door with a finger pint lock on it. In side would open up to the living room that will have an x-box one and a bunch of models of my favorite movie characters such as Indominus Rex, Master Chief, and Shay Patrick.
The "I" in your first sentence needs to be capitalized.
I built the tree-house on a apple tree. Even thought the tree is big the house its self is not so big. Its an oval connected to the tree with reddish wood. To get in there is later under the tree witch goes all the way up to the center of the house. Inside there its rounded with the smell of apples. Outside you can see the fall leaves falling to the ground.
Its in the second sentence is supposed to be It's.
My perfect tree house would be 7 stories high. On the first floor I would have the party room. Every night we would have a party. On the second floor there would be 4 bedrooms and a hot tub. On the third floor there would be the relaxing room. The relaxing room consists of a pool table, a gaming system, 6 couches, a snack bar and a 100 inch TV. On the fourth floor there would be 4 bedrooms and a pool. On the fifth floor there would be a bowling alley/ movie theater. It would be part of the party idea. Every night after the party we would all go play some bowling and then we would all watch a movie. On the sixth floor there would be an all you can eat buffet the consists of 3 maids and everything you can even imagine to eat. On the seventh floor there is the most amazing room of all it is my room. It contains the sweet smell of pumpkin spice. My King size bed feels like the soft wing of an angel. When you look at my house you will want to live with me for ever. You can hear the birds chirping from my balcony window. My house tastes like pumpkin pie. If you want you can come stay with me I don't mind.
King bed shouldn't be capitalized.
Forever should be one word, and I don't think that king in My king sized bed feels like the soft wing of an angel should be capitalized. Other than those 2 things, great job! Your tree house sounds great!
No errors.GREAT JOB!